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Praise- very good story
Polish- more pictures

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Praise: very confidence and loud which is good and I love the story line , love how upfront you are too
Polish:

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Great narration
Could be

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She sounds really confident in her presentation. I wish the presentation was on Google Slides for organization. Overall, I liked the story a lot. Short and simple.

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Praise: she is extremely confident

Polish: maybe put it On slides so everyone can see

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You did a good job of explaining what alchoho can do to a person. Maybe try adding some colors because it is a children’s book and children are attracted to colors and bright stuff.

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She had a very good message and told the story well.

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Praise: the confidence is shown with hand gestures
Polish: try to keep the book still so we can see the photos

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Praise: really cute story and pictures
Polish: maybe add more details

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Confident, good story to talk about

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-I think if you would have added some color it would have been even better!
-I like the story :) so sweet!

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Praise: very nice
Polish: the story focus had confused me but your brought it back together at the end about good friends

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Praise: Extremely confident voice, sounds good
Polish: None

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Praise- good explanation and creativity

Polish- maybe have a little more voice projection, nothing major

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Praise: Her book is well thought out and the mature content can be related to other people who’s parents have fell into alcohol.

Polish: She tends to look down at the floor and stutter a little bit when talking due to lack of confidence.

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Praise: has a nice style to the book (the pics with the writing)
Polish: none

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Nice touching story
I would’ve liked to see the pictures

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Praise: I like your answers to the initial questions because I thought it was considerate!
Polish: Next time, I think you should add more color to your pictures!
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Praise// your voice projects and I can hear this great.
Polish// your story was great, and I can’t think of anything to fix