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I need help only putting facts or opinions in my speech that support my thesis.

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I need help elaborating on the topics in my paragraphs.

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need to finish normal editing, cause I was sick
need my speech to be more relatable.
use more data in my second to last paragraph

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I need help on adding more emotion/ pathos to my speech and maybe adding a little bit of ethos.
I also need to really edit my "be" verbs and find better replacements for them.

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I also need help on making someparts  in my story interesting that makes the reader want to read more

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I need help hooking the reader in the first paragraph

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Necesito ayuda with reinforcing my topic and not making it dry and boring

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I need help w/ staying on topic

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I need some help with staying on the main topic, and not getting off track in my speech.

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Help with conclusion, and summarizing my speech in last paragraph

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I need help with a more interesting introduction and also on making all my sentences connect to eachother.

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I need help making my speech flow better.

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I need help on adding more sentences and lengthening some paragraphs.

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I need help on making the sentences connect and flow together. Also on shortening paragraphs.

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I need help on adding extra sentences that flow in my paragraphs that aren't facts.

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I need help with making a good title

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I need help with making the conclusion have a lasting ending on the reader

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I need help with a better title.

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I need help with making a better, more interesting, satisfying conclusion.

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Need help on persuading and providing a reason for people to care and take action.

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Need help on making intro interesting and better hook.

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I need help making the information part more interesting.

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I need help hooking the readers in the first paragraph.

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I need help with a better ending

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In need help using pathos throughout my speech

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I need to make it a page because it is too long even though I've already cut a lot :(

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I need a better title

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I need more help in using transitions for paragraghs, making seem more like a persuasive piece rather than a biography, and making my piece it longer, and for the most part trying to find a better thesis statement.

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I need help using more pathos.

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I need help focusing on one, main topic and making it flow

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I need help making my conclusion more appealing to listeners.

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I need help with making a better title.

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I need help with a better title.

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I need help adding more pathos in my closing paragraph.

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I need help adding more opinions within my speech.

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I need help on extending the key points in my speech.

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I need help on only putting facts or opinions in my speech that support my thesis.

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I need help on elaborating on the topics in each of my paragraphs.

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I need help adding more opinions in my conclusions.

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I need help getting the reader's attention in my introduction.

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I need help appealing the readers/listeners in my introduction.

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I need help extending my speech and making it longer.

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I need more help with staying on one point during my writing without going off track and also on having a clear point. I also over explain things in confusing ways.

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include more facts... ESPECIALLY IN THE PHYSICAL portion...

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needs to flow..have character....have a light mood...