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Coming up with different ways to mention the claim in the topic sentence of each paragraph without sounding repetitive

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Being able to gather enough evidence for all of my commentary within the time limit, and writing the evidence in a way that doesn’t look like I’m copying the text.

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Commentary because connecting back to your thesis and supporting confused me

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Writing Sophisticated transitions

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I still don't get what sophistication is, and how to connect it to your essay

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I am most concerned about how you should connect the the evidence to the purpose while 2 commentary without it sounding choppy.

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Commentary, transferring from an evidence piece to the whys and hows of the commentary is the most confusing portion for me.

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Commentary that explains how the evidence supports a line of reasoning.

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The part I struggle with the most is the sophistication. It’s not easy to remember all the different parts of the prompt and the text and connect them in so many ways in a handful of sentences

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Understanding what to write about the author's rhetorical choice

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Deciding on what evidence to pick at the beginning

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I am confused how to get the sophistication point and determine whether or not it was above and beyond enough.

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Anany Patel.                                         So I don’t understand how to pick out commentary. Like for example I wouldn’t know about biblical references regarding jericho.

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Anany Patel.                                         So I don’t understand how to pick out commentary. Like for example I wouldn’t know about biblical references regarding jericho.

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(Line of Reason)
I'm confused on how to connect the commentary and the topic and how to know the paragraph flows well.

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The commentary seems a lot like assumptions made about the speaker and doesn’t really have much to back it up…

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identifying certain phrases or rhetorical choices in an essay, or writing with the intent of using rhetorical choices.

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Connecting the commentary to the speaker’s background more specifically.

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Picking and sorting the evidence used in each paragraph

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Commentary