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"Her materialistic heart couldn’t fathom the idea of forgiving that scumbag."

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"Her materialistic heart couldn’t fathom the idea of forgiving that scumbag."

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I prefer the first perspective because it provides reasoning and backgrounds behind the characters actions, thoughts and persona.

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"Underneath the fluorescent glow of carnival lights, amidst the swirling melodies of merry-go-rounds and the tantalising scent of cotton candy, Anna moved with an air of confidence that bordered on arrogance."

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I enjoyed how the story was conveyed through the third person. It provided a second perspective (as I gave the narrator a voice/opinion).

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Vibrant hues from sparsely scattered stage lights coruscated across every surface, making it look as if someone had switched out the stars for LED lights.

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my first person piece best achieved the purpose of my text because i got to write about how my mc thinks which is really important to who she is and how she is understood.

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"Yet people always come, hands slick with grease, lips pulled together by maple pops."

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...the white liquid drowns the floor. her father reacts as if a bug had landed on his shoulder as his hand smacks her face.

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Peering through closing eyes, I bid the stars goodnight and closed the door behind me.

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I found the 2nd version (3rd person perspective) more engaging as it provided more detail in further depth, and hinted that something interesting was going to happen through the use of an omniscient voice

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I found the 2nd version (3rd person perspective) more engaging as it provided more detail in further depth, and hinted that something interesting was going to happen through the use of an omniscient voice

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I liked the story through third person because I was able to help the reader understand the perspectives and how the enviroment around them changed their thought process

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"To her, I am a ghost that trails close to her body's shadow. A haunting presence she can not escape from."

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"i inhale the smell of my childhood and new beginnings."

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The purpose of this piece is for the reader to develop a greater level of empathetic understanding, especially towards the struggles that are faced by a person in the beginning stages of Alzheimers.

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To convey a character that is uniquely human. In the sense that he’s both relatable but a bit of an oddball.

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I prefer the first person perspective as I feel it is more engaging because the reader is provided with a more personal insight to a certain character, and provides reasoning 'why'

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I prefer the first person perspective, as it makes the reader feel more connected to the narrator.

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"But am instead greeted with a whiff of putrid body odor and internally gag."

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I liked the second paragraph (Omniscient narrator) because it gave more insight into what she truly felt than what she only wanted us to hear. It gave insight to my characters intentions.

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I liked the second paragraph (Omniscient narrator) because it gave more insight into what she truly felt than what she only wanted us to hear. It gave insight to my characters intentions.

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I found my 3rd person work more engaging, I liked having the insight into my character, while being able to see the whole picture.

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There was something so peaceful in that moment, you forget where you are, lost in the silence, you are calm.

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There was something so peaceful in that moment, you forget where you are, lost in the silence, you are calm.

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"For in the bright lights of the carnival, she had seen a glimpse of the darkness that lurked within her friend, and she knew that Anna's thirst for power and attention would always come at a cost, even if it meant sacrificing the bonds of friendship along the way."

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"Tears began to gush down my face as I remember the life that could of been"

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The version that I found to be more engaging was the first-person perspective since it gave a personal touch to the story and how actions can be explained through the character's inner thoughts.

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My revised version was more engaging to me. The writing in third person was more informing, and while it is less personal I think it is more appealing as reader because it gives the narrator an omniscient voice

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"she paces toward the front door as if she was being timed"

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The purpose of this piece was to share insight into my character's relationship with his daughter.

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I prefer the first perspective as it is more engaging and leaves the reader guessing what is happening. It provided more detail which left the reader guessing, hinting to what was going to happen.

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self depricating

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As I walk out I can't help but ask, "How was the pad-Thai? they do it the best here, don't they?" I take immense joy in the shocked expression on his face.

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she stares up into the sky now, (very dramatically might I add?) and the sky stares back, possibly judging her very quixotic idea of a holiday, possibly judging all of the tiny decisions that led her to this point, except that the sky is an inanimate concept... or whatever...

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odd dude

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I preferred writing in third person omniscient, I found it more engaging to share the perspectives and thoughts of both characters. Sharing both characters thoughts also allowed me to better shape the context of the text.

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The purpose of my writing was to create a piece that showed the reader how mundane life can get. To show that sometimes, we need a bit of an adventure to get by.

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To understand the thoughts of someone who seems to not have many and to show heaps of personality in one individual.

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overly analytical

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Writing in first person best achieves the purpose because it shows more elements of the confusion faced in a "show don't tell" manner. It adds elements that allow the reader to understand the continuous cycle of the disease.

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A sense of tension and suspensefulness should be felt by the reader at first, followed by a sympathetic feeling as a realisation dawns on them. I hope that they would want to keep on reading and not put the story down.

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shaded confusion

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Selfish ambition

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First person best achieved my purpose because it gave more insight. But 3rd person was more fun to read.

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The screams surround him, they are familliar

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The purpose of this piece was to leave the reader thinking about who she is, what she has done, feeling creeped out. I wanted to leave the reader guessing what happened.

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unbothered and relaxed

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unfinished mystery

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"My grip on society has slipped. My once clear memory is now coated with a blanket of fog disguising my true identity. Even to myself"

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I found the first version/persepective of my story more engaging because a tone of voice is adapted and adds to my character's demeanour. This tone of voice, I believe, is easily identifiable for readers and also is entertaining to imagine.

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The more personal connection provided in the first person perspective makes the reader want to make sure the protagonist is okay

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The purpose of my writing was to understand my character better and to portray her as someone who is content with loneliness. My character profile was changed as I got to know the character more by writing about her. She is happy to be around others but values and appreciates her time alone.

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I enjoyed writing my 3rd person omniscient more, writing about the whole picture I was able to create a larger perspective of how my characters interact with others.

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I found the first person version more engaging because it feels more relatable and easier to connect with

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My first piece best achieves the feeling of suspense, mystery and guessing what happened. It doesn't state exactly what is going on rather makes you guess whats happening.

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I believe the first point of view best achieved my purpose, as you feel more connected to the character by knowing his direct thoughts and emotions.

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Second Person, because the reader is able to imagine themselves in the position of the character therefore it draws out a more emotional response as you are able to connect with it personally.

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Second Person, because the reader is able to imagine themselves in the position of the character therefore it draws out a more emotional response as you are able to connect with it personally.

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Writing in first person best achieved the purpose of my text as it allows the audience to connect with the character on an emotional level, experiencing their thoughts, feelings and ideas

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Third person best achieved my purpose. I wanted to paint the scene, and by using the voice of someone watching on, they are able to to provide the reader with the ability to imagine the scene clearer.

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The carnival troweled vibrant hues across the night sky, and the buttery smell of popcorn lingered over the crowd, waltzing in time with the music that flowed from the speakers.

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I preferred writing in 3rd person as it provides an overall picture of the character and allows the reader to create a strong connection with the character as it provided an insight into her thoughts

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mystery death

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not enough

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My first person helped me achieve my purpose most because the reader was able to relate to the character yet hate her at the same time. This made the reader think about their own actions and how we can be just as selfish as her.

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the first person version was way more engaging because seeing the world through my main characters thought process while she takes in the world around her is so vastly different to the way that most people think normally

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The purpose of this piece of writing is to present a complicated character that challenges readers to relate or understand her in some way. This piece of writing also is used to build background behind my character and reach a climax toward the end.

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The purpose of this piece of writing is to present a complicated character that challenges readers to relate or understand her in some way. This piece of writing also is used to build background behind my character and reach a climax toward the end.

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quiet, reunion

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lonely girl

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to challenge the reader to consider whether fate is a concept that exists or whether life stands independent of any plan.