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During the summer vacation I flew to Denmark with my grandfather and my cousin.

Sunday 24 th July, Billund Denmark

Today, we went to Legoland. We saw amazing Lego creations. My favorite one was the Dragon. It looked so real

Later my cousin, Eyal and I went to all the rollercoaster. It was so fun and exciting.

At 5 PM we left Legoland and went to my grandfather's friends hose. We played with their cat, Moly. It scratched me and I have a scar till today.

Monday 25th July, Billund Denmark

We woke up at 09:00, eat breakfast and went sailing. While we were sailing it started to rain. I was not fun and we were disappointed.

Around 6 pm, we went to the woods near the hotel and started a campfire. My grandfather was cooking the fish, Eyal was cutting the salad and I was watching the fire.

At 7 pm my grandfather's friends came. We ate dinner together and it was good!

I had a great vacation! Thank you, grandfather!

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My brother and me. *Nurit Landau*

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Tamar‘s Blog

During the summer my family and I decided to go together on vacation at the hotel in Nahariya.

Sunday, August 13 rd

The Achziv Sea, Nahariya, Israel

On the first day of our vacation we went to The Achziv Sea. We were doing Tornado boats in this sea.  At first, I was very afraid because it was very fast and it looked dangerous, but then I got used to it. They took us from the shores of Achziv to Rosh Hanikra and the great cliff. I can’t describe this expedition. The view of the sea and nature was very lovely. On this trip we saw many natural pools. I was amazed to look about the interesting nature that our Earth has.

Monday, August 14 th

Nahariya's promenade and Arena mall , Israel

We went to the Nahariya's promenade where the Ga'aton stream is located. This is an amazing promenade. We were going along the stream. Although it was dry and wasn’t full, we loved this place.  Then, we ate in a tasty restaurant. The food was really good. At the end of the visit we went to the Arena mall in Nahariya. We did so much shopping in this day. In the shopping mall we had all the shops that we needed.

Tuesday, August 15 th

Rosh Hanikra, Israel

The last day but no less interesting was in Rosh Hanikra. We rode the cable car and saw the grottoes. I was so excited to see the beauty of Rosh Hanikra. It was an amazing experience. I think that who never went to Rosh Hanikra must go. Anyone who wasn't there doesn't know what he's losing.

Finally, we came back to our home very tired but so happy from this trip. The hotel was big, beautiful and the service of the hotel was excellent. The places that we were traveling were lovely. I’ll never forget this trip.

Tamar
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For Yom Kippur, my family decided to go to Moscow. You're probably wondering
Why Moscow? Well, every year on the High holydays my grandfather, who is a
famous cantor, travels to Moscow to lead the prayers in the Moscow Great Synagogue.
So this year we thought that It would be nice to go and enjoy, connect
with his prayers.

Thursday, September  28th
After an exhausting night, we finally arrived at
Moscow's airport. We were shocked to realize that unfortunately  it is much colder there than we expected it to be! While we were driving to the hotel that we were staying
In,  my father got a text message from our tour guide. She said that she is already
waiting for us in the lobby. when we got there, we quickly put our suitcases in our rooms and hurried downstairs.
Our tour guide took us to the red square. It was so exciting to see the palace and the Kremlin, which is the official residence of the president of Russia.
After that, we were really hungry. So while we were looking for a place to eat,
we stopped to buy hot chocolate. It was probably the best hot chocolate I have
ever drank!

September 29th -30th
We spend Friday in preparation for Yom Kippur. Luckily, my father chose a hotel nearby the synagogue. So we didn’t have to walk far. The synagogue is beautiful, old but very well kept.on Friday evening and Saturday, every seat was taken.The prayers were familiar to me and reminded me of the years I listened to my grandfather in the Great Synagogue of  Jerusalem.
stay tuned for more adventures.
-Moria

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Shirels blog
20th of july , 2014
switzerland
We got of the plane from Israel , it was a four hours flight .
After the airport wa drove to the city we were sleeping in .
The city is amazing , I was amazed from the old houses covered with white snow.
From the moment we got to the hotel we put our things in our room and dressed up for skiing .
I was taught to ski for eight hours and it was appalling to learn something so interesting and fun.
I came to the hotel later than everyone else because I was the youngest so I learned more hours of skiing .
While my dad made us a big dinner we were stretching .

21 th of july , 2014

We drove to the mountains where we were skiing .
They ordered me with a French girl named Eva .
It was so funny to be with her because we didnt understand each other .
After skiing I went down to the restaurant and there was a cartificate in hebrew and we asked him what it is about and he told us that his grandfather helped jews during the Holocaust.
It was amazing to see how many good people there are in the world.
thank you for reading
SHIREL SUDRI

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Oriya's Blog – My Trip to New York

By: Oriya Kerner

Sunday, August 3 rd, 2017.

It was the middle of the night; my brothers and I were sleeping in our rooms, when suddenly my parents announced that we are going on a trip to New York.
We were very excited and happy from that announcement; we thanked our parents so much and started to get prepared.

Monday, August 4 th, 2017.

In the house, you could feel that the trip is coming. Everyone were in his or her organizations for the big day. My mom and I went to the grocery store to buy food and some candies to eat on the plane, my brothers washed their cloths, and my dad checked all the last things so we will have the most fun we can.We went to sleep early in order to wake up the next morning with a lot of energy.

Wednesday, August 6th – 11th , 2017

We landed in New York at 6 o'clock in the evening.Immediately as we arrived we started to travel in the city. We went to all the big parks, visited in the interesting museums and watched impressive shows in Broadway.

Sunday, August 12th, 2017.

At 2 o'clock in the morning, we left Ben-Gurion airport, when we saw my all extended family doing us a "welcome home surprise".We all agreed that it was the best trip we ever had.

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Travel on Tiberias.

October, 8th, 2017.

On the second day of Sukkot I went with my family to travel in the north of Israel.

At 9:00 am we were eating breakfast. We ate omelets and eggs, with salad and cheese.

At 12:00 am we arrived at the Majrase River. The weather was amazing and we were really enjoying the track. In the way they were some annoying kids who by accident stepped on us. Unfortunately, they fell on their face.

After that, we were exhausted so we were looking for a beach to rest.

After we found many amazing places we decided to go to the Sea of ​​Galilee. It was a wonderful time. I was really amazed by the beauty of the Kineret.

At 19:00 we went  to eat pizza in Tiberias. I ordered a personal pizza. I was excited by the pizza, I can tell you that was the tastiest pizza I ever ate.

In conclusion, that was a perfect day to relax and have fun and I recommend you to travel Tiberias.

Ella,
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my trip to th black forest-Ella Walfisch

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2nd of August-Israel
I cant believe that! we ordered airline tickets 8 months ago, our suitcases are ready in the car, the texi will come in 4 hours, but just now the receptionist told my dad that the plane is rotten and we need to find another flight.What are we need to do now?!

3rd of Augu st-Berlin
Everything is OK.Yesterday night we found a flight at the last moment. Today we stoped for connection in Berlin for 5 hours, so we managed to travel there a little bit. We are walking on the main street and we are sitting on Starbacks for lunch.I hoped that we could stay there but we are need to move back to the airport and fly to the black forest.

4th of A ugus t-Black Forest
Thanks god we finally here in the black forest!the way to here was beautiful.Everything around was green. Today we did our first attraction, The Senses Path. We was walking for two hours, while we stepping on diffrent things like stones, sand, mud and more. There were stations every 15 minutes and in every station we applied another sense. This atracttion was really funny and interesting.

5th of august
Wow! the black forest is really the most beautiful place that I ever saw ,but unfortunately I already need to say goodbye to this amazing place, because tomorrow w will move to Switzerland, so goodbye forest! :-)

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Monday, October 30 th, 2017- Bar Gelerman

A trip to Paris

Monday, October 9 th, 2017
Paris, France
During Sukkot Holiday, my grandmother and I decided to fly to France. I was very excited because it was my first time that I flew. Fortunately, when the airplane landed, I was tensed because I was very scared from the flight. We arrived late at night so we got some sleep.

Tuesday, October 10 th, 2017
The Seine River, Paris
We got up at 8:00 A.M so we could do a lot of activities. We ate breakfast quickly and drove to The Seine River. During the sailing, we saw many bridges with different decorations that symbolize the city of Paris. At the end of the sailing we went to the Eiffel Tower and I enjoyed myself a lot. It was realy facinating.

Wednesday, October 11 th, 2017
Disneyland, Paris
We got up at 7:30 A.M because the Disneyland Park opened at 9:00 A.M. We drove there and when we arrived we bought tickets. We were surprised that the park had a lot of facilities. I was amazed to find out that the facilities were scared. But  I got on them anyway.
While I was doing a lot of fun, my grandmother was eating lunch.

I will never forget this trip. I had an amazing vacation on Sukkot Holiday and I recommend everyone to fly to Paris!!

Bar
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My journey to the Netherlands by Roni Waisbord

Monday, July 10th 2017

It’s a sunny morning in Tel Aviv and all the passengers on the airplane were asked to fasten their seat belts.

The journey began.

After 4 hours of flight, we landed in cloudy and cold Amsterdam. After we collected our luggage, we drove to our new home for the next week. On the way, we saw trees, windmills, and cows wandering around in the fields. We arrived to our village at 9 pm and the sun was still shining in the sky.

Tuesday, July 11th 2017

We drove to a town called Wheatthorne. The center of this town is in the middle of a lake. In order to get from one point to another,  we sailed in a boat and tried our best not to bump into a Chinese or Philippine person.

Wednesday, July 12th 2017

It was rainy so we drove to the science museum in Haag. On the way we spotted our national flag near to International Court of Justice.

Thursday, July 13th 2017

Today, we visited a big amusement park called Efteling. I took a ride on one of the biggest roller coaster in the world. It was scary but fun.

Friday, July 14th 2017

This day was dedicated to my favorite hobby, shopping.

Sunday, July 16th 2017

Today was dedicated to Netherlands in the past. We learned how the Dutch people used to manufacture all sorts of products using windmills as an electricity source. I was fascinated to learn how the Dutch flip - flops were and are still made.

Monday, July 17th 2017

The last day of our journey we packed our suitcases and all of our new adventures and flew back to Israel. In order to learn that there is no place like home.

Roni
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A Trip to Peres Park- Reut Kohanim

October 8 th, 2017

Holon, Israel

During Sukkot holiday, my family and I went to Peres Park in Holon.
At first, we were sailing in a big bout. We saw a lot of ducks swimming in the water. I decided to feed them with some bread. While I was throwing them pieces of bread, suddenly I fell into the cold water. I was very frightened. Fortunately, before I got on the boat, I put a float.
After we got off the boat, and I dried, we were very hungry, so we decided to have a picnic. We found a nice place with shadow, we sat on the soft grass and ate a delicious lunch. While we were eating, the sun was shining, the wind was blowing and the birds were chirping. It was lovely. I was so excited!
Then, we rented bicycles and took part in a bicycle trip. We got on our bikes and started to drive. While we were riding our bicycles, we saw a beautiful river, plants and lots of flowers. The whole view was amazing!
Finally, we returned home tired but satisfied. I had a lot of fun at Park Peres and I really recommend you go there!

Reut
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My Trip On Sukkot Vacation- Lian Rabi

During Sukkot vacation I went with my friends to Jerusalem. We drove to Jerusalem at 9 a.m and  traveled in a lot of places.

Monday, 9 October, 2017
Yaffo Street, Jerusalem

We came to Yaffo St. at 10 a.m and we were very excited. We were traveling there 4 hours. We entered to  lovely shops and bought a lot of skirts and dresses. Later we ate a lunch in "New Delhi"- it was very tasty.

The Western Wall, Jerusalem

In the afternoon we walked the Western Wall. It was very stirring. We prayed there "Mincha prayer" and visited in "Chain of generations". There we saw the history of the Jewish people through magnificent works made of layers of glass.

Mahane Yehuda Market, Jerusalem

In the evening hours we arrived the Mahane Yehuda Market. While we were taste a lot of types of tahini and halva tourists take pictures of us. I hope that we made a good impression on them.

The "tahini hummus" restaurant, Jerusalem

After the long day we went to eat in a hummus restaurant. Everyone ordered what we wanted and we really enjoyed it. After 20 minutes a few children of our age began to talk to us and ask us questions. Like a  where we were from, about Bnei Akiva and we talked with them for about half an hour.

Central Station, Jerusalem
At 10 p.m we walked to the central station and  the bus came exactly. We got to the bus exhausted but pleased with the wonderful day. I am enjoyed  the whole of activities and I recommend you to travel in this area too.

Lian
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My family trip to London.

Wednasday,Augost 23rd,2017.

London,England

This summer I went to London for two weeks with my family.
I had a lot of fun in London and I loved it there especially because I always dreamed and wanted to be in London.
So after I realized my dream when I got there I could also experience all the amazing experiences the scenic attractions and the food that is so easy to get by There because of the language.
In London, we were in places like Westminster Abbey,  London Eye,  Bigben,  the Boro food market and many other places,  but I want to tell you about one experience I will never forget!!
During the day we strolled around the city in all the major sights, but in the evening there was the big attraction I had been waiting for since the beginning of my trip My mother,  and my two sisters,  My brother and I went to a performance at the London Central Theater.
It was an Aladdin show based on Disney's real story.
It was a lively place and I was Interested in all the surrounding scenery.
During the performance I could not believe I was there and then even more.
It was just amazing, I got out of the market, the performance was amazing.
The dancing,  the songs,  the sound,  Was too good to be true.

To sum up, we returned to our apartment tired but satisfied after a long day full of activities.

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by: Neta Mor

Monday, October 9 th, 2017
Givat Shmuel, Israel

It was 10 a.m. and my brother and I were eating breakfast when our dad announced we would be going on a trip to Jerusalem.

After all the preparations, at 11 o'clock, we were on our way to Jerusalem.

Mount Herzl, Jerusalem, Israel

After an hour, we arrived at Mount Herzl and started a tour at the museum there. We watched videos and saw pictures which made Herzl's life seem real. It was really exciting and fascinating.
Then we walked around the cemetery at Mount Herzl and saw the graves of many great people of our nation, such as Yitzhak Rabin and Menachem Begin. Unfortunately, it was raining a little but the experience was not ruined. For me this visit was deep and impressing.

Mahane Yehuda Market, Jerusalem, Israel

Later, we drove to Mahane Yehuda Market. ב. There were many food stalls and some restaurants in the area. While we were looking around we noticed a restaurant which seemed special, so we walked in. We ate a kind of hamburger that was the best one on Earth. We left the market when it started to get dark.

Givat Shmuel, Israel

Finally, we got back home exhausted but satisfied. The day was lovely and meaningful.

Neta
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Talya - Berlin

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My sukkot vacation
During sukkot holiday, my family and I decided to go on vacation in a hotel in jerusalem area.
October, wednesda y 11th
At noon we arrived to the hotel in neve Ilan. Wow!!! the hotel looks amazing!
The hotel has a beautiful garden, lots of green trees, benches and hammocks. I was so excited to start our vacation.
October, Thursday 12th
My family and I decided to go and travel in jerusalem,so we went to segway guided tour across the old city walls. we were in so many beautiful places around jerusalem, and it was an amazing expedition. In the afternoon we drove to the familiar resturant of chef Avi Levy called "Hamotzi".
October, Friday 13th
At friday morning we travel in the city of david and the western wall. In the wall there were so many people and I very impressed. Then, we went to Mamilla mall. We did a lot of shopping there and it was very fun.
October, saturda y 14th
Our last day on vacation, we were very exhausted from all the trips, and we especially wanted to rest. At the and of the day we back home.
It was very depressing but we also glad to get back to normal.

In short, we had a lot of experience and I hope that we back to this hotel.

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Wednesday, October,25 th 2017 –Lihi Madmoni

During the summer vacation, my family and I decided to fly abroad for a long time. So we decided to fly to America. I was very excited because I never flew for a long period.

July 7, New York City

The first week we were mostly in Manhattan. On the first day of the week, we went to Times Square, the most famous avenue in Manhattan, wow!! full of huge billboards were there, everything was glamorous and exciting !!. Throughout the week we spent the time to  visit all the attractive places that we had not seen yet.

July 14, N.Y.

In the second week ,we decided to go to Central Park. It is an enormous park where there are lots of grass, fountains, statues and playgrounds. It was really hot in the park so my brother and I asked our mother to buy us ice cream. Suddenly In the middle of the park my mother saw our close friends, while my mother was calling  them, the ice cream melted over me. I was really upset. At last, they heard us and the rest of the week we were all together which was very enjoyable .

July 21- 30 , Brooklyn

In the third week, we arrived in Brooklyn. The first thing we did was take a picture at the Brooklyn Bridge. While we were taking pictures from the Bridge, suddenly the sky became full of fireworks . It was really an amazing view .

In short, this trip I will never forget, it was an unforgetable experience.

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My visit to my cousins on Sukkot vacation.

8 th of October 2017

Givat Shmuel

I woke up in the morning at 11:00 A.M exactly. Since I woke up late I was fresh and energized. I was eating a healthy breakfast containing orange juice and an egg when my mother reminded me that we were going to my cousins that lives in Ofra.I looked forward to the visit so much. The whole ride to Ofra took forty- five minutes and it was a bit scary because they live outside the green line border. When we arrived I saw that all my cousins arrived there too.

In the beginning we enjoyed a barbecue and ate delicious food in the Sukkah.

Then, we jumped on my cousins' trampoline. Their trampoline is so big and jumpy and it was so fun to jump on It. Unfortunately, it started to rain and we got inside the house.

In the house we played some box games.

After that, while we were watching the popular familiar movie "Baby Boss" in the kid's room, my grandmother was serving us donuts called "Sfinge". They were so tasty.

Finally we went back home, tired but satisfied.

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Basad, Wednesday October 25 th, 2017 Adva Layani

A trip to Eilat

October, Sunday 8th

On Sucot my family and I decided to go on a trip to Eilat. It took us 4 and half hours to get there! On the way to Eilat we stopped by Ben-Gurion's house and it was amazing to see how everything was preserved in its original form.

October, Monday 9th

My family and I went to the Dolphin Reef. The Dolphin Reef is a beach were you can swim with dolphins, but we didn’t swim with the dolphins. My family and I were trying to pet the dolphins , but they were to far away from us. One of the dolphins got very close to me and I pet it! It was a lot of fun and the dolphins were very cute.

October Tuesday 10th

During the evening my family and I went to the Ice mall. At the Ice mall mall there is a big ice skating rink. There were several professional ice skate who did a performance. They did crazy and incredible stunts. Ice skating was very hard for me and my family .We fell a lot of times ,but we still had a great time.

October, Wednesday 11th

My family and I went to the "Eilat'S Tayelet" . On the "Eilat'S Tayelet" there is  a special ride called the "Fire Ball". It looked very scary, but I still wanted to try it. My family was scared to  try it, and no one wanted to go on that ride with me. After a long time I managed to convince my brother to go on the "Fire Ball" with me. The ride was very scary ,but also very fun.

October, Thursday 12th

On our last day at  Eilat we saw the Musical Fountain. It was amazing! The colors and the music were beautiful. After that my family and I went back home.

I had a lot of fun on this trip and I really recommend you to go to Eilat too.

Adva
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My Summer Vacation

August 20th- Paris
We landed in Paris in the afternoon. Unfortunately, it was raining but it was not cold. A bus was taking us to the hotel, where we put our suitcases. Then, we went to the river. While we were sailing along the Seine, it stopped raining. Luckily, the weather was amazing. I was excited by the beautiful view.  Later, our tour guide reminded us that that day there would be a show in front of the Eifel Tower. We all went to watch the light show. It was interesting and thrilling.

August 21st-  Euro-Disney
On the second day, we woke up very early in the morning, so that we will get to Euro-Disney on time.We had a good breakfast in the hotel and we went there by bus. When we arrived at the gate, were many people waited. But because we were in a tourists group, we could enter the park very quickly. We felt very good with the group members, so I found a friend and went with her on many rides.  It was so disappointing to find out that some rides did not work anymore. They closed at 5 a.m. I was a little annoyed but luckily the space mountain ride was open and we went on it. We had a great time there.

August 22nd - Holland- Efteling
Early in the morning we flew to Holland. While we were flying, we saw the nice green fields with beautiful flowers. There, the most exciting park was Efteling. We spent the whole day there. We had a lot of fun on the frightening ride. It was a train that went so fast that I felt I was going to fall out. I was the youngest in our group that went on that ride.  I was happy when it finally ended.

I had a great vacation and I really recommend you to go there too.

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Paris, France

At 9 a.m., my family and I went to Disneyland. We were lucky enough and got there early so we managed to go on almost all the rides. I even got to see Minnie mouse. At around 4 p.m. we left Disney land and went to the Louvre. I was very excited to see the ''Mona Lisa''. But, when I saw it, it wasn’t as thrilling as I imagined.

Monday October 9th, 2017

Paris, France

After we woke up and had some breakfast, we went to see the "Arc de Triomphe". It was very impressive to look at and we took some wonderfull photos. Later that day I hung out with some friends I met the year before at summer camp. While my friends and I were having lots of fun, my family was dinning at a fancy restaurant.

Tuesday October 10th 2017

Paris, France

This was our last day so we went to see the most famous attraction in Paris: the Eiffel Tower. It was beautiful, just like in the movies. After that, we headed to the airport in order to catch a plane back home.

I had a lot of fun on my trip and I hope to return to Paris soon.

Sivan Leibovitch

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Wednesday, October 24th, 2017 - Hodaya Shoashi

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Going on a trip is an amazing opportunity to discover new places in our beautiful world. My friend and I made up our mind go on a fantastic trip to Sweden. We will be there for 2 days. I was so excited for this flight because it was my first flight ever. It was my first time I steped on a plane! I felt so happy!

Sunday, August 6th 2017
Shtockholm, Sweden
We went to the museum to see the costumes and the albums of the legendary band called "ABBA". ABBA is a Swedish band who was very familiar in the past. My friend and I were very glad to go there because we know a lot of ABBA songs. When you come to the museum area, you join an instructor who knows well the museum to help you understand better what's in the museum. My friend and I got a very nice one. While the instructor was talking, my friend and I had noticed the costume of Agnetha Faltskog when she sang the song "Waterloo". We asked the instructor if we were right and he said that this is the exact costume that Agnetha was wearing in the show. The costume reminded me a bit of a superman costume. We had a very good time there.

Monday, August 7th
Shtockholm, Sweden
My friend and I went to Ericsson Globe. The place where the Eurovision Song Contest 2016 was hosted. We were more excited than yesterday!
While my friend bought tickets for us I checked if we have our flight tickets in our bags. Unfortunantely, they weren't there. Then we went to the hotel to search there and luckily my friend found it! after that, we went back to the
Ericsson Globe. We really enjoyed visiting the place where the Eurovision took part in.
We had a lot of fun on this journey!

Hodaya
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A Trip to London
On summer vacation, my family and I decided to fly to London. I was very excited because it was a great opportunity for my to discover more places that Im not familiar with.

August 15, Backingham palace
we took a few trains to Bakingham palace to watch the changing of the guards.we didnt expect so many people in the area. the ceremony started at 11oclock exactly. My family and I were watching the marching band and  the horses in a total excitment.

The London Eye
After we watched the changing of the guards we went to the "London eye". The London Eye is a giant wheel whre you canE see all of London from only one ride!  We were watching the fascinating  view while we were riding. we got very disappointed when the ride came to his end because we were really enjoyed!

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Travel to Jerusalem on Sucot

October 9 th 2017

Givat Shmuel, Israel

On the third day of Sucot when I was doing my homework, my friend suddenly called me and suggested that I join her and some other friends for a trip in JerusalemIt. It  was really exciting for us because it was the first time that we all traveled together. One day before the trip we all planned the travel and then we could go.

October 10 th 2017

Mahane Yehuda market, Jerusalem

We came to Mahane Yehuda market with the light rail. We hang out there among all the stalls and even bought a special Halva. It was the best Halva on the Earth.

Yafo Street, Jerusalem

In Yafo we went to the music museum- it was amazing.While we were walking in Yafo street we noticed extraordinary restaurant so we came in.  This restaurant called "Tmol-Silshom" which is a bookstotre but actually a restaurant. It is the most beautiful restaurant I have ever seen. Later we shopped in all the shops on Yafo and took a lot of pictures together (look down).

The Western Wall, Jerusalem

The top of this travel was the visit on the Western wall. This place is the most special place for me. When we came there we prayed and asked some wishes from god.

Givat Shmuel, Israel

We came home late at night and we could say that it is the best trip we had ever had.
Shachar Rabi

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