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I feel like they could of used a little more personality. They have evidence, details, explainations, but that is about it. If author’s can write books with so much personality with just text, why can’t we?

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We can ask questions

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I think I could have a stronger 4th and 5th paragraph

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I can inprove my TDA by looking at the rubric and use it. I will also make sure that it is at its full potential before I turn it in.

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We can read through our TDA more than once!!!

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We can have more inferences and better inferences by , making them longer and they should have better words than fun, cool, and  types of word like that. This is how we can improve our TDAs and our inferencing skills.

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To make sure it perfecto

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A thing that I could improve is me explaining more about my evidence

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You can look over 3 times , you can make better inference and amazing infernceing .

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We can improve our TDAs by giving more detail.

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I agree with jack. We should make sure we go through our TDA and make sure it is PERFECT.

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We can not France more and have better inferences. We also should have longer and longer inferences

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By giving the title and author. Tell the reader why or how my evidence answers the question. Explain your evidence in paragraphs 2 and 3. That’s what I can do to improve my TDAs.

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This is ELA an people mare misspelling things when they write these comments? Also, watch out for spelling errors in your TDA

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I think I need to pay attention to the rubric.

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I feel that we could have added more detail to our TDA’s. Not only that, but also we could’ve done better citing our answers. I feel like when some of us cited, we didn’t check if it made sense, or checked if we even cited off the book. I also find that we should’ve done better spelling, and maybe even use figurative language. And some of us mostly only focused on making them long, when we should’ve focused on it making sense, and it being detailed and understanding towards the subject. I’ve seen some other people’s answers, and sometimes I can’t even read them, so we should also worry about our spelling and how well we write.

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I think how we can improve our TDA’s is we can use more vocabulary and follow the rubric.

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We can improve them by making sure we THOROUGHLY read during our reads.

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We can improve on my TDA by doing better inferences and explain about how the author uses dialogue which help readers, we could try to make it clearer to understand. We could also read to someone else to make sure they understand also.

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Ask questions about what you’re writing. Is this all you got? Is it really easy? If it’s easy its to simple. Make it hard. Do you have a good infrens? READ THE RUBRIC. USE IT!!!!!!!!! USE YOUR TADA RUBRIC not any other

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To improve our TDAs we can add more detail and provide a better understanding of the article.

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1 thing I will change about my TDA is to analyze my evidence more thoroughly and use appropriate word meanings.

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I could have probably added a little more detail to my evidence.

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Wez canz impruvez are TDA’z by fixing anything that we missed on the previous onez.

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I think one way we can improve our T.A.D.A.s are that we can use robust vocabulary. This is a major thing because using robust vocabulary can help you study and will help you become a better writer. THANKS FOR READING.

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Something I can do to improve my TDA’s is that I could double check my essay a few times.This way I can catch spelling errors, words that don’t make sense, or other things I missed.

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I think the class could use more...DEATAIL. deatail is Key. Also, vocab and “smart phrases” could get you some good comments from Ms. Janardhanan!😉

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One thing I can do to make my TDA better is to tell the  reader why or how your evidence answers the question and to explain your evidence.

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This is how you can improve TADAS. First you could improve TADAS by checking your spelling on word that you are not great at spelling. Next, you could make sure you indent for every paragraph. Last you could make sure you put a period at the end at every sentence also make sure you use capital letters at the beginning of each sentence. TADA