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needs some work on third person ONLY

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Make shure it's 3D person people's 👍

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Tell: great work
Give: work on the summary.
Ask: Why is your summary non descriptive.

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Why did you choose to have 3 sentences before the summary?

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Work on the summary a bit and it will be fine

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Lots of repetition

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Needed a lot of work on the E in ICE.

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I like your hook

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I liked the summary. I wondered if they were arguing wther the two societies were more similar or more different. And they need to work on the drop the mic

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I liked how you had lots supporting details

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Good hook and evidence

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Can I get help with word choice

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Why did you word the re sate claim the way you did?👍

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Maybe to read it over a few times so you are not crossing things ou

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I liked your hook

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Your details supporting the text was awesome

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Spend more time reading over it by yourself.

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The paper was really goodcbut the summery needs working on

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Why are people confused about the drop the mike part

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The conclusions are not very good