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Praise- good explanation

Polish- try to have greater voice projection

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Great dialogue
You could speak louder

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Praise: I like the story and the little cute pep session his mom had for him
Polish: it was actuallyreally  goooooddd but you should be louder just a bittttt

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Praise: very neat
Polish:project your voice more

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Praise- very creative
Polish- more eye contact

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Praise: very cute children's book
Polish: nothing really

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Praise- Good Creativity

Polish- maybe have more voice project, a stronger voice presentation

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Good topic to talk about
Project can add more color

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Slides seem empty due to lack of pictures and color. The topic was perfect for this project, good job

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Really good story, spoke in a confident and clear voice
No polish

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Praise: I like the topic of your children's book because it's a good topic to address within children!
Polish: Maybe next time add a little more detail to your pictures!

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Praise: the story explains the topic well

Polish: speak up, good job

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Praise: I like the topic you chose
Polish: you seemed a little nervous but you did very good

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Unique topic to cover in a children’s book. I can tell you put effort into this project.

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Praise: strong topic, you presented a real life situation
Polish: nada

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Praise: Great message
Polish: None

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Her presentation was good she brought up a very interesting topic.

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Praise: the mature content in her book is well explained and can help kids realize that there are people in the world that are hateful and mean and this book can help them maintain confidence and happiness through this hateful world.

Polish:She needs to speak up just a few notches so the class can hear her better.

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Praise// Great message throughout the story
Polish// I don’t have anything to add :)