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Dear Angie,

Your task is extremely complete. Actually the expansion is quite impressive and I'm glad you like writing because it's noticeable. Congrats for your writing skills. On the other hand, although you did use the grammar of the units, one recurring issue was the difficulty with grammar structures; especially, the use of conjugation of verbs in past or participle as well as other grammar. Thus, I think you need to polish and refine this area in your wrting because for the rest you're doing so well.

This is your performance:

Content: 5
Voc & Sp: 4,5
Text order: 3,5
Grammar: 3

Global grade: 4.0

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Hi, I’m going to introducing me describing some aspects about my personality. I´m a cute person, I try to talk with people politely all the time. At first I’m usually a little bit shy but late I become friendly. I like write and for my career as a journalist I have to do the investigation carefully

I really like music, I want to learn something about it, because although I like, I don´t sing very well. I´m a sweet person and normally talk with me is easily

But also I have some bad things. Maybe a few people think I’m rude because sometimes I leave shyly. To I’m a bit disorganized by the hurry, but at least I clean fastly.

I don´t like talk about myself with unknown people, but at least I’m good listen the other´s stories. Most times I am a slow person for the dates with friends, family and my boyfriend, but at least I give them a gift for wait me when I come lately.

And that´s something about me a bit long, but at least I can become interesting for you, or I think so.

Thanks for reading

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Most people don´t know that I made in 2016 an absolutely wonderful travel to Poland with really incredible friends and we have to walk a lot around the streets so they aren´t lazy people at all.

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·         Where are you based?

In Bogotá, Colombia that is the city when I was born

·         What do your friends say about yourself?

That at first I’m very shy but with trust I could be really outgoing and laid-back helpful and generous person

·         What´s your worst habit?

Even if I organized my time and do the things early the most times I’m late and it´s something that I want change

·         What are your future plans?

Stay study in my career as a journalist and when I graduate, I want travel to Spain, or another country and after have a job. I want study more, meet people travel and enjoy

·         What skills do you have?

I really like write and the people say that I sing good, I think maybe that could be true. And another skill is that I’m good spending time with kids

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·         What your secret dream? Why?

Learn to play any instrument. Because all my family are musician, and to my boyfriend. That made me fell so frustrated and for that I want learn, and to because I really like the music and I want to keep singing in the shower better

·         What have you done so far to accomplish you secret dream?

I start to take guitar lessons one month ago and I really hope learn soon

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The scariest experience in my life was when I went to a travel to Santa Marta in 2010 with my family. I´ve been so relaxed in the back sit of the car with my little sister. After a time of being on the road the car passed over a hole, losted control and crash with a mountain
I´ve never had a broken bone until this situation because I brooked my feet, yes, both ankles and hurted my arm for that I have scars
I´ve been the most affected but I´m grateful because all my family is alive