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VB: A good observation, a quick question - any specific eg on valuable resource?

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VB: A good observation, a quick question - any specific eg on valuable resource?

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Teng Kai Yuan

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VB: A good start to say that you don't agree- is there any evidence/further explanation to support your argument? I.e look at some examples in Singapore

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VB: I see some valid ideas but best to present in full sentences so I can see which are the reasons and which are further details/implications

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VB: You make a valid point on the 'quality of life' and the kind of work they are expected to do! Let's discuss further. While it is important to encourage the elderly to work, are we treating them the right way by expecting them to support themselves through selling tissue paper. Nicely done!~

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VB: Valid but can be more targeted and requires more reasons and explanation.

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Wen: WHy I like this- your reasons are well-explained, you go into some detail and then logically the govt's role comes in to explain what needs to be done next. The flow works

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I like the point you make about the language barrier and so their experience can't be shared. One thing you might want to think about is how to link implications to reasons you give as it feels disjointed. But definitely a great start

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I like your link between reason and implication- However, why are they less of a burden after 67? Explore this idea further as it's not entirely clear

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Many valid points! But spend some time explaining one idea (eg, I dont follow why the govt would be more willing to finance healthcare? The ideas between reason and implication don't link)

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Good point about grandparents as baby-sitters: WHy is this important in Singapore? why is their role as caregiver especially important here? (hint.. characteristics...)

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Hi Gabby a great start: Can provide more details on their contribution to the economy as its rather vague- think up some egs. More details on how and in what way will help make a better evaluation

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Hi Isabel: good job trying to find a 'no' response for the first argument- but pls link it to trends/Singapore characteristics.
What I think is impressive is the details you go into talking about Singapore and our characteristics and how employers have to tap into the elderly to help with this. V WELL DONE!

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HusnaA good start! We can now work on making links ( causal) between one point to the next as right now these are just observations- providing reasons means arguing for why you think you are right

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HusnaA good start! We can now work on making links ( causal) between one point to the next as right now these are just observations- providing reasons means arguing for why you think you are right

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Hi Laris, a good point made but can tell me a bit more about how our economy will stagnate

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Nabil nabil

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ggabboii

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Ensure the picture is in protrait mode so I don't have to rotate it. Thanks.