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we need to practice the source analysis.

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Always ensure to link everything back to the origin + purpose, and always have a formal tone - Ahmad

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Great effort. Excellent sentence "the value of the purpose of the source" this tells me you have referred back to the Origin and purpose. Well done. Can we trust all newspapers? Limitations... propaganda, subjective. The language was improved from previous work well done. Try to use more connecting language like : 'therefore,' 'this is because', 'Furthermore'. Your assessment of the credibility of the source had some excellent points. But some more work on the limitations is needed. Really well done. This is very close to being a 5 but the level of analysis in the final question was not in critical enough in terms of the limitations and values.

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Manage your time well while writing a OPVL. Not finishing the task in time will cost you many marks.

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Give an explanation after you make a statement.

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refer your values and limitations back to the origin and purpose

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refer your values and limitations back to the origin and purpose

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Make sure that you give a long, detailed explanation of any part of a OPVL since when I didn’t that cost me a mark. -Abdullah

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Use som more compelling language and transitional words to add effects

Improve on value for source B

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Link the Value and the Limitation back to the origin and purpose

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Write in details but do not mess around go directly to the important point

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Have a strong persuasive introduction

Transitional words

Academic vocabulary

Always refer back to the origin when talking about the limitations and values

-ritisha

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Use academic language
Detailed information
Give at least 2 values/ limitations of the origin and purpose

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Use transitional words

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What do we have to write about someone help me

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What do we have to write about someone help me

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Use more compelling language to add effects

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Use a lot of transitions words

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Use a strong persuasive essay

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Always use academic vocabulary and add transitional words, always be formal