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"Tasks of mass endurance" was a very nice phrase used in paragraph 3. Nice diction!

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Essay #1: Diction Example (Melody and Gracie)

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Essay #1: Diction Example (Melody and Gracie)

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"In Jane Eyre, a Victorian novel written by Charlotte Bronte, Jane changes the narrative of inherent sex-based stereotypes and trailblazes her own path for love." (Introduction)

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"His description of Jane as an alien and interloper is additionally a large contributor to her attitude later in life, as she consistently feels like an outsider, or that there is something wrong with her because she is unsatisfied with tedium and stagnancy..."
(body paragraph #2)

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The phrase, "intrinsic tenacity" was lovely and worked very well in the context. Excellent diction!

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“....Mr. Brocklehurst chains her into female conformity ideologies and reminds her of his power to publicly ostracize and humiliate her as a man in control.”

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We noticed that the author used a metaphor to describe Jane and called her "a strong willed and uncompromising flower". Throughout the essay it talks about how Jane bloomed into her own individuality, and it alludes to the flower metaphor. This was good diction and syntax.

-Bella and Ximena

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"Breaks the seal on her life" is a very powerful phrase.

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"Through Jane's experiences with men...she escapes...and flourishes into her true self as an image of feminist individuality" the sentence structure listing the experiences then the effects of the men in her life emphasizes the point of the essay, and her word choice in the end of the sentence is great diction!

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Two examples of syntax we enjoyed were the description of Jane being a "strong-willed and uncompromising flower" and the reference to standards of feminism to "blockade the nurturing and blooming of her own individuality"

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“The blatant sexism showcased by John Reed in Victorian times serves as a driving force for Jane to spread her wings and fly above the general scene.”

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"Mr. Brocklehurst is additionally Jane’sfirst example of a true patriarchal gender hierarchy and gives Jane her first taste of the realworld, in which men grip so tightly their power and lose sight of true morals within."

"alien/interloper"

"feeling of fresh air that they gave each other"

Love comparison to a shiny penny

"solace can bud from her solitude"

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“With inspiration from her life’s acquaintances, she develops into a woman of faith who splits open the rungs of her cage, delivers a revolutionary, message to readers, and in the end flies toward her chosen home.”

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Diction: "....does not allow Victorian societal standards of feminism to blockade the nurturing and blooming of her own individuality and personal growth."

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"Jane exhibits evident annoyance with and opposition against her expected assumption of servitude to male influence."

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"The domineering and manipulative nature of Mr. Brocklehurst is especially crucial to Jane's eventual overcoming of male dominance as he asserts her challenge, and is the first man she must test her independence against and learn how to best fight her battles without loosing her footing."

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In both essays, we enjoyed the transitioning between each topic that was explored, as well as the manner in which they supplemented their claims and metaphors with quotations relevant to the topic.

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Essay #1: Analysis Example (Melody and Gracie)

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Essay #1: Analysis Example (Melody and Gracie)

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"When Jane first begins to love, as seen in this quote, her love for another consumes her, as she finally feels she has reached intellectual equality and common ground with another and loves him with such pure and unrelenting loyalty that the slightest of error or fallout in their relationship leads to passionate acts of sorrow when they lack means to communicate through their issues." (Body Paragraph 2)

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"He attempts to project his hopes for what people will see with him and Jane as societal equals by forcing her into a box of high status that she does not belong to and does not wish to belong to, and teaches her that even the purest of loves can have their failure and fallouts."

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"Their love is something seen as shiny, youthful, and new, like a newborn child or a shiny coin, and this feeling of fresh air that they gain from each other leads Rochester to project the idea of shiny and bright things into their relationship..."
(body paragraph #3)

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Both essays expressed impressive figurative language which really brought Jane's character to life. Additionally, both contained thorough analysis and mature vocabulary.

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"she escapes from the clutches of domineering men and flourishes into her true self as an image of feminist individuality"
"unsatisfied with tedium and stagnancy"

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"The protagonist grows from an internalized servant to an outspoken authority figure with the aid of John Reed, switching presumed societal roles for the inherited dignity of all humans."

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"Their love is something seen as shiny, youthful, and new, like a newborn child or a shiny coin, and this feeling of fresh air that they gain from each other leads Rochester to project the idea of shiny and bright things into their relationship, trying to forever preserve their new feelings and turn Jane into something she is not."

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"The domineering and manipulative nature of Mr. Brocklehurst is especially crucial to Jane's eventual overcoming of male dominance as he asserts her challenge, and is the first man she must test her independence against, and learn how to best fight her battles without losing her footing."

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"At an early age, Jane's youth and gender is already exploited by the masculine desire to dominate, as seen with her stepbrother's abuse. Her weaknesses are insulted and her intrinsic tenacity is intimidated into painful silence by by John's Reed's tyranny." (Body Paragraph 1)

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"When Jane becomes the governess at Thorn-field, she is again subordinate, this time to a man named Rochester, the head of the house, with whom she rapidly forms and intellectually stimulating and refreshing relationship."

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"The protagonist grows from an internalized servant to an outspoken authority figure with the aid of John Reed, witching presumed societal roles for the inherited dignity of all humans."

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"Mr. Brocklehurst is especially crucial to Jane's eventual overcoming of male dominance as he asserts her challenge..." this analysis opens the door to examining gender roles in Jane's life.

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Essay #2 Syntax Example (Melody and Gracie)

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Essay #2 Syntax Example (Melody and Gracie)

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"Unlike prior women's quiet endurance of the constant blow, Jane's character views John Reed's blow as unnatural and inhumane, meeting it with just as much force and resilience." (Body Paragraph 1)

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"masculine desire to dominate"

"lit by acquired light of faith"

"becomes an example of what male beauty is supposed to be"

"depths of love despite society"

the last sentence was a great wrap

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"Her example helps Jane to perceive this light as a sign of hope for the future and proof that there truly is someone watching out for her, even when her decision, such as the one to leave Mr. Rochester and embark on a personal journey, are supported only by her knowledgable conscience."

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"split open the rungs of her cage" diction in the introduction
"Janes life culminates into a fulfilled quest for love that exemplifies the common hope of all people-one is altogether human." - wonderful way to end, truly brought together all their thoughts in one sentence.

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"Helen Burns rises again in Bronte's miraculous narrative of light overcoming darkness, pushing Jane to develop trust and the invisible along with her improved capacity to love and be loved through the guiding eyes of Mr. Rochester."

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"His description of Jane as an alien and interloper is additionally a large contributor to her attitude later in life as she consistently feels like an outsider, or that something is wrong with her because she is unsatisfied with tedium and stagnancy, and ultimately wants more out of her life." (Body Paragraph 1)

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"The domineering and manipulative nature of Mr. Brocklehurst is especially crucial to Jane's eventual overcoming of male dominance as he asserts her challenge, and is the first man she must test her independence against and learn how to best fight her battles without losing her footing."

This essay was about Jane breaking away from Victorian stereotypes and standards for women. It also emphasizes how Jane doesn't let men control her life.

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"John Reed serves as an antonym to what a good man looks like and how men should treat with woman."

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Two examples of diction we liked in this essay are "refuge in the empathetic and inclusive Christianity" and "assumption of servitude".

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"When Jane first begins to love, as seen in this quote, her love for another consumer her, as she finally feels she has reached intellectual equality and common ground with another and loves him with such pure and unrelenting loyalty that the slightest of error or fallout in their relationship leads to passionate acts of sorrow when they lack to communicate through their issues."

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"At an early age, Jane's youth and gender is already exploited by the masculine desire to dominate, as seen with her stepbrother's abuse." The use of the word 'exploit' conveys the message of male dominance over Jane so well in my opinion; especially shows the abuse she experienced at the hands of John Reed.

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"The protagonist grows to view love not as a commitment to self-inhibition, but instead as the acceptance of the human condition of imperfection and forgiveness of mistakes born from that imperfection."

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We thought that both essays were incredibly created and well stated- we like that the second essay was about her individuality and femenism proved by only her experiences with men.

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Within each place, she meets a myriad of characters who shape her from an inconsolable, passionate and rash child into a mature and outspoken woman who has a deep sense of what is right and wrong, and like a strong-willed and uncompromising flower, does not allowed Victorian societal standards of feminism to blockade the nurturing and blooming of her own individuality and personal growth. Great syntax and diction within this sentence!

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Essay #2 Analysis Example (Melody and Gracie)

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Essay #2 Analysis Example (Melody and Gracie)

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"The protagonist grows to view love not as a commitment to self inhibition, but instead as the acceptance of the human condition of imperfection and forgiveness of mistakes born from that imperfection." (Body Paragraph 3)

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Sticking to a theme throughout the essay, relating back to a central idea throughout the essay.

Powerful language and poetic references made it an enjoyable read.

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An analysis example we enjoyed is "Jane who never before had knowledge of what it was like to be in company with a benign force, finds Helen's help at Lowood as a candle lit in the darkness of solitude."

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I really enjoyed the metaphors in Essay 2. Especially in body paragraph 2, I enjoyed the light metaphor flowing through the entire paragraph.

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Both essays displayed an excellent balance and flow throughout, which really brings all of Jane's personality into the spotlight. The figurative language that was sprinkled throughout brought the whole essay to life.

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Just overall, the diction and choice of words in both essays, especially essay #1, are significantly impressive.

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"Jane, who had never before had knowledge of what it was like to be in company with a benign force, finds Helen's help at Lowood as a candle lit in the darkness of solitude."

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"Unlike prior women's quiet endurance of the constant blow, Jane's character views John Reed blow as unnatural and inhumane, meeting its with just as much force and resilience."

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"This quote additionally demonstrates how Jane is forced to mature herself and learn to fight her battles as an independent woman because no one around her is there to support her"

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"Jane changes the narrative of inherent sex-based stereotypes and trailblazes her own path for love."

"She addtionally dispels his claims"

"She reconstructs and reestablishes the experiences that have shaped her, changing the narrative in a light of growth and respect towards herself, as she takes both the good and bad of the life that she has been given and molds it into the dreams and wishes she has."

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"Their love is something seen as shiny,
youthful, and new, like a newborn child or a shiny coin, and this feeling of fresh air that they
gain from each other leads Rochester to project the idea of shiny and bright things into their
relationship, trying to forever preserve their new feelings and turn Jane into something she is not."

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"The image of the split chestnut tree finally becomes dignified in its relation to Mr. Rochester, who Jane still finds wondrous as ever after his injury from the Thornfield fire."

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"Although Jane's growth towards independence is not always linear, and there are many harsh and taxing moments, she eventually learns how to prioritize herself and her dreams, finding utmost solace and peace in both comforts of pure, honest love and her assurance in her feminist individuality."

This concluding sentence summarizes and highlights the powerful points made in this essay about the men who impacted Jane and allowed her to grow despite their treatment.

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"Jane exhibits evident annoyance with and opposition against her expected assumption of servitude to male influence. The blatant sexism showcased by John Reed in Victorian times serves as a driving for for Jane to spread her wings and fly above the general scene."

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"Throughout the novel, she is commonly refered to as a caged bird restlessly searchuing for a ay to obtain freedom from societal restraints, a title that she does not take positively." (body paragraph 1)
"Leading her onto a path lit by the acquired light of faith." (body paragraph 3)
"Triumph over conformity." (conclusion paragraph)

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"Additionally, he is the first one to plant the seed in Jane that conformity and being a 'plain jane' is what she must be and what she will forver remain"

"Mr. Brocklehurst is additionally Jane's first example of a true patriarchal gender hierarchy and gives Jane her first taste of the real world, in which men grip so tightly their power and lost sight of true morals within."

"Their love is something seen as shiny, youthful, and new, like a newborn child or a shiny coin, and this feeling of fresh air that they gain from each other leads Rochester to project the idea of shiny and bright things into their relationship, trying to forever preserve their new feelings and turn Jane into something she is not."

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The smooth transitions as well as the diction (excellent word choice) made the essays flow and sound eloquent.

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"Her example helps Jane to perceive this light as a sign of hope for the future and proof that there truly is someone watching out for her, even when her decisions, such as the one to leave Mr. Rochester and embark on a personal journey, are supported only by her knowledgeable conscience."

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We really enjoyed the hook on Essay 2, because it brought up an interesting fact that the reader didn't know much about, and it relates to the story perfectly.

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The mention of the meesenger-pigeon in the introduction was interesting and we saw the reference of it throughout the essay. We liked how it interconnected in her relationships and life.
"splits open the rungs of her cage"
"her intrinsic tenacity is intimidated into painful silence by John Reed's tyranny."
"triumph over conformity"
"Jane's life culminates into a fulfilled quest for love that exemplifies the common hope for all people"

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"Youth and gender is already exploited by the masculine desire to dominate." (second body paragraph)
"The protagonist grows to view love not as a commitment to self-inhibition, but instead as the acceptance of the human condition of impection and forgivenesss of mistakes born from that imperfection." (third body paragraph)

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We really liked the hooks of each one and how they stuck with that topic/theme throughout the essay. The comparison to the bird in essay #2 was great.