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Try to check the sound before you record because it was a bit hard to understand

*You missed a couple of s in third person in simple present

*In life can happen everything (this sentence has order mistakes)

You sounded more fluent now which is good. Still, continue practicing your rhythm and stress

VG

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The straight line

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Guys, I liked your video a lot! The editing and idea was great. I had some fun watching. I guess you guys followed all the instructions in terms of language. You selected an appropriate camera angle and the sound was fine this time.

Maybe the tone was a little calm when you guys were speaking, considering the video had those clips of emergencies. You could pay attention to that.

Francisco: You did a good job in terms of diction and sometimes you stressed words accordingly. Still, you need to work on fluency.

Darío: I actually noticed that your diction was worse in some cuts than in others. Sometimes you filled pauses with the sound EHHH and your stress was very Spanish-like, so this is the most important aspect for you to improve.

Very good.

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I am aware that my listening it's not excellent, my worst problem it's to understand all the details and sometimes there are some new words really dificult to conect (linking sounds).

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Uploaded by Edgar Dario Perez Diaz on 2015-10-13.

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You used an expression from the book.
Hobbies are practiCING
You used a tag question but not correctly.
The word orthography is spelling.
The preposition for internet is on.
You didn't use past perfect
You said: don't are
You didn't use an intensifier.

You were pausing a lot

Pronunciation: DOs.

GOOD.

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Homework