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I want to make my comments for Handan's and Sena's travelouges. Firstly, I want to start woth Handan's. I really like the starting point of their trip :D.
Besides, it is really nice coincidence that when they visited Amsterdam, there were some celebration kind of things. They make the Amsterdam more colorful and lovely. Handan's descriptions also are really descriptive and clear. Secondly, Belgrad is the one of cities that i really want to see. It is really a nice destination for a trip, i believe. Sena's travelouge gives every detail that you need. Moreover, it has lots of pictures that enable you picture the descriptions easily and make you enjoy your reading.

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I want to make a comment on Feyzullah’s travelogue. As I have lived in Marmaris for more than 14 years, I have been to Akyaka so many times. Feyzullah’s travelogue is very well prepared and I really liked the idea of choosing Akyaka. Pictures he used looked pretty good to me and I enjoyed his travelogue as a whole.

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You need to read your peers' travellogue assignments by following the llink below and make comments on two of your peers' writing:
Link:
https://padlet.com/iseltmet304/6blmgr5u5pm2
While making comments to your peers, you need to make comments on the content, the topic choice, the use of pictures, the provision of details, your own feelings, observations and impressions about the place, some tips for the future travellers, the organization of the travellogue (the paragraph format, the use of connectors, supporting ideas, unity ) and the language use .
Please remember to write your friends' names before you write your comments.

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My first comment is for Ecem Nur Şen's travellogue. I have never been to Fethiye. But Ecem's descriptions of this place and her experiences made me a little regret for not having been there. I am curious about Fethiye now. Her usage of pictures was helpful, as she didn't make me only imagine it, I was able to see what she wrote. On the grammatical side of her travellogue; by not repeating same grammatical structures, she made the reading smooth. I didn't get bored while reading.
My second comment is for Ferhat Furkan Uruç's travellogue. Unfortunately, I haven't been to Trabzon either, so his travellogue made me regret too. By the pictures he used, I was impressed. I got a little upset about green turning grey situation. Grammatically, he mistook some words' spelling. Other than this, it is pretty understandable. I enjoyed as I was reading.