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I think this will be ok.
Please be careful in the future and consult with your module leader or tutor before the interviews. Please refer to the noticeboard, and if you have any other concerns, please email me.

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Please refer to Module noticeboard.

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Hi Kit,
I don’t know if mine posted last time but How would I go about getting the go ahead for approval for use of my own research? Sorry I didn’t know!
My participants (2) are completely anonymous and I explained what I was researching first before I asked consent to take a photo of their tattoo.
Thanks!

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Hi, how do I go about getting ethical approval? Their identities are completely hidden in photos and explanation and I was given verbal consent while also disclosing what I was writing about.

Thanks!

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Yes, absolutely! Incorporating your own research, such as a photo, into your essay can significantly enhance the credibility of your argument and the richness of your study.

However, surveys or human participation in this module are only allowed if I've given you the go-ahead to get ethical approval.

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I've mentioned this quite a few times in the seminars. Please listen to the seminar recordings and check out all the slides/handouts provided on LEARN.

Generally, first-person is not advised. Academic writing typically aims for an objective and formal tone. The focus is on presenting research, analysis, and arguments rather than personal experiences or personal opinions.

You're expected, of course, to express your findings/thoughts in the conclusion, but this should remain professional in the tome. However, it can be acceptable in specific contexts, particularly on a project that is inspired by something close to your heart.

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Are we able to use our own research in our essays? For example I've found something in public that demonstrates and supports my point that it’s still relevant today and they allowed me to take a photo of it.

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I have a question regarding writing in a first person perspective- are we allowed to write phrases such as ‘I will now discuss…’ or ‘as I have mentioned previously…’ Just wanted to double check. Thank you.

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I have a question regarding writing in a first person perspective- are we allowed to write phrases such as ‘I will now discuss…’ or ‘as I have mentioned previously…’ Just wanted to double check. Thank you.

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Yes, you can cite anything you deem appropriate and is the best to support your argument. You must, of course, follow Harvard Referencing guidelines.

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I was wondering how I would cite an image I have found in a book that has no other information on that image. 

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I was wondering how I would cite an image I have found in a book that has no other information on that image. 

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When analysing each visual example, the word count can vary. The focus should be on effectively conveying your analysis and providing sufficient supporting details for each sample, considering your question and the argument you are presenting. So, yes, it is acceptable if one example requires more elaboration due to multiple aspects. However, it is essential to ensure clear points are made regarding the relevance of your analysis to your argument.

If you have a significant example that encompasses various elements such as the dress, nail colour, hair, and makeup, as you mentioned, it is possible to divide it into separate sections within your essay. Nevertheless, this approach appears simplistic. However, it is difficult to determine if the proposed structure is appropriate without knowledge of your essay title, question, or topic.

Ultimately, the goal is to effectively communicate your insights and analysis, presenting your ideas and argument logically and organised to address your essay title. You will need to decide the best way you think to achieve this.

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Hi Kit. I have 3 examples of fashion that I am analysing in my essay. I have a lot more to say on one major example as there are multiple things to pick out from it. Does each example need to have roughly the same amount of words? If so, could I separate the longer example into a section on the dress and then a section on details such as nail colour, hair and makeup from the same example?

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Hi Kit. I have 3 examples of fashion that I am analysing in my essay. I have a lot more to say on one major example as there are multiple things to pick out from it. Does each example need to have roughly the same amount of words? If so, could I separate the longer example into a section on the dress and then a section on details such as nail colour, hair and makeup from the same example?

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When referencing frames/stills from a film in your essay, it's essential to provide clear and consistent citations and give credit to the source. Accurately crediting the source, not just the film, may be vital as many films can have different versions, for example, an edit for TV/Streaming, a director's cut Blu-Ray special edition, or black and white movies that have been colourised later.

Here's an example of how you can reference a film frame within your essay:

Image caption.

Under your image, you would have something like:

"Fig.x. In the film To Catch a Thief (Hitchcock, 1955), the character played by Cary Grant is seen wearing a mischievous smile as he gazes at the breathtaking French Riviera landscape (Frame 120)."

Bibliography.

In your bibliography, you would put something like this if you watched it online:

Hitchcock, A. (1955). To Catch a Thief. Amazon.co.uk: Prime Video. [online] Available at: https://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/video/detail/amzn1.dv.gti.d2a9f67f-8045-98c3-956d-115953971200?autoplay=0&ref_=atv_cf_strg_wb [Accessed 21 May 2023].

Or if it's the film on DVD:

Hitchcock, A. (1955). To Catch a Thief. [DVD]. Place of distribution: United States. Paramount Home Video (Special Collector's Edition) Region 1.

The LEARN Module page has a Harvard Reference Guide for further information. In addition, the Uni library has extra resources, and there is a lot online if you need additional help.

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Hi Kit, im writing about fashion and film, my essay uses frames from the film as figures is there a specific way I should reference these frames? Or do they just get referenced like a film would

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Hi Kit, im writing about fashion and film, my essay uses frames from the film as figures is there a specific way I should reference these frames? Or do they just get referenced like a film would

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Sure you can. Using a screenshot from an online source, in your instance, an e-commerce shop, can be a helpful way to illustrate a point effectively. I'd recommend including a concise image caption. Make sure in your text to provide a clear rationale for how this demonstrates your argument.

You also need to cite the image appropriately using Harvard Referencing. You should include a brief citation within the text of your essay when you refer to the screenshot. This can be done by mentioning the author or organization responsible for the online shop and the year of publication (if available - probably the year you took the screenshot). If the screenshot does not have a clear author or publication date, you can use a descriptive title or the website's name.

Then for your image list, follow this general template for your reference: Author/Organization. (Year). Title of Online Shop [Screenshot]. Retrieved from URL

I hope that helps.

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Hi Kit, I was wondering if it would be okay to use a screenshot of an online shop in my essay as one of the supporting photos? It would help illustrate one of my points really well I think.

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Hi Kit, I was wondering if it would be okay to use a screenshot of an online shop in my essay as one of the supporting photos? It would help illustrate one of my points really well I think.

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This is a common question students ask and a common challenge many people face in academic writing, reports, etc. The key is always to remember your title/question and ensure you answer it.

With that said, including a section in your essay that doesn't directly relate to fashion/your main topic can be acceptable as long as it serves a purpose and helps to contextualise or set the scene for the main subject of your investigation. You need to ensure that the connection between the introductory section and the main discussion on Fashion is clear and logical is vital.

Tips:

Think about the relevance. If it's crucial to contextualise your subject or argument - include it.

If you use this point, ensure you have effective transitional phrases to make the connection and link between your argument.

Clearly indicate how this relates to your investigation.

Keep it focused and concise. Make sure it doesn't overshadow the main discussion.

I hope that is helpful.

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For my essay, is it okay if there is a part of it that doesn't directly relate to Fashion? I want to use the first paragraph to sort of set the scene so I can then go on to explain what fashion does for the group of people that I am investigating.

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For my essay, is it okay if there is a part of it that doesn't directly relate to Fashion? I want to use the first paragraph to sort of set the scene so I can then go on to explain what fashion does for the group of people that I am investigating.

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This is a response to an email query I received about an essay title looking at the counterculture around tracksuits and feedback on an essay plan. There are some helpful pointers here for all. I'm sharing with permission of the student.

Your essay title appears clear and concise, effectively communicating your essay's primary focus and argument.

There are ways you could improve it if you see that to be necessary. For example, you could come up with a catchy phrase or play on words that relate to your topic so it's more intriguing or include a provocative question and emphasise the relevance or significance of your subject.

It would help if you considered providing a compelling case from the offset that tracksuits represent an anti-establishment youth subculture. Debating whether they do or don't isn't the main focus, so I don't view that as an issue as you're exploring 'how', but you need to provide a clear, concise rationale with some compelling solid evidence. I'd recommend this form as a part of your intro – it wouldn't need to be lengthy.

You might want to consider if it is worth you needing to provide such a comprehensive overview of youth subcultures in general in the first paragraph.

In terms of your plan for each paragraph, it looks like you are being thorough, which is encouraging, but you may need to consider if you have to scope to analyse all the points thoroughly. Consider which are the key points that you can elaborate on, and which are supplementary. Too many points won't provide you the opportunities to thoroughly analyse.

Remember, your essay word count is relatively short, so you must limit your analysis and focus on the most critical aspects. It's essential to balance providing enough information to support your argument and not overwhelming the reader with too much information.

Finally, what evidence are you presenting to connect to your points? Consider these within your plan.

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Yes, you can use broader fashion theories or philosophies to inform your argument. For all of you, drawing from more general theories or philosophies can help you contextualise your research topic within a larger framework, and help you identify gaps or areas for further exploration. I've said a few times the best essays make connections between multiple theories presented in the lectures, but there should be an overarching syllabus topic that is central so you can offer a clear understanding of a particular theory and stick to a clear narrative. Just be sure that the theories and philosophies you draw from are relevant and applicable to your research topic.

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Hi Kit, the topic I chose has very limited academic research conducted on it, I was wondering if I could apply broader fashion theories/philosophies to it and form my argument that way as well?

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In week 10, I will introduce feminism in fashion; the complex and diverse beliefs, ideas, and practices that aim to promote gender equality and empower women. We will explore how feminist theory asserts that women have been historically and systematically disadvantaged in almost all areas of life, from politics and economics to social and cultural norms, due to gender. We will discuss how feminist theories have evolved and how there is no fixed rule on what makes a feminist, leading to different perspectives.

We shall examine how feminist and fashion theories intersect, as both fields concern social norms, power dynamics, and representation. We will discuss one of the main ways feminist and fashion theories relate through analysing gendered norms or expectations in clothing. Many feminist theorists have long argued that gender is a social construct and that dress and adornment significantly shape our understanding of gender. In addition, many say that clothing reinforces negative stereotypes of gender identities and norms, even suppressing one gender over a dominant one. Similarly, we will explore how clothing and style are used to express and subvert gender identities to further the feminist cause.

Although the lecture has yet to come up, I'd encourage you to explore the provided content and continue researching.

The ideas you present to explore Princess Diana's dress are interesting, but there are some challenges. Of course, firstly, you'd need to provide a compelling case that she expressed feminist ideals through her dress. Was she a feminist?

I'm a bit confused about your use of "Power dressing". Power dressing is a term that emerged in the 1980s to describe a style of clothing that was designed to convey authority, confidence, and professionalism, particularly in the workplace. I think you'd need to prove that she dressed overwhelmingly in a way that could be described as ‘Power Dressing’ if you pursue this. Does this need to be the crux of your argument?

You could certainly explore how she dressed during her marriage to Prince Charles v divorce. During marriage it was often a traditional, conservative style appropriate for her role as a royal (future Queen) but this evolved as she became more independent towards the end of her marriage and after her divorce. There is a solid case to present as she began experimenting with bolder, more daring styles. Did this reflect her newfound independence and sense of empowerment? Can you argue that? Did she dress with hidden codes? The iconic black sheep jumper was no coincidence!

Overall - interesting ideas developing. Needs some refinement, but I'm excited by its possibility.

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Hi Kit.
As we haven't had the lecture on feminism yet, I was wondering what you thought about power dressing and if this could be used as an example with Princess Diana? I'm not sure whether to focus on her 'revenge' period after the divorce or more on how her fashion progressed over time.

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Of course, I'd be happy to help clarify this for you!
You need to present an example to demonstrate a specific theory of knowledge and understanding relating to fashion theory. The specific theories are presented in the weekly lectures.

First, you need to identify a specific theory or concept within fashion theory that you want to explore. For example, you could focus on the concept of "Subcultural Theories", which argues that groups of people with shared values break away from mainstream society, conforming to the values and norms of the subculture to which they belong and expressing this through dress.

To demonstrate your understanding of this concept, you could provide an example of a subculture and discuss how its values influenced its fashion at the time, what social influences contributed to its rise, and how it has been revived or updated in contemporary style.

I hope that helps.

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Hi Kit it say in the brief "present an example to demonstrate a theory of knowledge and understanding relating to this topic" Im confused can you help?

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Hi Kit it say in the brief "present an example to demonstrate a theory of knowledge and understanding relating to this topic" Im confused can you help?

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Your work would not be marked down simply because you chose to focus on one or more of the examples mentioned in any of my lecture. Every example provided in the lectures or seminars could be an example that you might explore. You've got to create an essay title with an example/s of your choosing.

What is important and in order to produce an interesting essay, is to see your unique perspective and analysis of the elements in the topic.

It is also important to make sure that your essay is focused and well-argued, regardless of which example/s you choose to analyse. Make sure that you have a clear thesis statement and that your analysis of the elements is supported by specific examples and evidence. Additionally, be sure to engage with any relevant academic literature on the topic to demonstrate your understanding of the subject matter.

Ultimately, the quality of your analysis and argument will be what determines your grade, not necessarily the specific example you choose to focus on. Though a poor example may lead to a weaker essay, and thus a lower mark.

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Can I use examples provided in the lectures? Will I be marked down? 

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Can I use examples provided in the lectures? Will I be marked down? 