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Thank you for the feedback everyone

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thank you for the feed back girls,only the last couple of pages I got to grips with the computer and saving links etc. yours are all really good girls 

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thank you for the feed back girls,only the last couple of pages I got to grips with the computer and saving links etc. yours are all really good girls 

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Hannah, i think a few more pics would have been useful but the information you have provided is really in depth

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Hannah, i think a few more pics would have been useful but the information you have provided is really in depth

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I like that you have put in the partv about hidden hotels that people may not be aware of

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I like that you have put in the partv about hidden hotels that people may not be aware of

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Hannah I think a few pics in your presentation would be more attention keeping...if that makes sense sorry

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Hannah I think a few pics in your presentation would be more attention keeping...if that makes sense sorry

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Lynsey I like the page of just local activites in picture form. your presentation is laid out lovely

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Lynsey I like the page of just local activites in picture form. your presentation is laid out lovely

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looks very informative and has a good choice with the new alternative accomodation

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looks very informative and has a good choice with the new alternative accomodation

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for you lyndsey

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Lucy, yours is really interesting, great that you have included local festivals and the information is there on all areas without their being too much reading, pictures are really good

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Lucy, yours is really interesting, great that you have included local festivals and the information is there on all areas without their being too much reading, pictures are really good

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hi sioned it looks very informative eye and eye catching

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hi sioned it looks very informative eye and eye catching

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Sioned, your presentation is really informative for local holidays for the disabled - looks really good and includes the areas we all agreed upon

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Sioned, your presentation is really informative for local holidays for the disabled - looks really good and includes the areas we all agreed upon

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Hi All this is the finished presentation what do you think

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Hi All this is the finished presentation what do you think

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Family Holidays in Pembrokeshire 1st draft

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hi guys here is my finished product, I have taken on bored your feedback hope this finished product is useful and informative

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hi guys here is my finished product, I have taken on bored your feedback hope this finished product is useful and informative

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hi all heres my finished presentation please have a look and leave me know what u think

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hi all heres my finished presentation please have a look and leave me know what u think

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think this is my work:-/

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Hi all, heres my final version please have a a look at it and tell me what you think. Thanks!

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Staycation for Families - Pembrokeshire - Final draft

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I will make sure I take note,and all info as a team what 3 things we need to focus on I have taken on board:)

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I will make sure I take note,and all info as a team what 3 things we need to focus on I have taken on board:)

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gonna go and update and make sure the 3 things are put into my powerpoint pleasure doing a business chat :)

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gonna go and update and make sure the 3 things are put into my powerpoint pleasure doing a business chat :)

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Thanks guys will update mine feed back much appreciated

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Thanks guys will update mine feed back much appreciated

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Cheers for your feedback everyone - i'll now go and update my information based on feedback given and our agreed topics

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Cheers for your feedback everyone - i'll now go and update my information based on feedback given and our agreed topics

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cheers for your input guys in off for lunch now. Will catch up later

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cheers for your input guys in off for lunch now. Will catch up later

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we got three ladies accommadion, link for booking prices and travel/ transport

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we got three ladies accommadion, link for booking prices and travel/ transport

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I agree....also a link so the viewer can find out booking info prices and the such?

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I agree....also a link so the viewer can find out booking info prices and the such?

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I will do that now

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Lynsey maybe pop a few links in as not to have every slide with info on 

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Lynsey maybe pop a few links in as not to have every slide with info on 

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as a team we need to decide what 3 things that we will all make sure we are consistant on in our power points

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as a team we need to decide what 3 things that we will all make sure we are consistant on in our power points

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Accomodation?

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Looking good so far

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Sioned it would be nice for further information on specific areas and acommodation available

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Sioned it would be nice for further information on specific areas and acommodation available

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but everyones looks very inviting and informative 

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but everyones looks very inviting and informative 

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Hi Sioned thank you, i will add in other types of accomodation options to expand the information

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Hi Sioned thank you, i will add in other types of accomodation options to expand the information

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you have used lots of written info but could add a few more pictures

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Lyndsey I feel that you have focused on only type of accommodation and possibly could look at alternatives for those who wouldn't enjoy staying in this type of thing

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Lyndsey I feel that you have focused on only type of accommodation and possibly could look at alternatives for those who wouldn't enjoy staying in this type of thing

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sioned thank you for your comment I have now done what you advised 

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sioned thank you for your comment I have now done what you advised 

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Joanne might be nice to see some background colours on your presentation

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Joanne might be nice to see some background colours on your presentation

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sioned remember to email yourself so we can possibly use it as a template...put prices of hire and how long for. also risk assessment if they do it or do we

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sioned remember to email yourself so we can possibly use it as a template...put prices of hire and how long for. also risk assessment if they do it or do we

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Hannah the images you have used are really good 

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Hannah the images you have used are really good 

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Lucy I feel you need to put images of the accomodations

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Lucy I feel you need to put images of the accomodations

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all looking colourful and eye catching,good work girls

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all looking colourful and eye catching,good work girls

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hannah

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Lucy thanks for your feedback. I love the colors and format of your information. Lyndsey

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Lucy thanks for your feedback. I love the colors and format of your information. Lyndsey

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Thank you for my feedback hopefully it will carry through to the end

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Thank you for my feedback hopefully it will carry through to the end

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lucy

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Sioned i really like the fact that you are focussing on holidays specifically for the disabled

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Sioned i really like the fact that you are focussing on holidays specifically for the disabled

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Lucy I think yours looks very inviting and would keep my attention. You could possibly

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Lucy I think yours looks very inviting and would keep my attention. You could possibly

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so lynsey I really like you out lay with the info and pics Hannah I love the pic you have on your front cover its completely relaxing!!!!!

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so lynsey I really like you out lay with the info and pics Hannah I love the pic you have on your front cover its completely relaxing!!!!!

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hi everyone,thankyou for sending me your work so far,all looking good,be grateful for any feedback on mine.

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hi everyone,thankyou for sending me your work so far,all looking good,be grateful for any feedback on mine.

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Drafts are all looking good

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Presentations are looking good so far