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Site plan - jalan dan curb luar
-pedestrian issues accessing the site
-promenade (waterfront public, pedestrian access)
Entrance- pedestrian access
-waiting area for non members
-lane for members and non members
Waterbody- organic not rigid
Column and beam size

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Nur Aqilah Humaira Binti Mohd Hazmi (2017654832)

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Nur Aqilah Humaira Binti Mohd Hazmi (2017654832)

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1. Consider services area and others function for multipurpose hall
2. Landscape - continuity between the building to marine area, especially dekat pedestrian walk near multipurpose hall
3. Reduce circulation (indoor)
4. Accommodation - need to consider purpose of big balcony

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Nur Aqilah Humaira - 2017654832 (External Critique 02) - Google Jamboard

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Nur Aqilah Humaira - 2017654832 (External Critique 02)

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Haris Danial bin Mohd Makhzan (2017654942)

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Haris Danial bin Mohd Makhzan (2017654942)

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1. site plan - neighbourhood context should be larger scale
2. entrance - guard house should be larger
3.  facade studies - relate to bio
4. narration for design

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External crit Haris Danial bin Mohd Makhzan 217654942 - Google Jamboard

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External crit Haris Danial bin Mohd Makhzan 217654942

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1) Roof to re-consider
2) Marina - fixed/floating
3) Engineering aspect to consider
4) Detail out kitchen
5) Hierarchy of design unclear
6) Layout toilet need to re-design

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1) Reduce the size of service road and add landscape instead.
2) Add another 1 fire staircase
3) Detail out accommodation layout
4) Facade and building scheme need to add a hint of locality

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EXTERNAL CRIT 02 - NUR ILYANA - Google Jamboard

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Site Plan - continuous of pedestrian walkway towards the city for the users
Lobby - open exhibition should arranged and not to be scattered. Retail in lobby should be changed to maximize view towards the river.
Fire Stair - needs to be reconsidered
Accomodation - needs to be considered to not be a normal hotel house.
Multipurpose Hall - size needs to be considered.

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Adzim Hadi External Crit 2 - Google Jamboard

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Harnasywa Asyiqin binti Hakimi (2017654982)

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Harnasywa Asyiqin binti Hakimi (2017654982)

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1. Fix layout parking with the proper road size
2. Besarkan main entrance
3. Retail shoplots terlalu kecil
4. Consider tambah seating dekat water feature
5. Swimming pool besarkan dan tukar jadi regular shape
6. Design window selari dengan roof

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EXTERNAL CRIT 02 - HARNASYWA ASYIQIN - Google Jamboard

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Ilya Amirah Ismail Aljuhari (2017654936)

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Ilya Amirah Ismail Aljuhari (2017654936)

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Ground Floor
- expand drop off
- design toilet to be more luxurious
- expand multipurpose hall
First floor
- collaboration deck facing river
- expand lift lobby to 3m
- fire staircase, calculate travel distance

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EXTERNAL CRIT 02 ILYA AMIRAH 2017654936 - Google Jamboard

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1) Re-check the site setback
2) For public building at least 2 fire staircase
3) Double volume for hall
4) For service road and sliproad, consider the turning radius
5) Create more activities on the site

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- for public spaces/area should be more accessible (ramp/elevator/etc)
- enclosed the lobby to control the safety and accessibility
- expand the size of office
- design the toilet more exclusive
- determined the staircases for fire requirement at multipurpose hall
- expand the corridor and can be prefunction area
- design the multipurpose hall (stage placement/audio room)
- use different types/design for the roof based on the spaces

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[1] To explore more roof design
[2] Washroom to be more comfortable and fitting for high standard building
[3] Access to restaurant to be controlled, avoid multiple entrance / exit.
[4] Hall to be in proportion, avoid inefficiency ( further from stage )
[5] To highlight building axis, correspond to building form and neighbourhood context

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EXTERNAL CRIT 02 (AFIQ ADLAN HARIS) commented

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Muhammad Danial Bin Mohd Fadhli (2017654856)

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Muhammad Danial Bin Mohd Fadhli (2017654856)

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1) redesign main lobby and pre function
2) multipurpose hall double-storey with long spanning beams
3) relocate surau and stairs
4) consider the view from above during designing for swimming pool
5) explore overall forms and how to implement concept

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1)add more decking near waterside
2)MPH should at least have perfect square shape, then can have extra space form, - add pre function room
3)consider Malaysia climate for roof design instead of flat
4)increase retail and gymnasium space size
5)consider grand staircase in lobby as public or private
6)can consider cigar room to have waterside view.
7)rooftop garden, justify carefully, sunlight etc.
8) double corridor design

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CRIT EXTERNAL 2 - ARYNA - Google Jamboard

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GROUND FLOOR
.Buat lobby atau welcoming area untuk public wing
. kurangkan hard landscaping kat open area, encourage flexible spaces
FIRST AND SECOND FLOOR
. flexible space tu tak nampak kat hiearchy ( core bulding)
. services / room / changing area di second floor tu patut di letakan di supporting wing. Core area patut ada open flexible space tu

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1- Design landscape for green area
2- Study on facade
3- wastage space need to be design
4- reduce indoor circulation

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1) Details drawing pavement (ground floor plan)
2) letak green area depan retails bukan jalan tar
3) pintu multi hall xboleh guna sliding
4) fire hydrant kne letak dalam layout
5) details accomondation drwing

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1. Bezakan circulation untuk drop off dan parking
2. Besarkan kawasan luar sebelum entrance
3. Besarkan swimming pool, buat variety of swimming pool
4.kecilkan kitchen
5. design public waterfront

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SPACE PLANNING
- Recheck supplementary spaces to enhance visual linkage.
-Orientation of water and fire tank for a more direct vehicular access.
-Add fire access for multipurpose hall.
ROOF
-Study space frames for roof construction.
-Roof underpowering.

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SHYELANIE ~ EXT CRIT 2 - Google Jamboard

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1. Reconsider placement of guard house, placed it between the main entrance and services entrance
2. Reconsider swimming pool placement - change from first floor to ground floor
3. Concept must also be applied on the site (connecting the building with the site) especially the esplanade with the river
4. Linkage between the building  the esplanade and river
5. Presentation wise must include tge development process (bubble, zoning, schematic etc)
6. Section must include site context ( buildings and slope)

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1. need to change the the circulation for the parking
2.  make area in the loading bay that can allow lorry can enter.
3. reallocate the surau.

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2017655018

- details drawing
- add something on the wide area
- surau?
- add stairs

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EXTERNAL CRIT 02 KHAIREEN - Google Jamboard

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- change entrance to be direct and nearer to entrance to avoid jam
- space planning is already clear except details like restaurant size, size of gym , location of swimming pool
- detail more the section
- 3D looks good despite elevation not really showing it
https://jamboard.google.com/d/1sGOP3GcGeso5HrTF39CQAbFFRGdWxrflyCbzFlQkycA/edit?usp=sharing

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Comment from external panel:

1)      Anticipate the congestion to control the congest at first floor for multipurpose hall

2)      Enlarge the exit width for multipurpose hall (corridor must be bigger)

3)      Multipurpose hall split into 2 or 4 functions room so that more functions can be run at once.

4)      Stairs to go up to multipurpose hall need to be bigger and looks grand (welcome the visitor to somewhere special).

5)      Add 1 exit staircase to comply with fire requirements.

6)      Explore on roof form to give the identity and character to the building (imej samudra) – modernise from vernacular.

7)      Indicate the location of fire hydrant, hosereel and etc.

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2nd External Critique (MAISARAH JAMIL) - Google Jamboard

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