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What will you be doing in today's session?

How are you going to be doing it?

What will you have by the end of the session?

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My project has progresse

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Feedback by Carys :)

The overall animation is really nice and it gets the message of 'celebrating difference' across really clearly.

However, the beginning part is too short and the message at the end lasts for too long, it would be better if you balanced all the parts out.

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Star : The animations is really good.
Star :The drawings are nice to look.
Wish : Could have some more animations because nothing happens after 12 seconds

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Connor Shoesmith marking Carys Moods work

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Connor Shoesmith marking Carys Moods work

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I like how all your shapes look. And I think you did well with making the flower.

It's just you need some kind of animation, even if it's just something moving to another location.

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Marked by liam

I really like the concept of the animation, as it rotates show casing each text, to improve on it I would try make the water splash effect on all them.

You could also make each triangle a different color, so they all are not the same color.

Overall I really like the design of the animation and the premise of it.

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Owen Thomas feedback for  Alex 20.11.18 

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Owen Thomas feedback for  Alex 20.11.18 

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WWW: I like the use of popular you-tube culture by using Micheal from V sauce nice touch I also like the fez the main thing that went well is the timing and the eyes pop up slowly.

EBI: try and get the text on longer by moving some of the frames around.

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The animation is very well laid out. Also it is very smooth and isn't clunky. I would add more color to it so it stands out more to the eye

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Dylan Foster

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Good basic idea, need to improve it more and expand the idea to a better standard.

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The Concept I was told is really a good idea.
Sadly, but Nathan know's there wasn't much there for me to be able to give much feedback on.
Given more time I'm sure Nathan can give me a more Finished Concept and I'll happily come back and have a look and give more feedback.
Nathan You Can Do This Mate..

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The Title Design of Saul and Elaine Bass

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Celebrate the work of title designers and filmmakers Saul and Elaine Bass.

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Spiekerblog | Typomania is incurable but not lethal.

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The typographic system of letters and spaces - horizontal and vertical ones - has been refined since Gutenberg first invented printing with movable type almost 600 years ago. The whole system is one giant grid systems that can be divided and multiplied in myriad ways.

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Pentagram — The world’s largest independent design consultancy

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Pentagram is the world’s largest independent design consultancy. The firm is owned and run by 24 partners, each of whom are leaders in their individual fields.

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Read the information at the link below and explain  the following Typographic terms;

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Serif
San-serif
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Positives
It shows everything that was required It has Images of every topic in Celebrating difference.
Another positive is that the title is big and bald which really helps to understand the topic.
Negatives
The Images look pix elated and it needs more animation but overall it looks good and need small improvements.

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the work is very simplistic and is easy to understand what it is, it also looks very good, however, it is missing body image and identity, it also show any effects or easy ease , etc only typography, shapes and possibly masks (whether you used masks for the background) besides that it looks very good

Marked by daniel

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Director and screenwriter Chloe Okuno discusses her favorite title sequences including horror from the '70s and '90s and how important sound design is for setting tone

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https://574864.wixsite.com/site-1

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https://577779.wixsite.com/gamesdesigncourse

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https://559966.wixsite.com/alexgrahampassions

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https://549281.wixsite.com/website

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https://570901.wixsite.com/mypassions

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https://leggingtongames.wixsite.com/main

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creative graphical design comes your way

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https://dylan31foster.wixsite.com/mysite

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https://5709062.wixsite.com/carysmoodypassions

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I am 19 years old, and I like to play Video games. My first games I first remember playing was Crash Bandicoot 1, and then the same day I played Spyro the Dragon 1, at 4 years old.

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https://570903.wixsite.com/ellishodgson

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https://578871.wixsite.com/website-pawel

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I like the feet and legs, because they look like they are in motion thanks to the frames.

What you can fix is the fact that the head seems to change sizes. See if you can find a way to draw the same size head. If you have to much trouble, you could copy it and use it that way.

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I like the fact that all of your drawings are around the same size
I don't like the third frame as it looks like it is walking with out moving the legs- the wrong leg is at the front on the frame

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(pawel Dobosz)
To me it looks perfect the characters head is moving up and down like it's actually in motion as a normal human being. as a improvement i would angle the body so it matches the movement of the character it should be facing forwards only a little bit of improvement and it going to look good.

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The basic animation looks really smooth, and the positions look accurate.

To improve, you could add the down position and up position frames and smooth the drawings out.

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Its well drawn and moves really good
But Could use some more drawings so it looks smoother and finish the half done frame.

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https://558362.wixsite.com/mysite-1

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What is done well - You've got all the Stages in place and the animation moves well.

What to Improve - I think the drawing looking smoother would help like Down and Up positions looking more convinced. then it would flow better.

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it is a good beginning but it is unfinished and only has two finished frames, please

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i like the placement of the foot as if it was placed into a animation it would connect well with the ground the improvement I would suggest is the body placement as some bare large width wise as some are larger than others keep it up

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i like the way the character looks

your character does not really walk it vibrates. you  need to add some more frames to make it look like  a walking person

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what you did well:For the animation you drew the first connection well
To improve: try to finish the whole animation so you can get the person to move.

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The animation looks really nic

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The animation looks really nice and smooth and loops very well, to improve on the animation, you could maybe add some arms moving along with animation.

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I like the flow to the animation, it's well done. One improvement that could be made is the character's torso and head rising and lowering in the up and down positions to create the illusion of bobbing

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I like the flow to the animation

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I L

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I think you have drawn the figures quite well and i think you know the order in which they appear correctly.
You need to spend less time perfecting them and maybe add more phases. (You only have 3/4 out of 5 shown, you need a final contact)

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I like how he managed to get the character to move smoothly.
The character is very clean and not messy.
I would say to make it more hand drawn so it looks natural because it looks choppy.

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i like the stick man walking
not many frames you can improve by adding the up and down points in to the animation and maybe make it a bit bigger and add more detail  because its hard to tell what leg is on what side

brandon

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Ball Changes - Dafydd

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Basic Animation

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The illusion of life Presentation - Dafydd Moody

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The illusion of life Presentation - Dafydd Moody

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Get access to files anywhere through secure cloud storage and file backup for your photos, videos, files and more with Google Drive.

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1CSqWUSlmu9H7yUGFgDtMm6d4Qlyyi00YfHHIgMPV-jk/edit#slide=id.g42004579cf_0_37

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Alex Graham

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1UNMTWlZY5AiR38rcCDfeBo94pfh0N57UuJYkzteWcSQ/edit#slide=id.g428e293055_1_0

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Oz3Oy2_bLqk36qaRgR7S9J7qmdgkQupL8DJTEDrACQ4/edit?usp=sharing

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Learn After Effects in 5 MINUTES! Beginner Tutorial

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LOONEY TUNES (Looney Toons): To Duck or Not To Duck (Daffy Duck) (1943) (Remastered) (HD 1080p)

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The Flintstones : Fred Flintstones Is Having A Baby : So Epic

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fun ad simple to use

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I like Piskel because it helps me learn more how animation works, because it gives me an hands on experience. I don't like the fact that a lot of normal commands are only usable though shortcut keys, like the undo button. I kind of wish you could just click on it somewhere, but that is only because I am more used to that.

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I like piskel it is simple and not complex but I would like to get into more complex software i would use it again became it is simple

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I like Piskel because i love playing with pixels and creating small animations.

I Like everything about Piskel.

I would certainly use Piskel again to create small animations.

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I like Piskel because its easy and fun to use
confusing on the adding your own image I don't like it because it gets
i would use again because its fun

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Rainbow Six Siege

To be able to learn how to design and make a good game that functions properly and is fun to play.

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Counter strike global offensive

To learn interesting skills and facts

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world of Warcraft

interested into becoming park of the games industry

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my fave game is resident evil 2
and i'm hoping to get all the skills to be industry ready

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Football manager

i hope to gain some good experience to get a job in game design

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Favorite game= Crash Bandicoot Warped.

More skills and understanding to help me with the way games are made.

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Life Is Strange
More experience creating characters and more experience using Unreal engine to create games.

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assassins creed

i hope to go in to further education after this and gain a job after that

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Favorite game: NBA 2k18
What I hope to get from this course: experience

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Borderlands 2
I hope to improve skills in creating art for games and learning more  about games in genral

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Crash Bandicoot 2 and Portal 2
To learn more about Game Engines and how to use them

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Favourite Game: Life is Strange
What I hope to get form this course: Experience and knowledge