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1:i have learned about my self that i'am good at convinsing people 2:i'am persuading that people shouls have fun in the ocean 3:i'am proud that my essay was fun 4:the conclution because you needed to reley think hard 5:fiction because it's fun    

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1:i have learned about my self that i'am good at convinsing people 2:i'am persuading that people shouls have fun in the ocean 3:i'am proud that my essay was fun 4:the conclution because you needed to reley think hard 5:fiction because it's fun    

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DAVID VILLARREAL CANTU

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 Josee Luis Quiroga Garza 1. I noticed that im improving in writing.

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 Josee Luis Quiroga Garza 1. I noticed that im improving in writing.

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2. Im persuading people to go to kastaway cay.

3. im proud of my work because I get to comvince people to go to kastaway cay.

4. to do the highliding.

5. non fiction because I get to write about something I know.

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carlos 1Ive learned that if you do a personal essay people will know more about your lofe and what you like.2i can persuade by convincing my reader and im proud for convincing him.3Im proud of all my details and my descriptions to convince my reader.

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carlos 1Ive learned that if you do a personal essay people will know more about your lofe and what you like.2i can persuade by convincing my reader and im proud for convincing him.3Im proud of all my details and my descriptions to convince my reader.

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1. ive learned that i can generate many ideas
2.i am proud of me and Arturo because if it wasntt for his moves i woulnt made this topic
3. the most chalenging part of my writing is to highlight the things i had to

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no.1 i have learned that i con do better and i have to try harder
no.2  i think that i had to put more ideas to [preswade my reader
no.3 im ptowd cuse i did my best

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1. What have i learned as a writer in my personal essays:That you have to incloud convincine paragraphs for pepole to agree .2. What was the most challengeing part to write my essays:The most challengeing part was to do my intruduction. 3. Whats something iam proud in my personal essays is:that i inclod many details

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I'm proud of my self because1. this took me more calm of that my parents are ceperated 2.my brothers can not control that my parents are seperated so i want them to read this 3.if your parents are seperated i also wanted to read this

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1 i learned information about how to do a personal essay.

2  im proud of my essay because i did it realy well with lots of puntuation and capital letters

3 the most dificult part was to make my essay with push your thinking

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1. I am proud that i can make people notice that dogs are inportant
2. I am proud of my essay because I know i convinsed my reader
3. I am proud that my essay has a lot of details.

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See all the wonderful things Megan Wettstaedt has made

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1:I have learned that i am not tat good and i can do better
2:i am proud that i did alot of effort
3:the most chalenging part was writing the conclusion

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1. I am proud that i wrote with alot of details.
2. I learned that i put alot of reasons and details but i forget somethings i need to put.
3. I learned i sometimes forget CAPITALS and punctuation!!!!!!!!!!!

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1.i'm proud of my self because i have been tring my best and i have been beter in writing. And i have 2.put my thinkings and i put a lot of resons and infomaion and i can tell some abute my life.  And people 3.think what maby i am thinking and i will like that some people change ther mind when they read my book

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1. i am proud of my writing.
2.i like how my writing has a'lot of detail
3.what i need to work on is capitals and punctuation so my writing would be more undrestandable

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1. That I add lot's of detail but sometimes I think of what I'm writing and skip some parts but when I check I fix it.
2. By hooking the reader and giving reasons every body can relate too not only some readers.
3.I am proud that I finished in time and i wrote about and important topic .

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1 What I learned from myself was that I can generate ideas fast and be ready on time
2 I can persuade other people to follow my opinion by putting a lot of detail in my reasons
3 The most hard thing of the essay writing was that you have to put a lot of detail in your reasoning to convince your reader

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1. i liket that i could give my opinion and i am proud of my self that i could tell it 2. THAT I COULD LEARN TO DO A ESSAY 3 THE MOST CHALINGING PART WAS THAT I NEEDED TO REVISE AND CEK AND PUT ALOT OF YOU OPINION

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1. I'm proud of my personal essay because I think I really did a claim and people could understand my essay.
2. The most challenging part was writing a lead.
3. I would like to explore a fairy tale .

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1.The thing that I am proud of my essay is how persuasive it is,I impressed my self.
2.The most challenging thing  to do was having classes replace my my writing time.
3.What I have learned about myself is that I did not know I had the power to make such persuasive writing.

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1 I am proud of my self because people get to learn a new lesson

2 The most challenging thing was putting all of the of the ditails

3 I needed to think alot

4 You get to tell people about things in your life

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1-I'm proud of that I can tell a bit about my life
2-The most challenging part was the 3 reasons because you needed to think a lot
3-I have learned that you can tell a bit of your life to the world!