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Though this discussion about ARC, we play different roles in our group. Through the leader's question, we can clearly know that only when you have an emotional interest in something can you be full of motivation, invest 100% enthusiasm, achieve high-quality efficiency, and attain good achievements. At the same time, we agree that when people choose a degree, they should take motivation and interest into consideration rather than future career income. I played the role of a connector in this discussion, utilizing my experience to link these issues. I believe that both this essay and the book I read can emphasize the importance of motivation and provide a comprehensive outlook for the future. Additionally, my major is music. It is precisely because of personal interest that one studies diligently, not because of the high future salary of art students that one excels in this course. Therefore, I consider this connection to be significant. In summary, a critical member of our team shared her opinion, and we had a deeper discussion about this essay, including the author's credibility, the accuracy of the book, and the purpose of the essay. This experience has been meaningful to me, and I have gained a lot of knowledge.

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This weekend, we discussed an important issue regarding the environment. I gained a deeper understanding of various topics, such as oil resources, carbon dioxide, and how to address environmental problems. This knowledge highlighted the importance of protecting the environment and provided me with numerous methods to tackle these issues. In short, through this weekend's study, I have come to appreciate the significance of environmental preservation and understand the necessary steps and approaches to resolve these problems.

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Research Project_ Written Assignment Suggested Plan  - Nanni Liu - KD

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essay plan feedback - email me if you can't see the comments or have questions!

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essay plan feedback - email me if you can't see the comments or have questions!

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Research Project_ Written Assignment Suggested Plan  - Nanni Liu - KD

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This weekend is very amazing. Because we spent much time on discussion with our team. At the same time, we play a new method to study English named ARC. During this method. We can play various roles to participate in reading discussions and I think this method is very beneficial for us to study English.

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1. What encourages you to make environmentally-friendly decisions?

Cost savings: Certain environmentally-friendly practices, such as energy conservation and waste reduction, can lead to financial savings over time, which can be a motivating factor for some people.

2. In what ways are you not environmentally-friendly? What prevents you from changing?

Limited infrastructure and resources: In some cases, the lack of infrastructure or resources, such as recycling facilities or public transportation, can make it challenging for individuals to adopt environmentally-friendly practices.

3. What can be done to motivate everyone to behave in more environmentally-friendly ways?

To motivate everyone to behave in more environmentally-friendly ways, several strategies can be employed:

Education and awareness: Providing accurate and easily understandable information about environmental issues and their solutions can help individuals make more informed choices.
Collaboration and community engagement: Encouraging collective action, fostering community involvement, and promoting a sense of shared responsibility can motivate individuals to participate in environmental initiatives.

4. Do you agree with the authors' conclusions regarding individual short-term benefit versus collective long-term benefit?
Yes, I agree it.

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Hi, professor
I find my mistake is that too many repeat about knowledge and I will try to revise next time.

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I think manage time is very important in my life. Sometimes when we facing two things or many things, we should try to manage our time, which we can save time and improve our effective of life. I can clear do a plan by an app, and I will according to this app to manage myself. I think it's very efficient. In addition to, I will try change my time according to this essay, although it shows a little function.  Finally, I haven't use strategies to research my team, but I can try to do it.

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Research Project_ Written Assignment Suggested Plan Guide with notes _suggestions - argumentative essay

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Through today discussion about writing plan, I can slightly understand the plan for the essay. For the background, I should introduce background of choosing a degree.
For the main paragraph, I believe that the choice of degree should take into account that potential future income is not just the only factor, so I will expand the description.
For the concluding paragraph, I think it is important to consider potential future income in choosing a degree, but it should not be the only factor. I would summarise and sublimate the essay.
So, dear professor, do you think my plan is a good plan or bad plan, and you can give me advice. Thanks!

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5.2 Summarise discussion (50 - 100 words)

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5.2 Summarise discussion (50 - 100 words)

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Through today's panel discussion, I clarified the definition of RAFT and TAP. First, TAP is a method for study can help us to know author information and RAFT can help us to escape message. In other words, RAFT can help us to better understand task.

All in all, today discussion can help us understand two methods to study and we can improve our reading ability.

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It has been a full and interesting week of learning and I have met interesting and conscientious tutors and lovely students. I have also learnt new words and reading skills this week. I also learnt how to use and create PADLET software, which made me feel very accomplished. For next week, I hope to be more active and motivated to learn more.

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Though this essay, I know that most of parents want their children become an excellent student in the future. So lead to many families pay attention to children’s study and growth. At the same time, with the development of education, parents and children focus on grade in school and fosters a "get ahead or get behind" mentality. Otherwise, children can back to other people. On the one hand, this environment provided the West with the opportunity to develop its education. On the other hand, students who from foreign hold a outgoing spirit, which can attract many people want to study abroad. However, there is threat in education for studying abroad, for example, language and environment. Among them, language includes IELTS and PTE. Environment includes communication and study. If student want to study abroad, the first important thing is that prepare letters of recommendation and personal statements. As students are subjected to uneven levels of advertising, which lead to the rise of study abroad agencies. They can attribute a rise of false message and announcement. This a bad approach for student to apply for school in foreign countries.

All in all, as a student who is applying to university, when we choose a agency, we should compare the strengths and weaknesses of the institutions and try to find out more about their background by various means. The most important thing to look for is whether the institution can offer a belong to myself study programme for you.

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The purpose of writing this letter is to introduce myself and my major. Although I majored in music in high school, I had a great interest in social studies after school and continued to enrich my knowledge after school. I was keen to study sociology. The main reason why I chose to study a sociology course was to meet my career development in Shanghai after graduation. The skills required for the course I have chosen are language skills and professional skills. I think these skills can help me to learn more about interpersonal relationships, which is beneficial for the development of my work. I will choose to improve my language skills through language classes and my professional skills through online and offline learning. I chose to study in the UK because I wanted to experience life on my own, but also because I wanted to broaden my horizons and develop my learning ability. I am confident that my course will enhance my learning goals and plans.

All in all, I will try my best to study in York and hope to make an achievement in my life. At the same time, I will devote myself to all the works, which to get a good qualification.

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1.What were your first impressions of the University of York?

My first impression of York University is that it is a beautiful university that can help me improve my professional abilities and self achievement. To help oneself develop a better self.

2.How were your first lessons?

My first lessons is very challenging, which help me to achieve my dream about going to York.

3.What do you want to learn more about?

I want to learn more about speaking knowledge because my speaking ability is very poor so  I want to develop myself in the future.

4.How do you work independently? What about your classmates?

I think independent study can be beneficial for personal reflection and topic development.

5.What do tutors expect you to do outside of class time?
My tutor hope me to more talk about my classmates and teachers, because it can benefit to us to study English.

6.What were the main areas of feedback from your diagnostic writing task? What could you do to improve these areas?

My question is mainly about the lack of self-reporting. In the face of this problem, later I will expand my vocabulary and phrases to make the essay richer and more enriched.

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1: What does Weiler mean by being engaged when learning?

Commitment in learning means that it takes time and effort to learn. It requires putting yourself into learning.

2:Thinking back to your previous experiences of learning English, what kind of learning did you most engage with?

I like independent study and discussion study. because i think are great way for me to improve my study. I can talk something with each other

3: Can you relate to the writer's suggestion that becoming emotionally engaged with your studies will improve your results?

Yes, Concentrated engagement leads to more focused learning, resulting in improved learning ability and progress.

4: What do you think Weiner believes is more important for staying motivated - intrinsic or extrinsic motivation? What is your opinion?

Staying motivated is conducive to enhancing enthusiasm for learning, which in turn increases interest in learning and a natural enjoyment of learning.

5: How do you feel about learning English, and what will you do to stay affectively (emotionally), cognitively (intellectually) and behaviourally engaged when learning English?

I believe that learning English is a long-term process and it requires constant practice and training. You can't get great achievements in the short term, you have to study day by day to get progress.

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From the beginning, I was keen to study sociology. The main reason why I chose to study a sociology course was to meet my career development in Shanghai after graduation. The skills required for the course I have chosen are language skills and professional skills. I will choose to improve my language skills through language classes and my professional skills through online and offline learning. I chose to study in the UK because I wanted to experience life on my own, but also because I wanted to broaden my horizons and develop my learning ability. I am confident that my course will enhance my learning goals and plans.

All in all, I will try my best to study in York and hope to make an achievement in my life.

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Hi Nanni, please find attached your feedback on your writing assignment from earlier this week. Make sure to read all the feedback in the comment boxes clearly.

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Today we discussed effective academic reporting. The first and most important part is to comply with the school's report format, discuss issues with classmates or teachers in a timely manner, use as many skills as possible to learn, and make every effort to complete the academic report.

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1.The teacher divided all the students into four groups and my group is 3.

2.The Korean teacher allows us to play games in class.

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1.York is a beautiful city and I am very eager to come to school.

2.The teacher introduced the IPC team to us.

3.A sister who comes from Korea shares her story about how to study English from bad to excellent. And she told us about more conversation in our daily life so that we can improve our English ability.

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I am Nanni Liu, I am 22 years old, I from Sichuan Institute of Culture and Arts. I majored in music during college and social media and interactive technology during graduate school. I hope we can have a pleasant online class experience with you all.

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My hometown is in Ankang, located in Shaanxi. I spent all my time in my hometown from elementary school up to high school.