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I think that the strongest element in this piece is the colors, they pop out and give it a really nice texture which is also really strong in this piece as well.  The strongest principle of design I would say is proportionality, the characters all have the proportions that I believe the artist intended to have like the height and the different features like the clothing. I think that what could have been improved would be some more detail on some parts like the scar or some of the clothes. My questions would probably be what do you plan on doing with these characters

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From what I have seen this looks like a friendship story and in a world where people are different veggies. What I think is successful in this piece is how the body is composed, I think this was how the artist intended it to look. What I think you could improve on is maybe legs.

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Each character has different, vibrant colors to distinguish one another, but the color palette works in unity. I also notice perspective in the stairs of the bus stop (second to last panel) because of the shading. You can work on spacing out each panel because the layout is too cluttered which takes away from the comic itself. I think its a huge improvement from the other 2 projects.

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The strongest Element of Art I see here is color, the color pallete is very muted and warm, which makes it very cohesive and nice to look at. As far as interior design goes, it looks very consistent, though the brown bookshelf looking thing in the second panel doesn't look like it lines up perspective-wise with the line where the wall meets the ceiling, though otherwise the comic looks great!

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The world is a modern one, with up to date technology and human characters. The story so far is that three siblings are escaping an abusive home, but it seems that there's some bigger picture that hasn't been revealed yet. The characters' designs are unique and easy to identify, and the color scheme of each character is easy to see. The layout of the comic is a lot clearer, and it's easy to read

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The strongest elements of art are color, they show a lot of value to the backgrounds.

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The world is in a modern setting with hybrid characters. I think that the expressions on the characters are successful, the expressions can show the character's personality.

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I see mythological characters in a fantasy world. They look like elves and the symbols are very unique. The drawings are amazing, but I am still confused on what Affinity is. I am also wondering if you're going to continue the animatic or go into a full-on animation or to make more still drawings (not animation).

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12/14
Alcohol markers/Copic Copies
1st page of a comic strip

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12/13/2020
8x11
Prismacolors
Continuation of last project
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JQXW3UEhUO1Qx-egQkgrswbNFD2eS01MxqBnz_-pju0/edit?usp=sharing

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December 11, 2020
Procreate, A4 landscape paper
The character reference sheets from my latest project

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12/11/20
Autodesk Maya
PORTFOLIO LINK
STORY PROPOSAL
Brocc model (not yet finished):

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12/11/2020
Digital(clip studio paint)
2800x3850px
the second page of the comic I have been working on.

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POST YOUR CRITIQUES (do not post them as comments. Use the + in the circle to add a comment below all of the artwork. 

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POST YOUR CRITIQUES (do not post them as comments. Use the + in the circle to add a comment below all of the artwork. 

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*Choose a student's work to critique using Critique 1. Write the critique as a post at the bottom of the column. Be sure to number your critiques and use evidence from the artwork to support your critique.  Then choose another students work for Critique 2 and do the same. Each critique should be at least a small paragraph of several complete sentences that addresses the following:

CRITIQUE 1: INTERPRETATION: OBSERVE AND DESCRIBE the VISUALS, STORY, WORLD, CHARACTER, and/or NARRATIVE that you see, connect it to evidence in the artwork. Talk about what you believe is successful in design and execution of characters and story.
Also write what you like about it and any changes/improvements that you suggest.

CRITIQUE 2. ELEMENTS OF ART and PRINCIPLES OF DESIGN (See https://hhsartroom.weebly.com/art-vocabulary.html for definitions).  Say what you believe are the  strongest Elements of Art (line, shape, value, form, texture, color, space) and Principles of Design (balance, pattern, contrast, harmony, movement, proportion) and use evidence from the artwork to support your claim. Describe what you believe could be improved and how and use evidence from the artwork support your claim. Optional: add a question that would help you understand the artwork better. Also write what you like about it!

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