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I like how you added so many facts about Bill Gates next time add fun facts about Bill Gates

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Great Job adding about ada Lovelace next time add how you felt about Ada Lovelace

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i like how you explaind and sited evdence a helpfull next step would be give your opinion.

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Aiden I like that you had fun facts.A helpful next step would be that you put in charter emotion

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Aiden I like that you had fun facts.A helpful next step would be that you put in charter emotion

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I like that you used strong facts about Bill Gates. Why didn't you add when Bill Gates got hacked?
Samantha Wagner

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Great job using cool facts and citing where you found the facts.
A helpful next step would be to add more facts and better formation.
from: MICHAEL A.

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Great Job on adding strong facts about bill gates next time add how you feel about Bill Gates

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Great job with your information like bill gates was interested in  computer programing when he was 13 years old. A helpful next step would be to put more information about Bill Gates.
from,Samantha C

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Great job using cool facts and good examples of

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Luis, I think you did a great job on your presentation. Great job having interesting and important information, when you stated Ada Lovelace's legacy. A helpful next step would be to use a grade level apropriate vocabulary. You went way to high with your words. I didn't even know what those words meant.

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Good job i love how you added how Ada Lovelace got started. A helpful next step would be how she got in to computer programming.

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Great job writing a fun fact like you said when he was born.A helpful next step would be to add grade level   appropriate vocabulary.

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Great job using those images they were very cool. Can you tell me more information   about bill gates please Michael.
From Daniel Anello

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I think you did really well when you explained when Zuckerburg launched Facebook and stated your opinion  and sited evidence. a helpful next step would be to tell me more about his legacy.
-from Aiden

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What did Paul help Bill Gates with?
When was he caught hacking?

Great Job showing how he made the microsoft word.
Josephine C.

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you did a great job using facts about James Gosling and writing paragraphs about him . A helpful next step would be to add a title to the slide that matches your writing. From, Ema Sata

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Great job putting strong facts like when you said Bill Gates co founder of Microsoft word and that tells me that you did a lot of   research to find that type of information

By: Matthew

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You did a great job on using facts about Bill Gates and how he got into computers," A local company gave the school some computers and set up a computer lab." A helpful next step would be to add  some more about

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great job adding so many facts and info in your powerpoint a next step would be to add some of your own words.
how did microsoft get popular? like was it introduced or something?
from: zuzana pancik

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You did a great job using character emotion when you said, "give example."  A helpful next step would be to add figurative language by...