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- Write back to Lars about the best time to visit your city and what clothes to wear.
- Use key-phrases when possible. Use the correct article when writing about the clothes (a sweater, and pants)
- From 50 to 80 words.

From teacher Edson

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Hi Lars, I'm from Perú and I live in Lima. The best time to visit is autumn because it's windy and it's the weather fells (is) fresh and also you can run (through) the park(s) PUNCTUATION (.) you can drink soup called "Caldo de Gallina" also and drink "mote de coca", too. Bring (a) jacket and gloves as well, or you'll be too cold.

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Hi Romy, I'm from Peru and I live in Ica. The best time to visit is spring because it's not cold and not hot, it's very cool, also you can visit a lot place(s) in Ica.

You can eat a lot (of) delicious meal(s) and beverage very interesting, (very interesting beverages) too. Bring short(s), T shirt(s), tenis and sunglasses as well, or you'll be too sunny (hot) and wet, because it's a dessert. (desert).

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Hi Jettro, I'm from Peru and I live in Junin. The best time to visit is Winter because there are many fetivies (festivities) celebrated and also you can visit the Nevados de Pastoruri. You can eat Pachamanca and Picante de Cuy, too. Bring an alpaca sweater and polar pants así (as) well, or you (it)'ll be too very could (cold) and stormy un (in) the evening.

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Hello lars. I am from Peru and I live in Ica. The best time to visit is the summer because I hate the cold weather and also you can visit the vallest (?) islands and (the) Huacachina. You can eat carapulcra or dry soup (Sopa Seca) too. Bring a shorts and drinks as well or you will be too hot.

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Hi Jaquie, I'm  from Peru and I live in Lima. The best time to visit is Spring because it's sunny and I hate windy weather and also you can visit the beaches of the coast green (green coast)you can visit the zoo, too. Bring a dress and sandals as well, or you'll be too cool.

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Hi Lars I'm from Peru and I live in Piura. The best time to visit is summer because the weather is very sunny and also you can visit the beaches Vichaito and Mancora. These are very wonderful places to practise (go) surfing. You can also enjoy (P)peruvian food like ceviche, cabrito a la norteña and pisco sour.
Bring light clothes and sandals as well, or you'll be too hot.

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Hi Lars, I’m from Peru and I live in Puno. The best time to visit is spring because it’s raining, cloudy and stormy weather. I love the spring, it’s perfect time to relaxing and the flowers are everywhere. Also you can visit Chucuito, the Uros islands or Sillustani. You can read a book, take photos, eat the typical dishes of Puno and travel to the different districts, too. Bring sweaters, impermeable jackets, rain boots, wool socks, a shawl and gloves as well, or you’ll be too cold and wet.

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Hi Laura, I’m from Perú and I live in Lima.The best time to visit is Summer because it’s sunny and I hate rainy weather and also you can visit Huacachina in Ica and also go to the beach.

You can eat cebiche , ice creams and practice paddle surf,too.Bring a cap,a sun cream, shorts,a T- shirt and sunglasses as well, or you´ll be too warm.