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Again

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By Aidan

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Alexis,

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Alexis-

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Aiden, nice descriptive words

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Lexie!!! It’s like Alexis!!

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Cool!

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Decriptive words good job

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Jimmy

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Aiden, good description, has a theme, dialogue, relatable, and dab on dem h8ters.

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Aiden- this is an adorable story

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Aidan, 😮

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Kristal your story was awesome. I can tell you worked hard on it

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Aidan, good job at using very descriptive words and inner and outer thoughts

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Aidan, descriptive words, dialogue

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Aidan, I like how you use hyperbole in your story.  It makes it interesting!

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I like how you told what happened in the show

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I like how you told what happened in the show

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Jimmy

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Kristal, I love your details

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Very funny

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No cringe, descriptive, humor, understandable, has a theme, good lead

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Kristal, thanks for going and letting us here your wonderful story with a humor and horror in it making it indefinitely not cringe

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Kristal, I like how you describe what is going on inside of your brain, very descriptive inner thoughts!

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Krystal, really funny and descriptive

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Kristal-this is funny and descriptive btw I don't see how this is cringey and I can really relate to some of it

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Aidan, has a good theme

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Good story becouse its funny. Nice prank

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A good story needs good horror. I love it

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Kewl word choices

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Jimmy, I like how you used descriptive language. I like the plot twist

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@idan

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Jimmy, your story is so descriptive. HORROR I LIKE IT!!!!!!🤡🤐😈💀👻☠️ Also I see you have pure skill

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Jimmy, you did a good job at being descriptive

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Jimmy, I like that you used a lot of descriptive words

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Jimmy-very descriptive. it's a scary night ha ha just a prank bro

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Jimmy, your story is spooky!  You do a good job of building suspense in your story.

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Jimmy hurtado

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@idan

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Good job describing inner thoughts Nayo

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Nayo, it’s detailed

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I really like it, it has tons of humor, dialogue, it has perfection, description, figurative language, it's great, great, and great.

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Awesome excellent word choices I like my name😂

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Nayo, you did a good job at explaining your opinion and building suspe

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Nayo, descriptive words, humorous, and dialogue

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Nayo, your story is hilarious.  You have a good sense of humor that shows through in your story.

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@idan

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Mary, you did a good job at building suspense and using your inner and outer thoughts

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Mary-you can really picture the area in your mind it's super descriptive

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VERY DESCRIPTIVE🎟

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Mary, you had a lot of dialogue, I can imagine the setting, and good conclusion

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Mary, you do a good job of telling us your inner thoughts, as well as including dialogue between you and your friend.

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Shows your surroundings, what you think, what you do, what you say, and it's relatable.

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Thanks for being brave

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You adults now! Making your own disicions. Nice words

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Paola, you did a great job with building suspense and descriptive words and details and a good end

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Paola, I like how you stated time, description, good lead, inner thoughts, outer thoughts, has a theme, and i understand all of it.

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Paola, good details

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Paola, you do a good job of describing your actions through descriptive language.

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Paola-i like your similes and descriptive words it really helps people see what is happening

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I like how you explained how you felt

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Madison, had inner thoughts, and good conclusion

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Nice title

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Madison, you build suspense in your story!  I was scared for you

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Madison, good details. Builds suspense.

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I like about how you say the time,what you do, dialogue, a theme, it it makes a ton of sense I can also imagine this happening in my mind, and it has suspense and there is a problem. Perfection

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Madison-it is suspenseful,scary,and interesting

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@idan

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Good figurative language and descriptive words. I like the theme

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Delia, good descriptive words

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Delia, descriptive words and good conclusion

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It is super descriptive and it makes me understand what's going on overall. I also like how it has a theme and I like the dialogue.

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Delia, you do a good job of telling us the inner and outer story.

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Delia you you did a excellent job at explaining the setting 😉

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Delia-it's descriptive and has a good conflict

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Delia, you did a great job at using descriptive words keeping everyone int

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Jimmy hurtado

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Jimmy

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@idan

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Very funny snd discriptive

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Cory, I like how you used descriptive, precise words in your story.

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Great job in correctly using figurative language 👍🏽

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Cory, you are using good dialogue

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Cory-it has similes its funny and it's descriptive. The conflict is real

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Cory, descriptive words, funny, and good figurative language

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Cory, you did a great job at transition and descriptive words and it was funny

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Cory, I like you’re figurative language

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Eli-it was funny

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Eli, it has humour and was detailed

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It is very descriptive and I could imagine the whole story in my head.

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Eli you did a great job in explaining your inner thought and how you felt

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Eli, you do a good job of including a lot of dialogue in your story.

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Eli, i like how you are very discriptive

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Eli, you have a good job of telling you emotions and how you felt.

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Eli, you did a great job with dialog and it was interesting words

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Eli, l like how

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Jimmy