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Hi my names

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Oh man don't be stigey

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I stare off into the marshmallow clouds listening to the soothing sound of the whispering wind and the galloping waves.

The techniques used are zoomorphism when i say galloping waves. Another technique is personification when I refer to the wind as whispering like a person.

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Pigeon tasty

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POT NUDLE

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Ohhh ya ya ya lord of the

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Like a dream come true the crystal coloured water splashed up my shins over lapping my feet and on to the sand.

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The sea collapsed on the shore

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The sea has been freshly painted with a range of watercoloured blues melting and overlapping one another
This is effective as waves do overlap one another and is describing the water as colourful.

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The simile ; the sand looked like a white peice of paper.  This is effective because
it describes the beach as beautiful as possible because most people are drawn towards white sand.

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It was as calm as a baby sleeping

This is effective because it shows how good or bad somthing is it also gives an image to imagine

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It was like a dream

This is effective because it shows that it's unrealistic

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As the sun set into the night it created a path of redness though the sea. 🌊

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The sunset sank in the sky, projecting pastel like colours on the ocean below

This is effective because it uses alliteration and can imagine what the colours look like in the sky

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The sun  set was like neon paint
This is good because makes you think of the colour oh man don't  be stingey

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Cautiously, I tiptoed along the scorching sand.

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"Soft sand"
Alliteration :)

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You could hear the gentle waves tapping the shore

It's affective as it compares the sea to what a person can do (personification)

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He dived like tom Dailey going for gold.

This effective because it shows how the person is confident and it shows how he is trying his hardest to be like a real diver.

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No noises could break the tranquile atmosphere.

This is effective because it shows you just how quiet and peaceful the beach really is.

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Different languages behind me from the cafe full of tourists, the beach though was as quiet as a pin dropping to the ground. To my right and left many more clouds appeared, evening time rose to a start and the sun started to set.....

This is effective beacause it does not suggest what is going to happen in the evening and therefore leaves the reader on suspense as to what is going to happen next.

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The simile "the beach was so quiet it was as lovely as a Sunday delight" this compares the beach to be hot and a lovely place to have ice cream

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You could see the tiny crystals in the sea shining as bright as the sun on a summers morning.

This is effective because it shows how beautiful the sea is and it paints a picture for the reader .

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The footprints were like a trail of bread crumbs left by hansel and Gretal.

This is effective because it leaves the reader with no answer for the reason for the footprints, it also is effective because it gives the reader a simile to refer to as an example of what it is like.

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The sun was setting for a well earnt rest beaming colours in to the sky.

This is effective because it makes you think that the sky is filled with colours.

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A Canvas of fire was spread across the horizon.🌅

This is effective as it is a metaphor so it allows the writer to describe something without actually deascribing the object allowing the reader to pain a picture in there mind.

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The soft but crunchy sand underneath your feet.

This is effective because it describes what it's like on the beach.

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Post your best descriptive sentence/ technique and explain why it is effective.