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Reading was a little soft however great attempt team! Could have emphasis more on the tone of voice to get into the mood of the scene.

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the reading - can be better. the sound part is a good point

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The reading could be better but it's a good attempt at it. What I'm confused about is why there was such a huge pause in the middle of your recording. It seemed unnecessary. Analysis wise, good effort. However, i feel like there could be more substance to them since they are too brief

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The reading itself was good but kinda muffled and it was hard to hear fully when they are trying to say properly

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I think the reading could be better/clearer but the analysis is okay!

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I had slight difficult hearing the actors at some parts but it was overall well done.

The three dramatic elements were identified well and they applied well to the scene. However they could be more detailed in the explanation.

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i love the tone of each character which really emphacise the sound element. The rhythem was also great!

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When Blanche met the doctor and the matron thinking she was going to meet Shep Huntleigh. She tries to escape both the doctor and the matron, while they try to take her away.

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As Eunice meets The Doctor and The Matron, there is whispering.
The loud voice of Stanley shocks Blanche. Stanley says “Hey Mitch come to!” (to Blanche).

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When Blanche asked if the grapes are washed and Eunice said that they were from the french market. However, Blanche claims that it doesn’t mean that the grapes were washed.