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Example: Hansel & Gretel The Witches Escape

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Example: Hansel & Gretel The Witches Escape

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I like the detail descriptions that you provided. I could really picture the story in my mind.

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i like how it was worded, and the detail.

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I like all the dialogue and its funny and cute

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The description in the beggining is really good! I could paint a picture in my mind very well!

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i like how jayli put the whole story into character by how she changed different parts and kept some parts and the story still came out good with all the new stuff she put

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I really like the way that you showed and painted a good picture in people brains with the good discriptions

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I love the cute pictures and the diolouge

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I liked how the curse changed I thought it was more interesting

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I liked the way you put the pictures to match up the story and how well the punctuation was

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I really liked that she lost her glove and not the slipper. I thought it was cute at the end.

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i really like how she changed the whole story and made it into her own and gave us a good discription on what was happening

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I like how the wolf made a plane to billed a tool that can freeze granny. That part was really funny.

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I like the way that you made a troll seem like The good guy when trolls are normally pictured as evil

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Your choice of wording is so great! It really really adds emotion to the story!

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i like how the whole story came into place by how it took a turn from him lying and it changing

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I think the story was very cute

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i liked how detailed the characters emotions were and how you could always know how they feel

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It was very creative and funny

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I like how you provided good setting details. I also like how the story also had good dialogue.

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it was amazing. i loved the way it was worded and the pictures.

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I love the twist at the end! I wasn´t expecting it at all! It made me want to read it again!

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I think the story was very cute and funny

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it was amazing how the pictures were reused from the original Cinderella. and the wording was also great

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I really liked that you gave so much detail at the beginning. It really hooked me.

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I really liked how the wolf was putting so much emotion into his machine and the way he danced after was great too

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I like how you put onomotanpias in your story and how there is a lot of dialogue

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The little wolf and the The Big Bad Pigs

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The little wolf and the The Big Bad Pigs

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I like the way the roles were reversed and the detail that was put into the story

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I really liked the detail you gave the reader, it was very descriptive.

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i like how he put all the emotions the characters had by like when they where mad he would show it and say it in harder words then normal mad words

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i liked the dialogue because you can always know who is saying what

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I liked the pictures and how it was worded

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I like how the story flows very nicely. Another thing I like about the story is that you used onomatopoeia which made the story easier the imagine.

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I like how you put dialouge on all most every slide

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The pictures went with the story and event

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I thought it was very creative and I think that they made it better then the original story.

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it was a good story and it shows dedication how she went so far to meet the prince

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I love the way your story transitions so nicely! And the description of the setting is so clear!

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I love how it was just a whole pretend game at the end!

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I really liked the story you have created here. For example, how the queen guessed the name correctly but he lied. I really wasn´t expecting that! I thought he was gonna admit and the queen would have her child back.

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I liked the way that he made the fox determined and how he persevered

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I like how the picture represent the story and all of the dialogue you put in your story

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i like how you changed the bears into elves and how Goldie locks needed gold

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I like that all the pictures match the text it was a very good story

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I liked that it was simple but good. I don´t know what it means when it says the instead of bears there are locks but it´s interesting.

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i like how he changed up the story and turned it all around and how he added a lot of information about it and i could easily picture it all

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My favorite part was in the river! The way you wrote the setting gave me a visual picture in my mind!

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I liked how the story went into a sad mood going up into a happy mood the more you read

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I really like how you used CREEK at the beginning it really hooked me to your story.

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I really like the pea and me because it had a really good ending to it and I just want to read it again

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Adding Hansel and Gretel at the end was such a good idea! I would have never thought of that!

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it was a good story and there were good twists and turns

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i liked that it was funny and i liked how the pictures matched the story