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Provide evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence?

What feedback would you provide:

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Provide evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence?

What feedback would you provide:

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Provide evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence?

What feedback would you provide:

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Provide evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence?

What feedback would you provide:

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Provide evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence?

What feedback would you provide:

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Evidence was the visual and oral annotation model sharing the commas with explanation of commas. Feedback- color coding the sentence parts would be a visually helpful step as would previewing understanding of the words in the sentence.

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Evidence was the visual and oral annotation model sharing the commas with explanation of commas. Feedback- color coding the sentence parts would be a visually helpful step as would previewing understanding of the words in the sentence.

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Yes - the explanation of what the commas mean. Feedback: I think there are multiple steps that need to take place for students to understand the complex sentence. The comma and structure is only one layer but there would be levels of difficulty in the vocabulary in the sentence to make sense of it. I would also recommend breaking down the sentence to shorter statements to support understanding.

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Yes - the explanation of what the commas mean. Feedback: I think there are multiple steps that need to take place for students to understand the complex sentence. The comma and structure is only one layer but there would be levels of difficulty in the vocabulary in the sentence to make sense of it. I would also recommend breaking down the sentence to shorter statements to support understanding.

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Yes, we saw evidence with arrows and explanations.  How can you provide vocabulary support for students  within the complex sentence?

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Yes, we saw evidence with arrows and explanations.  How can you provide vocabulary support for students  within the complex sentence?

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You highlighted the location of the commas separating ideas. I would recommend separating the sentence physically with slashes (like diagramming) to indicate new information.

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You  used comas to clue students into the structure of the sentence and asked students to show their understanding of the structure by writing a complete sentence

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There was evidence of targeted vocabulary in a sentence and the use of a video resource to expose student to complex sentences.

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There was evidence of targeted vocabulary in a sentence and the use of a video resource to expose student to complex sentences.

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Also, there was evidence of complex sentence deconstruction.

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Yes, there was evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence when an explanation was provided for what the commas mean both in the visual and the oral format.

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Yes, there was evidence of deconstructing a complex sentence when an explanation was provided for what the commas mean both in the visual and the oral format.

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It was clearly labeled for the annotations and what each part meant 

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It was clearly labeled for the annotations and what each part meant 

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There was evidence of commas and how and why it is used .

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There was evidence of commas and how and why it is used .

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Yes, you highlighted how the commas separated the ideas in the sentence. You used a simple visual with the arrow. 

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Yes, you highlighted how the commas separated the ideas in the sentence. You used a simple visual with the arrow. 

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The discussion of how the use of commas helps to convey additional information about the subject to the reader beyond actions the subject takes

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The discussion of how the use of commas helps to convey additional information about the subject to the reader beyond actions the subject takes

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Maybe make the sentence a little wider with more space so it looks more visually accessible

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Maybe make the sentence a little wider with more space so it looks more visually accessible