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WWW: Good grammar and vocabulary
EBI: Check some of the spelling(look should be looking)

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WWW: good article
EBI: write shorter it is too long

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WWW: Good clickbait title, will attract people.
EBI: it can be longer

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WWW: The content was quite good but there were some mistakes
EBI: Improve on the grammar

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WWW: Good structure and use of language
EBI: Too many random adverts!!!!!!!

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WWW: many reason to support your article.
EBI: Your main article was too long, try to make some bullet point.

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WWW: title is very attractive, you included the culture of Chinese new year and give a brief introduction.
EBI: it can be a lot more interesting if you describe what happen during the process of making jiao zi

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WWW: Good idea and great vocabulary used.
EBI: Check your ending and spellings.

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www: well use of adjectives
EBI: few grammar mistakes

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WWW: Good idea and imagination.
EBI: Some spelling mistakes, and some grammar problems. Maybe you should read it through next time.

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WWW: plenty of ways for suggesting and it looks quite real,also you have written some other websites.
EBI: what is the samsung galaxy note 7 for?

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You won't believe how industrial expert assess these assessment!!!!!! ;D

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You won't believe how industrial expert assess these assessment!!!!!! ;D

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By Andrew
-Toby
Very nice piece of writing, however there is not a lots of clickbait in the main essay. You can put reference of sponsored companies, links of other article and more persuasive techniques and be careful about grammar.
-Alex
Nice piece of writing with lots of techniques. However your title may need to shorter and more catchy, more persuasive techniques need to included in the main articles too. Also beware about your grammar.
-Callie
Nice piece of writing with good writing techniques and clickbait techniques.

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Nice piece of writing. Many persuasive techniques.However, there are some sentences doesn't make sense

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www: Write something that was fake but it looks real.

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*Rebecca:
Nice piece of writing

*Velvet:
WWW: good vocabularies, depicts the situation well
EBI:

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CALLIE-
WWW: Lots of evidence and correct grammar, punctuation etc. Interesting title
EBI: Stronger adjectives
ANNI-
WWW: Strong adjectives, powerful title, good punctuation and grammar.
EBI: More interesting adjectives and less repetition.
TOBY-
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EBI: