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1.good structure and speaking speed
2.some spell mistakes and word font on the slides need to be adjusted

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1，PPT content arrangement is reasonable
2， In some slides, It is advisable not to write too much, especially complete sentences.

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Overall good and structural presentation.
You can highlight bullet points and use more presentation vocabulary to guide audience

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1, It is recommended to add in-citation to the text.
2, The content is clear.

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1. Clear structure and good presentation skills
2. some slides needs some more information for listener to catch the key points and some more citation to support the idea

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1. don't forget the in-cataions and pictures.
2. good structure.

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1. good structure and so reliable resources.
2. focus on more details such as add some subheadings to the slides, make audience feel more clear to follow.

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Suggest you to adjust the font size and format to make it consistent, add some charts to support the view or the picture.

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You can make some key points with brief information to let audiences better understand the content.
Adjust the typesetting.

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1.Very clear structure and focus
2.Needs to be supported with more data graphs

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Good data sources are very well sourced and examples are sufficiently specific

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1. You can reread some keywords when you are pre
2. Good structure, it will be better if the title of each page points to outline more clearly.

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Don't forget to add citations,
great outline

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1. Add more data, pictures and citations to support the point of view.
2. Well structure, the structure of the introduction needs to be improved and adjusted.

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1. Some places need to add some text information, and some places need to add some pictures and data information.
2. Good structure, it will be better if the focus is clearer.

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1. theme of the presentation is nice
2. more work on the structure and more reference need to be added

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It is a clear and structured presentation and I suggest that some information that is not very important can be simplified to avoid speech timeout

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1. Some sections like the problem can add more information.
2. Some places need to adjust the structure.

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1，It's very informative.
2,  It's better if you have visual data.

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1.nice structure but introduction need to be adjusted
2. keep looking for support information

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1, The structure is very complete.
2,The format must be uniform.

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The outline is relatively clear, but more diagrams need to be added for proof

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The PPT needs to be revised in the detail section and the outline needs to be a little clearer.
The data sources are very detailed.

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nice structure
need to adjust some section titles

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Good outline

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It will better to highlight the key point