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Final presentasion Career and profesional development

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final video presentation

"my future career goals"

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feedback from gemini :

overall, my presentation is good, but to make it even better, you can focus on pronouncing words like "administration" and "management," and ensuring proper grammar, such as using "career" instead of "carry" to enhance your professional impression.

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Final video future career goals

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feedback from gemini : I'm confident you'll achieve your goals. Your passion for banking is evident, and your focus on key skills like finance, communication, and technology will be invaluable. Remember, gaining practical experience is crucial, and you're on the right track. Keep up the great work!

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Final Video

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Final Video Careers and Prefesional Development (CPD)

My Future Career Goals

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Final Video Careers and Prefesional Development (CPD) - My Future Career Goals

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Final Presentation Careers and Development (CPD) My Future Career Goals

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Final Video My Future Career Goals (CPD)

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Final Video My future career goals

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Final Video My Future Career Goals

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Final Video Future Goals Career

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My Future Career Goals

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Final Video Careers & Professional Development (CPD), My Future Career Goals

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Dewa Ayu Made Yurisca Dwi Pradnyani (29)

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My Future Career Goals (Final Video)

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Feedback from Gemini: I’ve had a fantastic goal, my pronouncation was clear and also my speaking pace is just right. Also I’ve got a solid plan and my ambition to contribute to the local economy is admirable.

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Final Presentation CPD, My Career goals

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Final Video Careers and Professional Development (CPD) - My Future Career Goals

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Feedback from geminu: look at the words "management" and "challenges." For "management," focus on pronouncing each syllable clearly. As for "challenges," make sure to pronounce the "ch". To sound more natural, try to connect your words smoothly, like in everyday conversation. You can also vary the speed and emphasis of your speech to keep it engaging. Regarding eye contact, it's great for keeping your audience engaged. Try to hold each person's gaze for a few seconds before moving on to another person.

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feedback form Gemini : Okay, for your content, it might be helpful to add a specific example of a small business project you're working on. This would make your presentation more engaging. As for fluency, you have a good pace and your pronunciation is clear. Maybe just try to vary your intonation a bit to keep the audience even more engaged

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Feedback from gemini:

Of course, here is the corrected summary in English.

Concise Presentation Feedback

Here are three key points to improve your presentation:

* Grammar: Use "My goals are" instead of "My goals is."

* Wording: Change "penetrate for crowd" to "penetrate the international market."

* Intonation: Practice lowering your voice at the end of sentences to sound more confident and assertive.

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Feedback from Gemini:

Your presentation has a good structure and a clear plan. However, there are a few things you can improve to make it even stronger.

Pronunciation: Your pronunciation is quite clear, but you could focus on a few words that might be difficult to say, such as "strategic" or "specialize." Practicing the pronunciation of these words will make you sound more professional.

Gesture: You already use your hands to emphasize points, which is good. To improve further, try to be more varied. Use bigger hand movements when talking about your big dream, and more controlled movements when explaining details.

Delivery: Your speaking pace is good, but you could try raising your voice volume during the most important parts, such as when you talk about building your own company. This will help your audience feel your passion. Also, be sure to take short pauses between key points to give your audience time to process the information.

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Feedback from Gemini :

Okay, this is coming along nicely! Your enthusiasm is clear, and you've got a solid plan. To make it even better, let's look at your pronunciation of a few words. It's "licensing", not "linsensing", and "strategies", not "strategics".

Okay, let's talk about your grammar and pronunciation. Overall, you did a good job, but there were a few spots where we can make some improvements. For example, instead of saying "helping them market their excellent to products the international community", try saying "helping them market their excellent products to the international community." Also, remember to pronounce "licensing" correctly. It's "licensing", not "linsensing".

And let's talk about the content of your presentation. You've got a solid vision for your future career goals, especially your focus on exporting local handicrafts and food products. It's clear you're passionate about sharing Indonesian culture with the world. Now, to make it even more impactful, consider adding specific examples of the handicrafts and food products you'd like to export. This will give your audience a clearer picture of your vision and make it more engaging.

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Feedback from gemini :

You’ve got a great vision for your future! To make your writing flow more smoothly, try using “Thus” or “Therefore” instead of “This” when connecting ideas. Also, it’s clearer to say “overseas collaboration opportunities” rather than “seek international collaboration opportunities.” Your passion for your goals really comes through, and that will definitely inspire others!

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Gemini: 1. that's a great start! You have a clear vision for your future. Now, let's work on making that vision come alive with your voice! Could you read the first sentence again, but this time try varying the pitch of your voice to emphasize the word "influential"?

2. that second sentence again. Focus on clearly pronouncing each word, especially "develop" and "innovative." Remember, clear pronunciation is key!

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After practicing with Gemini,

I received quite positive feedback. According to Gemini, my presentation was good, with clear pronunciation, correct grammar, and proper intonation. However, he also gave a small suggestion about the pronunciation of the word productivity at the end of the presentation. The word should be pronounced with the stress on the third syllable, pro-duk-ti-vi-ti.

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Feedback from gemini: You've already demonstrated the ability to speak with clear enunciation and a steady pace, which is a solid foundation. To improve your speaking skills, focus on emphasizing key words to highlight important points and creating smoother transitions between sentences to make your presentation feel more fluid and professional. With these few small adjustments, your presentation will be highly effective and memorable.

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Gemini gave me some feedback: Gemini noticed some points where the grammar could be changed for clarity, namely when I said "In the next two until three years," I was advised to say "In the next two to three years." And when I said, "I want to learn firsthand about logistics," it should be "logistics." For my next presentation, I was advised to focus on varying intonation to add expression to my voice. In addition, I was also advised to pause between sentences, to give the audience time to absorb what I said and make your presentation more interesting.

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Feedback from gemini:

For your pronunciation, there are just a few small things to work on. For example, in the phrase “gain as much knowledge” try to pronounce each word more clearly, especially the word “knowledge,” so it doesn’t sound slurred. In “practical experience,” make sure the “a” in “practical” is clear, and start “experience” with a strong “ee” sound. Also, in “business management,” try to make each word distinct, particularly the “u” in “business.” These little adjustments will make your delivery sound even smoother.

As for your gestures, they were natural and definitely supported your points, which made your presentation more lively. You used them with purpose, and that was effective. The only thing to improve is the speed of your hand movements sometimes they were a little too quick. If you slow them down just a bit, your gestures will have even more impact.

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The feedback from Gemini is that, overall, the language is clear and easy to understand, which is great. There are just a few minor suggestions.

Instead of saying "di bidang ini" (in this field), you can use "di industri ini" (in this industry) or "di area ini" (in this area) for a more professional impression.

And the point about connecting local Indonesian products globally is very strong because you can add a specific example of a product or industry you are passionate about to truly reinforce that point.

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Feedback from Gemini:

That was a great first run! Your presentation was well structured and your career goals are very clear. You have a solid plan to gain skills and experience both locally and globally. For some areas to refine, let's look at a few things: First, your pronunciation of "entrepreneur" could be a bit clearer it's pronounced "on-truh-pre-nur." Second, to enhance your vocabulary, you could use a stronger term like "robust" instead of "solid" when describing your "foundation." Lastly, for grammar, consider rephrasing "following days" to "afterward" or "following this" for a smoother transition. Overall, you have a strong presentation, and with a few minor tweaks, it will be excellent.

My experience using Gemini was very enjoyable. Gemini helped me in detail, from text, pronunciation, and grammar. It made my learning process much easier and more structured. I like how clear and supportive the explanations were, which really boosted my confidence in using English. I am very grateful to Gemini for guiding me patiently and providing such useful feedback. Overall, it has been a positive and meaningful experience for my learning journey.

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feedback from gemini :

That’s a great plan! Your Pronouciation was clear and your grammar was good. You spoke at a good pace, making it easy to understand your goals. Your hand gestures were natural and helped emphasize your points. Overall, you presented your future career goals very effectively!

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Practice with Gemini - Future Career Goals

This is the feedback i get after doing practice with Gemini: "To make it even better, try varying your intonation a bit to keep the audience engaged. Also, while you maintain eye contact, remember to occasionally glance away to simulate looking at different people in a real audience. Your hand gestures are good, but try to keep them a little more fluid and less repetitive. practice with Gemin

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Feedback from Gemini about my pronunciation is clear, and my vocabulary is strong. I maintain good eye contact, which helps keep me engaged. To make it even better, I could vary my intonation a bit more to emphasize key points. Also, be mindful of filler words like "um" to make your delivery smoother. Overall, i am doing great!

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Feedback from gemini

“Your presentation is already very strong and shows rapid progress, especially due to your confident delivery and clear flow. To perfect it, you just need to continue focusing on practicing the pronunciation of a few technical English terms to make them sound more natural.”

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After practicing with Gemini, I learned that my vision was clear and well-delivered with good grammar, pronunciation, and defined goals. However, I still need to improve consistency in maintaining eye contact with the camera and practice speaking more slowly and clearly to ensure better communication.

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Future Career Goals, Practice With Gemini

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Drafting my future Career goals

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Feedback Gemini "Your presentation was good, clear and well-structured. Your enthusiasm was evident and engaging. Areas to improve: vary your intonation for more dynamism, maintain eye contact with the audience, and practice more to boost confidence. Keep it up!"

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Practice with Gemini

Feedbacks from gemini :

1. Language is clearly and already easy to understand

2. The intonation is good enough

3. More practice for more fluent speaking

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feedback from gemini

Okay, that's a great start! You're speaking clearly and with good volume. Focusing on your intonation, try varying your pitch a bit more to emphasize key words and phrases. This will make your presentation even more engaging.

Okay, let's focus on pronunciation. I noticed a few spots where we can fine-tune. For example, in "Future Career goals," make sure to clearly pronounce each syllable. It's "Fut-ture Car-eer-goals." Also, in "export," emphasize the "ex" part – "EX-port."

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My future career goals

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Drafting My Future Career Goals

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I Gusti Ayu Agung Aprilia Githa Lestari (08)

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I Gusti Ayu Agung Aprilia Githa Lestari (08)

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Drafting My Future Career Goals

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Drafting My Future Career Goals.

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Putu Larasati Putri ( drafting my future career goals )

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Please click the google form link to fill your self-reflection!

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Self-Reflection Session on topic 3 (Challanges and Accomplishment in Business)

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Please answer the questions given by giving minimum 50 - 150 words per question! Thank you!

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Drafting Challenges and Complishments by Cellos (Yoshua Marcelos) CEO of Byon Combat Sport

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Final Video Challenge and Accomplishment iben (grill chili sauce)

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Gemini : Your presentation is coming along nicely! Your pace is good, and you're speaking clearly. To make it even more engaging, try varying your intonation a bit more. Also, remember to pause occasionally to let your points sink in. Keep up the great work!

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Final Presentation CCU TAO KAE NOI

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Final Video Challenging and Accomplishment Of Jennie Ruby Jane

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Final Presentation

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Feedback With Gemini :

Opening: "Felicya Angelista, founder of Scarlett, navigated challenges and found success in her business journey."

Key Obstacles: "Finding reliable suppliers, ensuring consistent quality, and competitive pricing were early hurdles."

Brand Building: "Another key challenge was building a strong brand."

Greatest Reward: "Ultimately, seeing Scarlett satisfy millions of customers and lead the Indonesian beauty market was her greatest reward."

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Final Vidio challenge and accomplishment from CEO byon combat, Yossua Marcellos (CELLOS)

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Feedback form gemini: That's a solid overview of Anthony Salim's journey. To make it even more impactful, you could add specific examples of his strategies during the crisis. Perhaps mention how he diversified the Salim Group or any innovative approaches he took. Adding a personal reflection on what you found most inspiring about his story could also be a great touch.

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Drafting Challenges and Accomplishments Felisya Angelista ( Founder of Scarlett )

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Final Video Presentation

“Business Culture in UAE”

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Final video Challenge and Accomplishment about Forest Li, Co-Founder of Sea Limited

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Final video business presentasion about Challenges and Accomplishments faced by Anthony Salim

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gemini feedback : Okay, that's a solid overview of Forrest Li and Sea Limited. You've clearly highlighted his achievements and the company's impact on Southeast Asia's digital landscape. Now, let's think about how you could make it even more engaging. Perhaps adding a personal anecdote or a specific example of how Sea Limited has impacted everyday consumers could make it more relatable.

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Final presentation challenges and achievements Rachel Vennya

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Final video Challenges and Accomplishments

Firgun : Kadek Indra Yoni (Indra Beauty Care)

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Final Presentation Challenges and Accomplishment about Indra Nooyi the former CEO of PepsiCo

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Feedback form Gemini :

Okay, focusing on pronunciation, I noticed a few spots where we can polish things up. For instance, in "challenges," ensure you clearly pronounce the "ch" sound at the beginning. Also, in "accomplishments," pay attention to the "plish" sound. Okay, let's talk about grammar. In the phrase "most perform woman," it should be "most powerful woman." Also, "working barrier" should be "breaking barriers."

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Drafting Challenges and Accomplishments PepsiCo

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Final Presentation - Finland "Silence Business"

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Sure thing. Here's a bit more feedback on your presentation text.

You've got a good handle on the core concept of silence in Finnish business culture. To really drive that point home, consider adding a specific example. Maybe a short story about a time when silence was misinterpreted in a meeting, or a quote from a Finnish businessperson about the importance of silence. This will make it more relatable for your audience.