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Although remote learning offers more convenient and safer ways of educating kids it instead hinders kids academic success and social skills compared to in person teaching.

kids (students)

students, comma

not enough reasons

Remote learning should not be encouraged because it hinders academic success, it hinders social skills, ....2 more reasons

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Cell phones should be banned in the classroom because the device does distract students, decreases positive social interactions, and does not reduce cyberbullying.

ok

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Rishi Patel - Should Cellphones be banned in classrooms or not.?

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Rishi Patel - Should Cellphones be banned in classrooms or not.?

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Cell phones should not be completely banned; instead, schools should create smarter and more specialized rules to protect communication between families, teach students to be responsible with technology, and build them to become ready for the real-world.

ok--a little verbose

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Clinton W. Thesis Statement - Driverless Cars

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Clinton W. Thesis Statement - Driverless Cars

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Although automation may provide promising advancements, driverless cars should not be allowed on the road until the algorithms are ensured to provide sufficient management to complex situations and variables in real-time.

Driverless cars should not be allowed because...three or four reasons

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Michelle Swift - Cellphones in Classroom

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Michelle Swift - Cellphones in Classroom

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Cell phones may be limited in school for education's sake, but students should be allowed to have their cell phones accessible during school hours.

List reasons

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Cell phones should not be completely banned; instead, schools should create smarter and more specialized rules to protect communication between families, teach students to be responsible with technology, and build them to become ready for the real-world.

a little verbose

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Cell phones should be banned from classrooms in K–college settings because they distract students, reduce academic performance, and disrupt meaningful classroom engagement.

ok

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Excluding the aptitude of technology exposes downfalls on neglected opportunities for the future. Cell phones should be strictly prohibited on school campuses K-college during instructional hours due to disturbances in particular to academic dishonesty, impaction on mental health, and cyberbullying across platforms.

thesis is only last sentence

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Kids should be allowed to have their phones in school, and it is their parents’ job to decide how they use it.

no, you need reasons

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Cell phones should not be permitted in school because they simply provide too many distractions, keep students from reaching their full academic potential, and can hinder students from focusing on their studies.

ok

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Self driving vehicles should be embraced in order to further roadway safety standards, to increase availability for people unable to drive themselves, and to expand our potential as a society in the logistical vehicle industry.

ok

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Driverless cars should not be used because they pose serious safety risks, lack the ability to make complex ethical decisions in emergencies, and are vulnerable to technological failures and cyberattacks.

ok

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Jesus Vargas - Argumentative Thesis Statement 

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Jesus Vargas - Argumentative Thesis Statement 

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Cell phones should not be banned from classrooms because they maintain safety, allow for efficient communication between instructors and students, and can be used as a tool to help promote learning.

awkward wording

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Virtual learning is an effective alternative to traditional learning because it provides flexible schedules, personalized learning, and it is cheaper in cost.

ok

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Roxanna Martinez - Cellphones in the Classroom

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Roxanna Martinez - Cellphones in the Classroom

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Given the rise of online digital learning methods, schools should allow the limited and structured use of cellphones in the classroom to promote education and ensure the safety of students.

You need more reasons.

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Cell phones should not be banned in grades kindergarten through twelfth grade because they allow communication with parents and allow students to live the same way that society does through technology.

You need more reasons.

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In order to protect the health and minds of American children, cell phones in schools should be banned for promoting academic dishonesty, student violence, and negative mental health.

awkward wording

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Cell phones should be banned in classrooms for students below the sixth grade because they reduce attention, hinder social development, and disrupt the learning environment.

ok

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Virtual learning should not be encouraged because the virtual learner may experience isolation, a lack of hands-on learning, and may not gain efficient time management skills.

okay--may need one more reasons

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Evelyn Hill-Cellphones in the Classroom K-College

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Evelyn Hill-Cellphones in the Classroom K-College

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The use of phones in the classroom should not be prohibited, instead schools should adopt smarter policies that recognize these devices as tools essential for safety and communication in addition to providing an opportunity to learn about digital responsibility and self regulation.

Your reasons are not solid and clear.

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If parents and politicians want to raise honest, respectful, and nonviolent kids, cell phone use should be banned during the school day.

Give three or four specific reasons.