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He did not wait to start talking and he rarely said um and told them very clearly what they want.

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He did not wait to start talking and he rarely said um and told them very clearly what they want.

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I think something jack did well on is

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i think that he was very confadent about going on live tv with millions watching

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I think something he did well was he explaned what his buiness does and he also was vary confdent and wasnt shy but he also talked a little fast but other then that I think he did really good.

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His intro was very good, he had a good strong base to work with, we did not see his conclusion so I can not talk about that, although what I saw and what I can talk about he did very well except he talk a little fast and it did not feel like the words were flowing.

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he did welll, he explained what his buisnees does well,a and why he started it. he talked a bit fast though.

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He did really good but talked a little fast

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I think that he was very organized and exited. he was panting at the end.

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one thing jack did good was the criteria, "Speaks loudly, clearly, and slowly enough to be heard well." because he made what he wanted to do very clear and the adults understood him. one criteria Jack did not meet in my opinion was, "Includes gestures and emotion to convey appropriate tone. " because he had the same sort-of robotic tone the whole time and there was not really any emotion

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Something that Jack did good was showing gestures and emotions, and engaging his audience. He showed lots of confidence, and had a great enthusiastic tone. Although Jack had many good criteria's, something I think he could of done better was, ending with a big idea. I think that he had a great tone, but he went through explaining, for so long, that he didn't end big.

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I think Jack did good but I think he was a little over confident and excited and I think if he would have been a little calmer he would have done better.

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I think something good jack did was show the way he made money and he also made a company on helping children with making money. Something I think jack can work on is how he wants to spend his money because what if one day he just spends it all on a lego set.

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he did good on everything but he did talk a little fast so i could not understand him sometimes

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did good explaining his thing but he talked to fast.