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FARAH WAHEEDA HASIM_2023623127_LATEST PROPOSAL CRIT 1

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1) show in detail your programme in horizontal and vertical graphic:
- horizontal (zoning layout, indoor & outdoor zoning, accessibility from context into the site, connectivity from other district to your district).
- section (implementation of strategy on site, flow of activities, human perspective into the site)
2) put some pictures (examples) for your proposed activities applied in the site.
3) programme of amusement for adult and tourists? indicate the area in layout plan.
4)study the issues about Meru Theme Park and why it fails as an amusement park.
5)case study for indoor & outdoor activities in site.
6)Detail out the activity during the day and night.
7) show case study and examples of the activity for the kid's edutainment.
8)urban design strategies and terminologies for amusement park.
9) Focus on how to detail out your site into a proper amusement park.

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1. Layered analysis diagram for better understanding
2. Proposals are coherence with the Urban Design Framework policy and goals
3. Redefine issues of the proposed site in relation with the design solution & strategies
4. Encourage permeability through design strategies
5. Included dual functional programme (2 in 1 street furniture)
6. Increase connectivity with surrounding context ; from waller court condominium, amusement park, kinta riverfront hotel, laman sejahtera & healing district
7. Acknowledging current & future nodes for the proposals ; designing as a whole
8. Encourage combined activities for people to linger longer
9. Integrate tropical regionalism approach in programme, layout for people comfort
10. Consideration of noise source from future proposal ; amusement park
11. Existing community for potential crowd
12. Accessibility from future masterplan proposal into the site (waller court condominium, amusement park to site)
13. Added graphic design strategies for design decisions and priorities

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A0 CRITIQUE 1 - LAILA BATRISYIA ALAUDIN  .pdf flatten-compressed

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1. Convert site synthesis into layered diagrams to illustrate the differences between each layer.
2. Incorporate design strategies after receiving feedback during last week's critique session.
3. Reprogram relevant programs related to the heritage area.
4. Present illustrated graphics in the design strategies to provide visual representation to others.
5. Reconnect with the main objective of making Ipoh city a walkable city.
6. Find ways to prevent sound disturbance from art performances to nearby temples.
7. Position the main entrance near the parking area to allow the public to explore the walkable culture gallery.
8. Provide pedestrian access to the river and consider user safety.
9. Provide a section overview of activities along the river and pocket spaces.
10. Create pathways for residents to relax in community areas.
11. Utilize land-use for commercial purposes and provide spaces such as modular stalls for local food, which can serve as the backbone of cultural integration.
12. Transform the community center area into a sustainable space by offering activities like tree planting, especially for the elderly.
13. Reprogram activities intended for the art performance area.

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1. The parking area have a potential for main access from the back lane nearby
2. When there is existing commercial don't proposed another commercial, it will create conflict and competition among the retailers, instead think on how to contribute to them,  create a market lane etc..
3. Think how to revitalize the whole site relate to surrounding context.
4. Sometimes we don't even have to create a building, just create a place, play with streetscape ,hardscape and softscape
5.create a pass through bridge across the river from a potential nodes (Sk Panglima Gantang) to Taman Dr., sometimes they just want to cross the river.
6. If the place did not have a landmark, create a landmark (sky bar)
7. The kids park link the whole site through trees and courses
8. Explore deeply on the concept and relate with the curvy design , like the density of the neighborhood creates more intense, bigger fluidity circulation, fly creates hierarchy.
9. Add on longitudinal section to see the whole site.
10. Hypothetical diagram on what consequences if a certain design is proposed that effect the neighborhood.
11.Link to the other district through bridge, trishaw, pedestrian, jogging ,bicycle track and river cruise.

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ABDULLAH AZAM BIN ROZAINI 2023112343 BOARD A0

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-Programs with pictures for better understanding of the site.
-Row of Angsana tree create axis & use for passive & active area.
-New path to form multiple pocket space & closer activity in effort for the revitalization of the river.
-Interconnected 5 nodes for accessibility and marker sequence to the site.
-New activity injected into site program for new magnet(pulling factor) with support from other activities.
-Capitalized on the character, geography & the community to relate back with concept.
-Diagrams of responsive environment to show sequential process of site urban design decisions .

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FARAH WAHEEDA BINTI HASIM_Individual Crit Session 1

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FARAH WAHEEDA BINTI HASIM_Individual Crit Session 1

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1. Integration in the culture
- People from a culture adopt the essence of another culture. Study more on how other people could attract to learn another culture. Regenerate the culture that link to the urban design.

2. Return of Investment
- What could give in terms of economic beneficial of the proposed area?

3. Design Intervention
- Provoke real world action and intervene in human behavior. To improvise the site itself to which relates human behavior.

4. Go deeper in Urban Terminology
- Could study more, do some research what kind of hardscape, softscape which can integrate to your design strategies. Think of the people's comfort.

5. Public space
- Instead of propose a low or green wall, make use of the existing building. Play with the structure or facade.

6. Accessibility
- Show where the festivals event held. For example, thaipusam trail.

7. Human Behavior problem
- For the Ganges River inspired design, how do you think that people would not pollute the river by not scatter the ashes since Ganges River objective is a place for religious purpose?

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CRIT SESSION 1 BOARD 25/6/2023 LAILA BATRISYIA ALAUDIN 2023718181

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Add more picture and sketches to visualize whats in the site and add section.

Plan properly for the programs to be put in the site and detail up all activities, placement, time for those activity, and what benefits will the society get from the activity

To add and refer precedent study on the river, such as Melaka River, how they rejuvenize the river and all the programs they put along the river.

Focus on the riverfront.

Detailing the meaning of the concept and how you derive the concept into translating in your design.

Temple in the site shouldn't be the big issue, unless we want to preserve the temple . Instead we need to more focus on the river because river is our main subject.

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Comments on Abdullah Azam Bin Rozaini 2023112343

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Comments on Abdullah Azam Bin Rozaini 2023112343

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1. The parking area have a potential for main access from the back lane nearby
2. When there is existing commercial don't proposed another commercial, it will create conflict and competition among the retailers, instead think on how to contribute to them,  create a market lane ect.
3. Think how to revitalize the whole site relate to surrounding context.
4. Sometimes we don't even have to create a building, just create a place, play with streetscape ,hardscape and softscape
5.create a pass through bridge across the river from a potential nodes (Sk Panglima Gantang) to Taman Dr, sometimes they just want to cross the river.
6. If the place did not have a landmark, create a landmark (sky bar)
7. The kids park link the whole site through trees and courses
8. Explore deeply on the concept and relate with the curvy design , like the density of the neighborhood creates more intense, bigger fluidity circulation, fly creates hierarchy.
9. Add on longitudinal section to see the whole site.
10. Hypothetical diagram on what consequences if a certain design is proposed that effect the neighborhood.

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Abdullah Azam Bin Rozaini 2023112343 Crit 3 comments 

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PRESENTATION AND COMMENTS : ANIS NUR SYAZWANI BINTI MANTAIB

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PRESENTATION AND COMMENTS : ANIS NUR SYAZWANI BINTI MANTAIB

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1. To study more on the community to relate with concept and site context
2. to make use of the site contour especially through section
3. to strengthen concept framework : The Platform Framework
4. to improve on site study graphics whereby to reduce the usage of words
5. to detail up space programme and activities on site
6. to study more on the community activities around site

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1. Explore and gather information about spaces requirements of the arts and crafts activities that included.
2. Proposed water fountain need to be at the distance from the river edge.
3. Move the proposed Memoryland and the vendors zone to below side of the site in order to response to the water fountain location. Replaced with the sitting area.
5. Add section, 3D of the site, horizontal graphic and vertical graphic to explain the proposal clearly.
6. Do not separate the tourism zone and the vendors zone.
7. Proposed bridge to the other side of the river.

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Site context:
1. to improve contextual analysis with pictures
2. provide fundamental evidence about culture and trends

Site issue:
1. Analyse and provide fundamental issues on why People's Park is an underutilized landmark with graphical evidence.
2. Provide opinions on what to improve in term of design to revitalize People's Park

Design strategies:
1. to ponder upon on how people will use your site compatible to site context
2. relate the strategies with contextual culture and trend.
3. to study about figur ground theory
4. detail up space programme

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1) show in detail your programme in horizontal and vertical graphic:
- horizontal (zoning layout, indoor & outdoor zoning, accessibility from context into the site, connectivity from other district to your district).
- section (implementation of strategy on site, flow of activities, human perspective into the site)
2) put some pictures (examples) for your proposed activities applied in the site.
3) programme of amusement for adult and tourists? indicate the area in layout plan.
4)study the issues about Meru Theme Park and why it fails as an amusement park.
5)case study for indoor & outdoor activities in site.
6)Detail out the activity during the day and night.
7) show case study and examples of the activity for the kid's edutainment.
8)urban design strategies and terminologies for amusement park.
9) Focus on how to detail out your site into a proper amusement park.

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1. Proposal during night. How? detail up zoning
2. Detail up sunken amphitheatre based on existing site
3. Detail up arts activities/programs
4. Refer case study riverfront : Amsterdam, Norway, etc.
5. View across site, how?
6. Create social/interaction with local @ tourist activities
7. Horizontal (section) and vertical (plan) on designing urban.
8. High tide & low tide activities
9. Urban design strategies and terminologies
10. Focus on how to create a better riverfront that attract people.

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-Relate the activity with the concept (Program)

-Take advantage of the Angsana tree (Shade,shadow,green element)

-Path create edges to the river
(Something to ponder)

-Respond towards the 5 nodes in the park & design connection to the park
(What benefits for others?)

-Introduce new activity/programs/elements into the site
(Pulling factor)

-Capitalize on the strength of the landscape just like the concept
(Isthmus Garden/Park)

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1. Visbility - linkages between surrounding (front,rear,left,right)
2. Healing zone - buffer area, security & safety
3. How to enhance with the surrounding context?
4. How your proposal benefit the neighbourhood?
5. Permeability - vehicular, people movement in different direction
6. Need to consider the condition of the site, before and after proposal
7. Consider masterplan proposal ; amusement park, waller court condominium, commercial area (within proposed site). How to connect with these?
8. Need to refer Urban Design Framework (UDF), comply with the guideline stated in it
9. How to revitalise the existing river? Through programme? Design strategy?
10. Homelessness is not the major issue, instead the bigger issue is about safety and security

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Use sectional diagram to show existing context and implementation of design strategic.

Activities and program need to show how it react in design strategies.

Design space need to consider all type group of people (universal design).

Need more diagram and example to show how design strategic and connection between space work.

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• To focus on more site context and site synthesis, how my programme will effect the design and how will it response to surrounding. (Accessibility,permeability)

• Detail up on programme proposal

•Need to do more hypothetical research in order to support the programme proposal and design strategy

• Need more conceptual sectional drawing in order to know the relationship on one space to another space (zonning)

• Design strategy for one of the goal proposal "Universal Pedestrian"

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Explaination of design strategies related to program/activities

Arrange how to analyse context (show arrow of accessibility)

"Intervator programming"

Accommodation

Study on restoration, regeneration, reimagine (urban terminology)

Urban design strategies

Introduce existed land use (commercial - food)