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Is the interview shot framed using the rule of thirds?

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Is there enough head room above the subject’s head to the top of the frame?

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Is the subject looking into the direction of the audience with the correct orientation?

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Is there shallow depth of field? If not, why not?

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Does the subject speak in full sentences?

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Interview subject guided to speak personally

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Interview subject guided to speak personally

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Does the subject speak in specific and personal ways that you can relate to and understand?

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Does the subject tell any interesting stories or share information that is new to you?

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Is there a beginning, middle and end?

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Does the order of the interviews seem to flow logically? If not, do you have suggestions for other ways to order the clips?

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Does anything seem extraneous or boring and can be edited out?

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What b-roll footage, scenes, reenactment, expert interviews, statistics, or narration could you see being added to the documentary?

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The framing was off for both clips, if the person is positioned on one side they should look in the opposite direction. There could've been less head room on the first edit. there also could've been a better depth of field.

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the content was really good! answering what makes you guys feel invisible was really helpful and interesting to the story.