# data[].attributes.headline
Memo 1 is just one big paragraph and has no commas. memo 2 has a much better structure

# data[].attributes.subject
Memo 1 is just one big paragraph and has no commas. memo 2 has a much better structure

# data[].attributes.body
Memo 1 is arrogant, not clear and there is a lack of presentation.
The subject is short but unclear.

Memo 2 even thou doesn't have an introduction has a better structure, there is a clearer focus and an actual proposition.

# data[].attributes.body
Ellie
Henry
Sharon
Memo 1
Not pad detail to attention
Not very clear
Too wordy
grammar is not the best

Memo 2

Clear objectives, much easier to understand. The structure is clear.