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You need to improve citing your in text references. You can do this by noting how published texts do this, using the APA guidelines, or try reading the sentence out loud and miss out anything in brackets to see if it makes sense.

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You need to improve citing your in text references. You can do this by noting how published texts do this, using the APA guidelines, or try reading the sentence out loud and miss out anything in brackets to see if it makes sense.

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Don't forget to support all your ideas in the text with references

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Don't forget to support all your ideas in the text with references

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If you use an
abbreviation it should be cited in full at the first mention followed by the
abbreviation in brackets, thereafter you can use the abbreviation.

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If you use an
abbreviation it should be cited in full at the first mention followed by the
abbreviation in brackets, thereafter you can use the abbreviation.

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You consistently
cite the reference in a sentence of its' own so it is unclear what information
it is intended to support.

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You consistently
cite the reference in a sentence of its' own so it is unclear what information
it is intended to support.

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Some of your sources
are more credible than others, a more judicious selection is advised.

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Some of your sources
are more credible than others, a more judicious selection is advised.

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Although NHS Choices is reliable it should not replace the need to use published academic sources. This is because the former is only a simplified source.

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Although NHS Choices is reliable it should not replace the need to use published academic sources. This is because the former is only a simplified source.

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Although you are using some reliable sources eg Parkinsons Society you also need to use published academic literature.

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Although you are using some reliable sources eg Parkinsons Society you also need to use published academic literature.

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Please access the library rather than Google

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Please access the library rather than Google

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Please use the APA full guidelines for reference and citation support 

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Please use the APA full guidelines for reference and citation support 

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Your reference list needs to be listed by surname/family name.

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Your reference list needs to be listed by surname/family name.

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Please include a reference list not a bibliography

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Please include a reference list not a bibliography

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Please ensure citations match your reference section

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Please ensure citations match your reference section

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This text contains large sections of unsupported narrative

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This text contains large sections of unsupported narrative

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The information you have included is correct but you have not referenced the source ed

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The information you have included is correct but you have not referenced the source ed

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Punctuation of citations in the body of text is inaccurate

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Punctuation of citations in the body of text is inaccurate

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You have a significant number of referencing errors within the paper

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You have a significant number of referencing errors within the paper

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Please choose a more judicious source of literature

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Please choose a more judicious source of literature

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Claims made are not supported by suitable evidence of reading

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Claims made are not supported by suitable evidence of reading