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Parents feedback
1www:nice descriptive story
2www:very imaginative

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1ebi:some parts made sense
2ebi: using the right punctuation

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Www:the adventure was exciting and good adjectives

Ebi: if the ending was more interesting

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WWW: it was captivating
WWW: Well structured
WWW: Highly imaginative
EBI: it can be a bit more dramatic.
Zarr Shahid 5N

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www:Flowency is good.
www:Also accent Is good.
Ebi:Need expressions.
Ebi:And handwriting.

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(1)WWW: You have included a lot of high-level vocabulary. (2)WWW: Your story makes sense and it flows well.
(1)EBI: You could have used personification to create more drama. (2) EBI: Your sentences could have been more elaborated.

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WWW: a lot of events were covered in short spam

EBI: more elaboration on the plane’s emergency landing would have been nice

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1)WWW: Good content
2)WWW: Good way of explaining people’s experience

1)EBI: Avoid capital letters in the middle of the sentences
2)EBI: Check punctuations

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Dad : www- your story flows well and has high vocabulary
EBI-you could try and work on your writing speed
Mom: www-you have made the reader feel like they were a part of the story and you have used many adjectives in your work
EBI-you could use more metaphors and the five senses

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Www 1.Good imagination.
2.descriptive skills was upgraded.
Ebi
1.More details and punctuation.

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WWWNo.1)Story makes sense and developes hard work
WWWNo.2)It builds up to a scene in the sentence
EBINo.1)you could fix your handwriting
EBINo.2) you could add less dialogue

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The story is nice but has some spelling mistakes that has to be addressed and enhanced. The moral as well as the journey of the story is creative with tragedies and a happy ending fulfilling the chapters of the story.

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Punctuation was in its place
EBI:Capital letters need to be in its place

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Ww- excellent imagination
Ww- detailed description put in words

Ebi- spellings mistakes and more expressions would have been nice.

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Dads feedback:www(1)good control of exitment www(2)story build up ebi(1)punctuation ebi(2)spelling