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Write your evaluation for the project in the paper rubric, then give a score on Padlet according to the format below.

Positive: _________
Need work: _________

Example:
Positive: really good pictures, convincing argument, concise information, have work cite.

Need work: the explanation wasn't clear at______. What do you mean by_____? There are no work cite, too many words and not enough visual presentation etc...

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It would be better if they added audio or presented but good job

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I think they could have done better

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it has nice pictures but it's too short

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The presentation was cool but short.

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It was more of a slideshow rather than an actual story, but it still had nice information to give about seals. Next time, double check for grammar errors, like the usage of "there." That's about it, still really good information about seals.

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Their story did not stay on the topic of the project at all.

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The presentation wasn't good in all topics, also little better on the audio.

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it was good

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I like it very nice could have done
better

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They did a good job and it was a really good story

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Very unique and interesting story, however, it could've been better. I believe adding music in the background would've put in more emotion and care for the plot. Overall, at least it's something different! Great job.

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it was a good story

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Jordan and kimberly
We really liked the pictures and plot and information.

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No audio and hard to read but overall great story very interesting and good job guys

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I feel like if there was voice, it would be a whole better because kids would rather listen to someone reading the story rather than reading words. Overall, the plot and grammar was very good, just have voice! It was a little too wordy.

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There story was good.

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It would be better with pictures but has a lot of detail and is a good story

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good

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its a good story but it needs pictures

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There book was good.

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the book needs pictures to add a good imagination to the reader. it was pretty good.

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It was great

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Only one picture, but the story is very good and I believe students would enjoy reading it. The text isn't a lot plus someone can read it to them, very good story overall.

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very good