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Please share the score that you have given to my zero draft then publish your modified version

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I expect you are creative writers.

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Score and evaluate the modified version of the professor's story

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Score and evaluate the modified version of the professor's story

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I decided to make a quick trip to the store to pick up a few things. As I entered, my eyes were immediately drawn to the vibrant display of flowers. Unable to resist their beauty, I grabbed a bouquet and continued on my way. My next destination was the meat department, where I carefully selected some fresh cuts for dinner. Satisfied with my choices, I proceeded towards the checkout. However, as I made my way to the exit, a sudden realization struck me like a lightning bolt - I had completely forgotten to buy bread.

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I set out on a quaint little journey, The sun danced merrily overhead, casting a warm glow upon the bustling streets as I made my way to the local market.

Upon arriving, I was immediately captivated by the vibrant array of blooms that adorned the flower stall.

I found myself utterly enchanted, carefully selecting the most beautiful bouquet to grace my humble abode.

With my floral treasures in hand, I continued my quest, weaving through the crowded aisles towards the meat counter.

Alas, in my culinary excitement, I became so consumed by the meaty marvels that I quite forgot the humble loaf of bread that was the original purpose of my visit.

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On a sunny morning, Layla decided to go to the grocery store to buy some essentials. She grabbed her reusable bag and headed to the nearby store. Upon entering, the first thing that caught her eye was the beautiful flowers at the entrance. The daisies and violets, with their vibrant colors, filled the air with their fragrant scent. She decided to buy a bouquet to decorate her table at home.

Next, Layla headed to the meat section to choose some fresh meat for dinner. She stood there, contemplating the different types of meat on display, and finally picked some beef steaks. She placed the meat in her cart and continued her tour of the store.

As she wandered through the aisles, she passed by the bakery section, but her thoughts about what to prepare for dinner made her completely forget to buy bread. She continued her tour and reached the seafood section, where the smell of the sea filled the air. She stopped to inhale the fresh scent of fish and shellfish, reminding her of her beach trips during the summer.

After finishing her shopping and returning home, Layla began unpacking her groceries, only to realize she had forgotten the bread. She laughed at herself and said, "No worries, I'll go back tomorrow to get it." And so, Layla spent her day among flowers and the scent of the sea, promising herself not to forget the bread next time.

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Early in the morning, with the birds chirping, I got up early to bring some breakfast for my parents. I discovered that some things were missing. I looked at the note my mother writes to my father when something is missing in the house. I decided to surprise them and go get the missing items and prepare a delicious dinner table for them. I headed towards the market and came across a man selling flowers. I remembered that my mother loves yellow roses on the dining table, so I decided to take them to her. Please, do you have yellow roses? The seller of roses said: Yes, I have as many roses as you want. I said I want 7, the number of my loving family.

I headed towards the meat section. Today, Friday, we want a luxurious lunch that brings us together. I took 4 kilos of fresh meat and went to the vegetable section, which is the section where there is what my mother wrote in the note. I took potatoes, tomatoes, and eggplant, in addition to milk and cheese. Then I got into my car to go home.At the red light, I saw a girl holding bread, and I remembered that I had forgotten to buy. I said, “Oh my God, how can I forget the bread that we will eat for breakfast.” I changed my path and headed to the bakery. When I entered the bakery, I saw a cake with the words “My family is my happiness” written on it. I was happy when I saw it and decided to take it with all enthusiasm, as it will make my parents and brothers happy. I took the cake and bread and quickly headed home to get breakfast.I prepared the meal with what my family liked, including eggs, jam, and red tea. I was lucky. I finished all my work before my parents woke up. When my parents and brothers woke up, they were surprised and happy with what I had prepared for them. They thanked me. I was happy and I wished that time would always bring us together. My happiest times are when we are all at the same table.

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One warm day, I remembered that today was my mother’s birthday, so I made many plans that I wanted to make for this day. First, I decided to go to the store opposite my house to buy some red flowers for my mother because she is a big fan of flowers. After that, I went to the store next to the flower shop to buy some meat from the meat section to grill with my family. Later, when I returned home, I realized that I had forgotten to buy bread, so I decided to order it from the food delivery program. After that, our family got together for a barbecue and we made a surprise for our mother. It was a beautiful surprise for her, and everyone enjoyed it.

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On Monday morning, while returning home from my morning class at 9 o'clock, my mom called me to buy some groceries. After she hung up, I went directly to the mall, heading straight to the fruit and vegetable section. There, I bought fresh, round red tomatoes that felt firm and smelled vine-ripe, some onions with a strong, pungent aroma, and hot, spicy peppers that left a tingling sensation on my fingers. The last item on the list was a solid potato. With that, the fruits and vegetables were removed from my list. Now to my next target. in the main store, the canned food. The first item on the list is rice. I took 20 kilos, a box of tea, 6 packets of salt, two packets of mixed spices, and two jerry cans of cooking oil. The spices smelled incredibly aromatic and exotic, while the rice was neatly packaged and felt heavy in my hands. Now that the list is complete, I'll go to the next target. fresh meat from the butcher, I took 4 kilos of beef, 5 kilos of ribs, and 2 kilos of shanks. The fresh meat had a rich, savory smell that made my mouth water.

Now that my shopping list has finally been completed, I am ready to head home. Just then, out of nowhere, a girl approached me and asked if I could buy a bouquet from her. She handed me one to smell, but it had a strange, earthy scent, almost like dirt. I don’t understand why people rave about their smell when it's nothing special to me.

Not only that, but the sample was spiked, and it cut my finger, causing it to bleed. I reluctantly bought the bouquet because I didn’t want to humiliate her since she had given me the flower. Later, I regretted it. Those flowers triggered an allergy that led to an asthma attack, and I had to go to the hospital for a nebulizer treatment because of it.

It was an interesting trip—almost deadly—but I learned a lesson the hard way

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Yesterday when I woke up in the morning, I remembered that I needed to buy some things from the store. I dressed up and headed to the store singing. The weather was very pleasant. When I entered the store there were many different sections to choose from. I first went to the flowers section, which was full of colorful flowers. The place smelled very good as if I was smelling a wonderful perfume. I was confused about which type of flowers to buy, they were all beautiful, but I decided to buy tulip flowers in yellow and white colors. Then I went to the meat department, which had different types of meat such as beef, chicken, and fish. I bought some fresh beef steaks to cook them for dinner. After I finished I went to the cashier to pay for what I had bought. On my way home. I realized that I did not buy bread for my breakfast, so I went to the nearest bakery to buy some. The bakery was full of delicious scents of the pastries. I bought some toast and I couldn't resist buying some chocolate donuts. Then I went back to my house.

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Mazaya

“‏I went to the store and bought a bouquet of vibrant flowers for my dining table. Afterward, I headed to the meat department to select some fresh cuts for dinner. Later, as I was reviewing my shopping list at home,I felt upset when I realized I had forgotten to buy the loaf of bread I needed for tomorrow’s breakfast”

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Because it's not complete and needs more details and idioms