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In this tutorial, my problem is mainly with the second argument, that is, monopoly. At first I suggested in a very general way that monopoly is bad for business, but what is really bad for business is the depletion of innovation and regulation in many aspects brought by monopoly, which should be focused on.

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In this tutorial, my problem is mainly with the order of the main sentences, because my exposition section is mainly about the advantages brought by the M&A and then about the potential disadvantages that these advantages may be difficult to achieve or in the process of achieving them, however, in my main sentence only the advantages are presented first, while the main sentence of the disadvantages is placed in the essay, in order to tell the reader more intuitively what I am mainly talking about in this paragraph, I should use a twist to include both advantages and disadvantages as the main sentence.