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Comment on幾多號,
You did a great job!such a intersting story

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Good copy

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Comment on Carlissa, Rainbow and Yasmine 

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Comment on Carlissa, Rainbow and Yasmine 

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Good organisation, good use of word, correct grammar.

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Quite interesting but a little bit short.
Grammar is good.

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The story is very creative and funny. Also the language is good. But the organisation can be better

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Bravo!!! wonderful nice plot of the story...Although my group's story is more creative and funny😨😨😨💩👎🏿

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Not appropriate adj. such as fresh is not a adj. to describe a phone. The content is too boring

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Comment on Ian and Timothy
Well, the story is quite interesting. But if the words can be used better, the story can be better! For example, you can add some words we have taught by Miss Chan to express the feeling of the phone. Add oil
By Tony and Marco😻😻👏🏻💪💪

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The story is so touching. Good content.

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Your organisation and language is good but you are missing full stop in the end of the paragraph. Content is ok. 😌 You have answered all the question. It is better to write more feeling after changing the master.

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The content is very creative and funny. Also, the organisation and
language are good

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Not bad, nice plot, and nice content. Good ending. だが， the story is too short.

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The story didn't really capture our attention as it was too simple and the story was rushed too fast. The important parts of the story and climax was not shown but it's not terrible 🦄🐥🐥

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Content:
Very interesting plot
Creative ideas were given

Language:
Clear sentences structure

Organisation:
Good job

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Comment on tony🐷👨‍🏫
Very nice plot . Incredible organisation

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Nice organisation,creative plot

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Stupid  phone called team
I am the phone which is used by everyone,because I am the newest version of the phone at that time, so everyone is queuing for me.After people brought me, they will take some photos that is their favourite places in Hong Kong and also giggling over some stupid apps.At the end, I was replaced by the Samsung galaxy note , because it is the newest version, but I think that there will not have new phone invented in the future, I am very stupid

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I first met Joe in 🍎store ,w e spend so much time together, giggling 🙊over stupid apps, taking beautiful pictures 🏞of our favourite places. It was all so perfect until the new model enter our 🌎 . I was abandoned by Joe and was thrown to recycle in a horrible way. 🙁However, a mate found me, and I'm am now useful again!😝

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Although I was not good enough that I didn't have a big memory , my master , Joe , still abandon me 22 months ago. In the past , I had many happy times with my master like laughing at stupid apps,visiting many places and taking photos . However , after he left me alone , I was forgotten. When he remembered me, he threw me away.

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The adventure of smartphone_Vincent  Kim

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The adventure of smartphone_Vincent  Kim

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22 months ago, I met my owner, Joe in a Wan Chai mall. We downloaded and giggled over many funny apps, and took photos in Hong Kong. We had many happy memories.
However, Joe left me in a drawer because a shiny new model came into his life.There was dark and I felt lonely. Few days later, Joe dropped me off at a recycling merchant's. They recycled me in a terrible way.Luckily, my new owner found me and brought me to the new home. I am now useful again

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We looked into each other's eye the first time we met. He paid 100 bucks for me, in cash. That maple falling autumn is the day I'll never forget. We went to different places in HK, until the the new IPhone 7 came out, and I was left to dead. A month later, I was in a dark, cold truck heading for the border. But I was saved by someone.

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The story of my life

I am a smartphone. My father calls me Nokia 3310. I was born in Japan. I was sold in a Nokia Store by a old guy called Joe. He's a solider  He always took me out to many battle and used me to take selfies. I giggled when he made funny faces. Everything was going fine until 2017. My younger brother, iPhone 8 was

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Don't leave me alone.
I am a smartphone. My owner is a boy called Joe. I felt very happy about the time staying with him. One day, my owner dropped me off at a recycling bin. I felt so alone and cold. Now I live with my new owner. And I don't worry about being replaced.

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The Tragic END of my short life......_HeyIt'DaveSutthiporn 👶🏾👳🏾‍♀️👳🏾

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The Tragic END of my short life......_HeyIt'DaveSutthiporn 👶🏾👳🏾‍♀️👳🏾

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In a busy mall, one kind soul, Joe took out his wallet and purchased me from the shopkeeper. I was once the big brother of all my past relatives (smartphones). I had all the ability to withstand centuries of torture!

Months have past, a new kid arrived. Joe, my once faithful companion ditched me for the new kid.

I was casted aside and later thrown away to be recycled with my past relatives. They told me we were going to be reused but in reality, we are going to be incinerated alive and be sold as scrap metal.

I WAS ONCE THE CHOSEN ONE...........R.I.P. EYEFONE 5R

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22 months ago, I met my owner, Joe, in a shopping mall. He was attracted by my beautiful appearance. He bought me and we had a lot of wonderful times together. However, one day, he was not using me anymore and I was thrown to a recycling truck. I met many friends there and they were all thrown by their owners! We knew that we were going to a recycling factory after that and we were all scared. Then we used our speakers to find someone to help. Lastly I was saved by an old lady and we lived together happily forever.

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Generations of smartphones Tony Lee Marco 

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Generations of smartphones Tony Lee Marco 

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I am a smartphone. Everyone calls me iPhone 7. I was born in America. I was sold in Hong Kong Apple Store by a customer called Joe. I had a happy life with him. He always took me out to many places and used me to take selfies. I giggled when he made funny faces. Everything was going fine until 2017. My younger brother, iPhone 8 was born. After he came to Joe's home, he abandoned me aside and started to play with my brother. I was sad as he didn't use me anymore. In July 2017, he put me inside a large yellow recycle bin. I saw many cousins sitting near me and they were crying silently. Now, I am in Tuen Mun Landfill, covering with mud and smelly ground water. Sometimes I think, how can humans abandon us while we can work properly?
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22 months ago,I met Joe in a Wan Chai mall. He had waited me for a long time. We had a lot of good times such as giggling over silly apps, taking excellent pictures of Hong Kong. However, happy times didn't last long. Last month, a bright, shiny and fashionable model came into Joe's life. I was packed into a plastic bag and sent to a giant wasteland where will burn me in order to make a few benefits. I met new friends in the truck which going to the wasteland. We were very scared and funked. We tried to think out some of the solutions to save ourselves. Finally we were found by a recycling company. My new mistress is very nice and good to me. I love her very much

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An Adventure of Smartphone_Claudia Kristy 

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An Adventure of Smartphone_Claudia Kristy 

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One day,I was bought by Joe and they spent a quality time together for 22 months. However, I became outdated and Joe sold it to a recycle merchant.I heard from the truck that I will be crushed. Me and my friends do not want to end in this way so we tried to stay alive therefore we select our loudest ringtone to stand up for ourselves.Later , a charity official saved us and relocated me to a mistress.

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A fate of a smartphone _audrey Esther Minnie 

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A fate of a smartphone _audrey Esther Minnie 

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I first met Joe in Wan Chai mall, we spend so many times together, giggling over stupid apps, taking beautiful pictures of our favourite places. It was all so perfect until the new model enter our world. I was abandoned by Joe and I was thrown to recycle in a terrible way. However, my new master found me, I am now useful again! Now I can help my new master, the kind old lady who treated me well to manage her life. I can do something more meaningful now such as calling the doctor for emergence, staying contact with her friends rather than watching stupid apps, vedios and photos.

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22 months ago, Joe queued up in a Wan Chai hall for me, I was fresh and had a cutting edge OS, so he got me expensive back then. We had some great moments. We giggled over stupid apps, took photos of our favourite place. Recently, Joe found his new love which is the newest model smartphone. He bought it immediately. Unfortunately for me, I got left out. After we talked with the truck, he told us that we are going to be ended up in a giant wasteland. Luckily, the friends that I met in the truck saved me by ringing all our phones, which led to the police finding out us. Finally, I and my new master, who is a old woman, who need help by me, treated me very well and I always help her out, which is a great role for me.

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The Revenge of the Smartphone_Cherry💜Cindy

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The Revenge of the Smartphone_Cherry💜Cindy

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2 years ago,  I met Joe in Wan Chai Mall. He loves me at first sight then chose me to be his smartphone partner. We had a lot of happy times together. We laughed at the silly apps, and capture lots of beautify scene in Hong Kong. Good fortune won't last long, a shiny new model is purchased and he decided to change his phone. Since then I was being neglected by Joe. The abandoned smartphones will all go to the wasteland and be recycled. However, I decided to take a revenge... I spread a rumour that the new purchased smartphone will explode and it is very dangerous. After my owner found out this shocking news,he immediately went to the shop and asked for the refund. Lastly, we Iived happily ever after with Joe.🤵🏻💓📱

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Welcome To Fabulous life of a phone（尋找它瘋的故事） _voo tze/tsz hin/ho ching 

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Welcome To Fabulous life of a phone（尋找它瘋的故事） _voo tze/tsz hin/ho ching 

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A long time ago,in a far far galaxy...I met my first master-Joe in Wan Chai mall.We had plenty of wonderful moments together,hehe.-giggling over stupid apps and taking photos.However,this did not last long.A shiny phone came and replaced me.My master was going to recycle me in a giant wasteland where an army of waste pickers would gut me and cook different parts of my body.Luckily,I escaped from the truck during the way to landfill.A few days later,I woke up at a lovely home.A kind,elderly lady picked up me and smiled to me.I'm glad I found a new master...

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