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I love how you added a lot of action and also i love how you showed us what they thought or says, instead of telling us it.

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I like how u made that Cheng and Chen help other people escape while they were escaping

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I like how u made that Cheng and Chen help other people escape while they were escaping

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I like that you included lots of dialogue.

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I like how you made SHOW the readers what's happening you didn't TELL them.

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I like how you mentioned that Chang and Chen’s feet’s were hurting when they were being dragged!

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I like how you mentioned that Chang and Chen’s feet’s were hurting when they were being dragged!

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Catherine

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I like how you made details and dialogue

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I liked how you included what the characters were feeling.

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I like the story because there a lot of drama in in it.

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i liked how you told the emotions of the characters

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i liked how you told the emotions of the characters

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I like how you Showed the setting and how the character was helpful and caring to save the other people

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I like how you Showed the setting and how the character was helpful and caring to save the other people

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Eric I like how you used dialog and the movement of the character and it was really interesting of the character falling to the water also I like how you read with suspence

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Eric I like how you used dialog and the movement of the character and it was really interesting of the character falling to the water also I like how you read with suspence

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i like how you made so many action and how bravely you read you story your cover was also very nice

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i like how you made so many action and how bravely you read you story your cover was also very nice

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Eric the king of writing I like how you included a lot of action. And I like your picture. I also like how you made your character traits. Overall this book was sooo much better than mine. :)

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I loved everything but my favorite part was that used dialoge to show what the characters were doing and feeling

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I loved everything but my favorite part was that used dialoge to show what the characters were doing and feeling

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Jason M

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I like how you made a picture of a man in the water when he needed help.

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I like how you made a picture of a man in the water when he needed help.

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Wow! I like how you add pictures and add a lot of action!

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I liked the pictures that you included on the bottom of each page!

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good job

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I LOVE THE DIALOG AMAZING ALSO I LIKE THE SUSPENSE WHILE THE SHIP WAS SINKING

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I LOVE THE DIALOG AMAZING ALSO I LIKE THE SUSPENSE WHILE THE SHIP WAS SINKING

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omg so good you were really sounding out the actions and how they were meant to be said!

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I like how you showed that he was panicking instead of just saying he was panicking!

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I like how you showed that he was panicking instead of just saying he was panicking!

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THIs is just BRaVo because there is so much dialouge and action and some tragedy. I could easily picture this in my mind!

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I loved your story I would differently read it again. the cliff hanger made me still want to read more! (love the action!)

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I loved your story I would differently read it again. the cliff hanger made me still want to read more! (love the action!)

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I like how your story was long and ended with a very good ending

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I like how you put SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSooooooooooooooooooooooo many details like when left the cliff hanger

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More dialog than me in real life      , and I liked how The sister Olivia said "it was a joke ok."

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More dialog than me in real life      , and I liked how The sister Olivia said "it was a joke ok."

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I like how you add feelings to the story

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I like it because it had a lot of details.

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I like how you added so much dialogue and action!

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I like how you added so much dialogue and action!

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I liked that you added lots of action and dialogue!

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AMAZING!!! I like how you showed the relationship with your parents but not your sister LOL I can relate to

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AMAZING!!! I like how you showed the relationship with your parents but not your sister LOL I can relate to