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I think his speech was really good and inspirational, I think he proved some really good points in like. I like how he used the rap rhyme thingy, and how he was moving to get your attention. He also used pauses and repetition .

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His speech was really powerful.The way the speed changed was a good technique because it gave it more impact and kept you hooked in. The rhyming at the end was really good because it made more impact. He also used repetition. It added more of an impact. He did his speech on something he was passionate about so it didn't sound thrown together last minute

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I think his speech was powerfully inspirational and he used his powerful voice very smartly. his intent was to inspire people of his race to be the most outstanding race that they can be.  He's used the fact that hes brown and describing that he's brown how he does the start and Ie ' i am brown like the chairs and tables i eat at i am brown' etc etc.
i think that he has a brilliant mind because he is saying that he should ignore the stereo typing and just be who he is and be smart, be sporty but dont be the stereo type his race is made up to be.
i think another one of his techniques he used was he was loud and he tried to make you feel symapthetic and guilty because im sure that all have at least laughed at one racist joke

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Joshua did a powerful speech. i liked the way he was changing speed and i like the way he would change his voice to loud and then

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His speech was powerful I like the bit when he talk about south auckland

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Joshua did a powerful speech, and i could tell that he felt really strongly about this topic. he had a lot of dramatic pauses but that pauses made me think. he raised his voice at times and speed up but i could still follow along. repetition "brown brother" it stuck with me, like its suppose to do. i thought those were the perfect words to use. he did some a lot of rhyming in his speech and it was cool.

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I liked how he put in some heritage. He raised his voice from high to low he also used repetition, actions, pauses i also feel like he used some humour to. He also asked rhetorical questions, I really liked his confidence and how he didn't used cue cards and his actions just made the speech stronger, for some reason i felt like i connected i really loved his speech

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His speech was very powerful. The skills he used was repetition he kept repeating brown brother. He changed his speed he wasn't fast and he wasn't always slow he kept changing the speed which hooked me in. He kept on hooking me in by saying words in different ways. His actions were a great way to make his speech way better and it made me want to watch it and not zone out. He was passionate about speech and about his topic as it was about his life and what has happened in his life.

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His speech was powerful because of the rhyming ,the tone of his voice , he  used lots of gestures.He kinda owned up to heaps of things like how he didn't do good in school but he wanted to break  down his barriers.

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He used a lot of rhyming, the rhyming got me engaged.Used a lot of actions to reengage the audience. Related to the audience

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I find that this speeach is sad and I feel like  he was Dised when he was little he felt discluded and alone in a so called "bad" world. He was talking about his comfort zone and to break thoses barriers to find your full potenual. His skills he used actions, stories, moving around, rhyming,  humor, and raping. This would have taken him s long time and true stories.
Don't be afraid of what you look like and who you are just be the first to do what you want to do.

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i was very ingaged in how he talked from high to low and fast to slow and how he rhymed when he talked and he used lots of gestures and hand movement and how he was stuck in south Auckland because he was born there. i liked it that he said he can do it

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Joshua's speech was very powerful. He used a lot of dramatic pauses and gestures. At the beginning of his speech he talked a lot about South Auckland and breaking down barriers and stepping out of your comfort zone. Then he got talking about hi race and "brown brother". I think a lot of people would be inspired by how courageous Joshua was about talking about the colour of his skin. And people could also be inspired by the way he was talking about his race without shame. It was a very good speech and had lots of good techniques

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Joshua's speech was powerfull because of his language and gestures, he used a lot of dramatic pauses and he was talking about how hes stuck in South Auckland. Joshua used really good repetition and he had a lot of potential in his speech.One of his main points were to be coragous and strong.His moto was "I can do it!"Don't be afraid to take risks, because he is proud to a brown brother.

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i thought this speech

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about what he is speaking about. I love it so much!

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Wow this was supper powerful. I think that if me as a white girl read this speech i wouldnt really make sence so thats how i know that it was close to him. You can see that he is very passionat

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Joshuas speech was so powerfull at the begining he was talking about a barriar and a standard that not only other people put on you but what you put on your self then he talked about breaking those barriers and aceving your full poteial and steping out of your comfort zone after that he got into a hole different speech about your skin coulor and i think that was because people also put a standed on you because of you colour so i think that his speech was about how people put a standered on you and you put a standed on your slef and how you should just ignore them and prove them wrong i mean look at him he ovesly had stadeds put on him and he just ignored them and got to where he is now

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joshuas speech is powerful he is a great influince to this world i bet he has inspired heaps of his people to try better and achieve for

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I have something to add; when Joshua said
"brown brother," he wasn't just talking about men, he included woman into the phrase, too.

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The speech is very strategic because he started rapping at times to slowing right down and he talked about stereotypes about brown brothers on how sometimes he would act like something was there like the city holding him back with invisible barriers.

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he was probobly about  rasit people and how darker skined people are seporated from the world       and i think he wants to change  that because he grew  up in a place were brown people are cut out of sisiety

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Joshua Iosefo's speech was powerful. At the beginning, he talked about stepping out of your comfort zone; breaking down the walls that you built around your self. Then he practically got into a whole different speech. Just because of the colour of your skin, you don't have to be scared of the fact that you might, be the first of your culture, to graduate; to do something worthy of life itself. You might be the first, but if you are, then others shall follow in your footsteps. He also rapped, or rhymed, I noticed. He spoke fast in parts, and once he got near the end of the elongated sentence, he slowed down. And he pointed things out that stereotype-people of his culture would do, not all, but most. And he wasn't afraid to speak of his people, he stood up, and gave his opinion, he told them to do something with their lives. He spoke out, and he wasn't scared to do so.

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Joshua's speech was inspiring in the way that he was open about him, his race and that he was a 'brown brother' that he was open about the fact of the sterio type of brown or black people being bus drivers, taxi drivers, drunks, gamblers, kfc eaters and low academic achievers.

he was also inspiring in the way that his story may have come from personal experience, and telling you to brake down those invisible barriers and be strong because that's what they are 'invisisble'

the way he was both fast and slow in his speech kept you hooked in.

all in all I think his speech was inspiring and motivational.

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I found joshua's speech was clever because it felt like you were in his situation. his speech was about racism it was his skin would determine who he was and otherslike him
to not have to be criminals just because the colour of their skin.

close to 4.59 minutes that Joshua started rhyming and rapping about his life and what others and himself think not all but some. the way he presented it felt like he was saying that the colour of ones skin to be differant not jude because of a skin tone or their shade.

his speech had differant speeds fast to slow to rap to casual general speaking. He  made points that his skin did not matter on what they are he made points that his people are just people not gansters or criminals

brown brother is aboutone persons belief that they are less because of their colour

his invisible walls were what he felt like his childhood was like being seperated from sociaty from his family

His home in south Auckland he thought he couldn't be more than a invisible futer with rugby with no need of academic
because he did rugby and his future  was rugby a had not much purpose

His speech was motivational and simple
it had meaning depper than the phrase brown brother  it was his life he shared during his speech
And thats what made me find it inspireing

Joshua was clever to the point of sharing his family to a crown which i probably would not do but still his speech was clever and his life in a inspiring speech.

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I think Joshua losefo speech was really good because he said people who are brown think that they have to be gangster and do crime or think they aren't as important as white people but they are and they should pick the right choice and try be the best they are within them.