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Use alliteration as well as sophisticated nouns/verbs to up level your work.

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Try to use complex sentences, complex sentences make your writing better as they add detail.

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Description writing.

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Movement verbs, complex sentences, embedded clauses, similes with expanded nouns.

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Use adverbs to up-level sentences as this will give us a higher level in our writing by adding more detail whilst telling the reader more.

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Use a variety of punctuation to impact the flow of the story whilst adding suspense.

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Settings

Movement verbs              e.g    swallow

Connectives    e.g     furthermore

Adverbs         e.g    Truly

Adjectives         e.g      frasty

speech verbs           e.g  Uttered

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Use sophisticated connectives or embed clauses within sentences.

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Semi colons:

He was huge, with large wings; He was huge, with enormous teeth.

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metaphor: white blanket of snow covered the hill

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Complex sentences give you more information and extend your senten

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Make sure you use connectives e.g after all, nevertheless, thus, despite as well as although

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Use connectives ,adverbs adjectives.

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Only use and,but and so when you can't think or use anything else

and if you can use something else use it!

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We are going to improve a paragraph:

Although the rest of the guests were distressed, it had been the shortest stick the whole time, not the longest. So that had given the thief away. How had this happened? How did the clever judge know which one was the thief?

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Expanded similes:

As tall as a giraffe, stretching.

Metaphor:

He was an eagle, fling through the sky.

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Use sophisticated connective such as although, nevertheless.
use

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And, but, or so unless you can't think of anything else

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Try to use expanded similes to extend your sentence.

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ONLY use and, but or so IF ABSLOUTLY NECESSARY!

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Try to use sophisticated connectives like however, nevertheless or  although rather than and, but or so.

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Only use and in lists

You could use complex sentences maybe 2 or 3 simple

Up level words

Use nouns , verbs and phrases