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I like how you organized your slides and used a table of contents to make it feel like a story. Very creative! There is so much information about dinosaurs and I thought you found a good balance to make it both interesting and informative. Good work!

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I love to learn about Ancient Egypt. That has to be one of the most fascinating topics, in my opinion. I love how you touched on so many different facts about this time period and made it so interesting to read about. The pictures were excellent, too! Great job, Sausan!!

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What an interesting topic you chose!! I love the idea of comparing women in the past to women today. That is a great way to show your reader how things have changed. Good job!

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I find the topic of Earthquakes so fascinating!! I love that you chose to write about them. I love the subsections that you created to talk about the topic and the way you organized the information. Good job!

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I really enjoyed your slides. I can tell that you put a lot of effort into learning about your topic. You made it interesting and informative for your readers. Very impressive!!

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I love that you chose to write about Rosa Parks. What an inspirational woman! I didn't know a lot of the facts that you included in your piece. I thought that it was interesting that the incident on the bus wasn't her first act of civil disobedience. Good work!

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I can tell that you worked really hard on this. I learned a lot about the different types of weather events that occur. I also really enjoyed watching your WeVideo and think the class would have really enjoyed seeing it if we could have uploaded it.

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I love how you began your piece by setting a mood and painting a picture for your reader. You included a lot of facts that might not be well known. Great job making this historical event interesting to your readers!

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I like that you chose a topic that you are interested in. I like that you divided your subsections into the different time periods that the dinosaurs lived. I would like to see you complete the work with an introduction and conclusion so that we can learn even more from you.

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Well done, Sarthak. I like that you used this as a tool to help your reader prepare themself if they are ever in this type of emergency. I learned a lot from reading your slides. My favorite part was how you explained not only what the cause of these situations are, but what to do to prevent them. Good work!

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OMG! Just reading it, it was like I was back in Disney! I learned so much more!

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That was awesome and before I read it I knew NOTHING!!! It was awesome I learned so much!

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I really liked reading the story and I learned a thing or two reading it.

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I really liked reading the story and I learned a thing or two reading it.

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I knew NOTHING WHATSOEVER about George Washington before reading this docs you made. It might make my mind exploed!

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it is amazing

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I love that you put many facts to go along with your thinking. also I really like how you inserted a picture on where you needed to explain what the boat looked like. That was a really smart idea and it helped me know what was happening. Amazing job Chels!

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great job your description was great i never knew hitler wrote a book Madoc

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great job your description was great i never knew hitler wrote a book Madoc

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I know that you worked really hard on this peice one thing that I learned from it was that there fur is a hollow tube. One thing that I liked was that You really put a lot of energy Great Job!!!!

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I never knew that he was about to be king of the united states! How could you reject being a king!!!!!!! anyways great presentation it shows that you learned a lot about him and you are an expert on him now.

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I did not know that dinosaurs lived 250 million years ago. I think that you worked really hard on this peice. Great job !!!!!!

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I like how you put in some fun facts about Walt Disney and made it fun. Good job

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I love that you made it like we were there in the story. I thought that one war was WAY TO MUCH! And TWO WARS?! You really helped me understand about D-Day

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I thought it was really creative how you made this interesting history into a fun learning story! it was so smoothly written. you are a great writer!

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I didn’t even know what a coati was until know something I found very interesting was how a coati is a mix of a dog and a monkey

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OMG! I am on your side Alanna! I want to help the polar bears. Not hurt them. I think if you send out those slides, you will make the polar bears live for a long time!

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Beating, and knocking over  tons of the 600 people to the hard, cold cemented ground, beating them with nightsticks. Nightsticks are also called batons. This is my favorite sentences because it is an interesting fact and also it is a twin sentence. I think that you did a good job on your hook in the begging. Great job!!!!

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I'm flat out impressed. You worked so hard on this presentation and it definitely shows your effort. You made clear twin sentences to not leave your reader scrambled. I never knew that polar bears skin is actually black! that is so cool. And also I'm shocked that polar bears have clear holler tubes as fur that reflect of the sun to make there fur look white. I love it Alanna!!!!!! :)))))))))))

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Good job! Before I read you text I had no clue who April Ross was. But now I know. Also I think it's crazy that she is almost 40 and still playing. Also I like how you included her pearsonal life. Good job! Thanks for sharing!

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I thought it was really cool how you included what baby sharks are called. I never knew they were called Pups! anyways great job. ( your wevideo was amazing btw)

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i learned a lot about Coatis my favorite fact is that they live nere good water sources.

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I really like how you took something that you want to be when you grow up and you did research on it. PLanes is a really interesting topic and I think that you did a great job on it. My dad is an engineer on the 787 which is a plane Great Job!!!

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I thought it was super creative how you made a table of contents. It helps the readers know what they will learn about and they will be more interested.

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I WANT TO WATCH YOUR VIDEO AGAIN! It made me learn a lot about sharks! Dude I LOVED IT! I learned that sharks have more than one way to have shark pups!

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Good job it likely took a lot of time to do that whole war. One thing that I liked was that you explained really well.

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wow. great job. I really liked how you described the mummy chapter. I could make a picture in my head as if i was in a museum.

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I like how you said among these rumors because it made it more interesting

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i did not know that Walt disney died at age 65. anyways great job.

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wow. I really liked how you talked about how women lived in the past. I could make it a comparison to how it is now too.

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I really learned a lot about polar bears from this presentation! I also really like the DUN DUNN DUNNNNN

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i love how you truly made me feel like i was in my house with a hurricane outside. Madoc 

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i love how you truly made me feel like i was in my house with a hurricane outside. Madoc 

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I never knew that there was more then 1 kind of earthquakes. that is very fascinating and interesting

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I thought it was super cool how underwater earthquakes/ volcanos made tsunamis I thought that was super interesting. great presentation btw

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Something I found very interesting were the thing that the people made like the polo-axe. Very interesting

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Rosa Parks seems like the type of person who would do anything for other people. You made a wonderful piece and I really like how you added descriptive words. it made the story really come to life.

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Your document was very interesting I liked the part were is had a person that had my name in it

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One thing that I learned was She also has a  estimated net worth of $3 million. One thing that I liked was how many facts you put in I can tell that you did a lot of research. Great Job!!!!!!!

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I barely new John Lewis and know that I read your document it feels like I’ve new him for years it was really good

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I like how you told the readers in the introduction what they will be learning. it makes it more interesting to know before you start reading. I also thought it was quite interesting that hurricane season is June through November. I would have never thought there there would be some hurricanes in the cold like in November.

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I really liked your Wevideo It was really cool animations and I also learned a lot from it

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starting off writing about WW2 was probably very difficult, but you did a great job with it. I like how you added pictures to explain your thinking and making it more clear. Nice job

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nice description :)

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I like how you gave a lot of facts in the story. I also like how you care about the reef and sea.

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I love the mummy section. I think it was very descriptive.

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I liked how you made it feel like I was actually in the war.
nice job!

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Amazing job!!I loved that you added in all of those pictures, I learned what a pole axe is!! Thanks for sharing!

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I love that you took the info and made it like I was in the time dinosaurs were alive

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i enjoyed how much detail you put into your work because at first i was like:what is a coati? but now i better understand what it is because of how fast it runs and how it lives!

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I really liked this because it was a topic that I knew nothing about. I also really loved your pictures they helped me know what everything looked like

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this was really cool because I didn't know how much polar bears were being affected by global warming  Idhant

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this was really cool because I didn't know how much polar bears were being affected by global warming  Idhant

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i like how the way you said it made it feel like i was truly in the story watching him march with the other 600 people Madoc

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i like how the way you said it made it feel like i was truly in the story watching him march with the other 600 people Madoc

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I liked the animation and the music and I learned alot about sharks!!!   Idhant

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I liked the animation and the music and I learned alot about sharks!!!   Idhant

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this was REALLY informative for me because i dont know a thing about ancient egypt until now  Idhant

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this was REALLY informative for me because i dont know a thing about ancient egypt until now  Idhant

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I really liked how you described all the dinosaurs I learned a lot from this.

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OMG! That was AWESOME! I didn't know about the clothes and the rich and the poor. WOW! That was an amazing docs about it!

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4,000 fish that a lot of fish. That was my favorite fact.

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i loved how you gave a huge amount of walt disney and made sure that the reader can understand

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very cool

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Annabelle this easy or story is awesome i love how you made it seem like i was really there and i learned so much Annabelle. GREAT JOB!!!

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One thing that l learned was that It took approximately 14,000 men to build it in 1 year. one thing that I liked was your wevideo was very interesting

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i learned that when he was 25 he lead 600 people.

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i did not know that gliders where considered planes i had thought they were not considered a plane because they do not have engines Madoc

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i did not know that gliders where considered planes i had thought they were not considered a plane because they do not have engines Madoc

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I liked the type of sharks you talked about and enjoyed how you added fun facts

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Wow I really liked how you used the words, "you, imagine, if," and more

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That GIGANTIC Crossbow thing is SO COOL! i like how you added the pictures too!

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i learned about how they flyed i like the descripton.

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WOW. That crazy!! I think its amazing that  it took 14,000 people to build the ship! Thanks for sharing!!

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I really liked how you described the "Mummy" chapter. It was really interesting!

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I L O V E D these slides about feminism. It really shows how good we have it now

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i didnt know anything about april ross now i do i learned that she got married in 2010

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i like that you told the reader or me that it is a glider and it needs air and power to make it move faster and farther.

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i was amazed by the things i learned.

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That must have been a crap ton of food on that boat that day! I AM A FOOD KIND OF GUY!

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i learned a lot about George Washington my favorite fact is he was going to be the king of the united states of america.

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i like the description

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I liked how you described the past women and I learned a lot on how it was like back then.

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I liked how you described the past women and I learned a lot on how it was like back then.

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i learned that they lived in trees and on land. i liked the description.

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I really like how you put a quote as your first sentence of your introduction it made it much more powerful and more encouraging to read. well done

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I learned that the bus driver's name is Blake . I liked that you wrote like you were telling a story

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I learned that the bus driver's name is Blake . I liked that you wrote like you were telling a story

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-Sarthak

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I loved that you chose such an important man to research. He is a figure that will, undoubtedly, go down in history. I love that you began with such a powerful quote. That is a great way to hook your reader. Well done!

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WOW! I didn't know ANYTHING about Feminism. You made me learn that a woman's life back then wasn't very fair.

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I like how you put a picture right next to what you were talking about. I also like how you added fun facts.

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i liked the description.

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i never knew about april ross before reading this but now that i have read it i feel like i have known about her my whole life i love how much detail you put in Madoc

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i never knew about april ross before reading this but now that i have read it i feel like i have known about her my whole life i love how much detail you put in Madoc

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When I clicked on your slide show i saw Coati By Madoc McGee and i had no clew what a coati was!

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i leares reefs are made from polyps and i like how you hooked me so i wanted to read more.

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I like how you explained your point of view and why you wanted to learn about planes in general

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I really liked how you described the three types of earthquakes    Idhant

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I really liked how you described the three types of earthquakes    Idhant