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really bad grammar and word choice is apalling

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really bad grammar and word choice is apalling

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What dumbo put their improvement on the text?!

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A brill 10/12

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Use the definition of gender in the inroduction but well done it was excellent. Your points are on point

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Use the definition of gender in the inroduction but well done it was excellent. Your points are on point

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Good

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You have bee very informative throughout your aswer ad you have icluded lots of facts, ad also used advatages ad disadvatages. c

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This has lots of different points of view and I can see how some sociologist see how gender effects students in school

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You have included a lot of information and different facts about education and different views. And you've give the points of socialists

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This essay is very informative it shows the effects of gender and how it effects you in school and it also shows how people may act and how may be effected in collage university and in jobs

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You have included a range of facts about different types of views of sociological effects about educational achievement, and it was understandable and you gave clear examples about sociological points.

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From a modern day perspective it would seem that girls of a young age are more likely to stay out later in the night as they are moreover focused on being in a relationship, the same goes for the boys. As of GSCE results (you did spell results incorrectly on line 4) it is true that most of the role models in primary school are female with a minority being male teachers.

women have also indeed being more ambitious about their careers seeing many role models throughout their lives.

the differences of material deprevation may be equal in terms of both males and females as each is likely to derive from a poor life style.

Overall this answer is very detailed with good links as to why each sex may out perform each other. 10/12

p.s You could have used "are more likely to fall ill..."

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the  essay you wrote is very informative and i think it offers so much useful information, i would give this 10 marks because it covers all the bases.

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This piece of work is very detailed and has loads of points it shows sociological points

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This essay thingy is very accurate as it correctly states facts of sociology and makes very valid points.

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Lads who want to be footballers just don't want to listen in school because they don't think they need a gcse to kick a ball around and their coaches agree but other than this I don't agree I think it's equal

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you have included lots of facts and shown may sociological points of view. you haver used both pro and con points. i have learnt what certain sociologists think of how gender effects how well you do in school

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There are many different reasons a student will do well in education. As well as each students individual ability students education may well be affected by their homelife, culture, their school life or even their ethnicity. In the question i will discuss how far gender is the main reason as well as other factors.

Some Sociologists aruge that the main reason for different educational achievement is the gender of a student. This is because over the last 20 years there has been an increase in women doing better than men in GCSE resutls. This could be because of an introduction of coursework which girls are better at than boys. Additionally girls are seen to do better in school due to not getting involved in laddish subcultures, laddish subcultures occur when boys think it is not cool to do well in education and as such show off in front of their friends. Some Sociologists argue that especially working class boys do not do as well in school due to having a lack of role model in schools where most teaching staff (especially at primary school level) are female. Another reason that girls tend to achieve more in school is due to a different attitude in the socialisation of girls, girls are seen to be more vulnerable and are less likely to be allowed out at night time to socilaise with their friends, this means they are more likely to stay at home in their bedrooms and revise together. Boys are seen to be more robust and will be more likely to spend more time out of the household. Finally there has been a change in the ambitions of women over the last 30 years, although some feminists would disagree, women have become more ambitious for a career out of the home, there has been a decline in the number born and an increase in the age in which a women has her first child, this could be due to starting a career. This relates to education as women see role models as succesful business women as opposed to mothers and aunts who stay at home.

On the other hand however there are many other reasons that lead to gender differences in education, these for example are social class background. Material depravation may lead to students not being able to achieve in school as they live in over crowded and uncomfortable conditions

and are not able to complete homework or even read or revise at home. Another reason is students from poverty backgrounds may not have a good diet and will often come to school without breakfast or having a healthy meal at home and are more likely to get poorly and have time off school leading to underachievement. Another reason a child may not achieve due to their background in school is due to a lack of being able to go on school trips to enrich their curriculum.

However, in schools today there has been an introduction of policys to help students such as Free School Meals and also Pupil Premium, local sure starts also provide free fruit and veg to poorer familes and also school uniforms and home visits.

Overall sociologists do disagree on what causes differential educational achievement, some would agree that it is due to gender roles and the differences in socialisation, others however would argue that other factors such as material and cultural factors are to blame.