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-I often wake up at 9a.m.

-I often have breakfast in the morning.

-I usually play soccer in the afternoon.

-I sometimes do homework in the evening.

-I like play games with my friend in my free time.

like + Ving/ to V nhé Luân

-> câu đúng: I like playing games with my friend../ I like to play games with my friend...

Good job^^

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I wake up a quarter to 5 AM. After waking up, I listen to music, I do personal hygiene and exercise. I go jogging around my house. At 6 AM, I have breafast, I usually eat sweet potato or noodle or bread.

" I wake up AT a quarter to 5" -> Chị nhớ thêm giới từ AT trước thời gian cụ thể nhé

"breafast" - bị sai chính tả -> từ đúng "breakfast"

"noodles" phải luôn viết ở dạng số nhiều nhé chị

In the morning, I go to market, I buy a few meat, fish and vegestables. I prepare make lunch. My family have lunch at 11:30 AM. After, I do homework and practice speak English.

In the afternoon, I help my mother sell grocery a few hours.

In the evening, my family have dinner at 6 PM.

In the morning, I go to market, THEN I buy a few meat, fish... -> nếu mình liệt kê nhiều hành động thì dùng thêm liên từ vd "and/then" để câu hay hơn nhé chị

vegetables đang bị sai chính tả

practice + ving: practice speaking

Thay "After" bằng các từ như "Afterward, then. later, subsequently" để câu văn hơn hơn nhé chị

"groceries" số nhiều

"In the evening, my family HAS dinner at 6 PM": "gia đình tôi" số ít -> động từ HAS

I like watch program on YouTube and learn English in free time. Recently, I participant in class English by Ms KhanhLinh, in there I have new friends interesting. Class stars at 7 PM and finished at 9 PM on tuesday and Thursday every week. I usually go to bed at about 10 PM.

Thank you teacher!

like + Ving: chỉ sở thích -> I like watching...

programs số nhiều

I like watching programs on Youtube and LEARNING :

participate (v): tham dự khác với "participant (n): người tham dự" nhé chị -> câu đúng: "I participate in .... "

"interesting friend" sẽ đúng hơn là "friend interesting" chị nhé vì: tính từ "interesting" phải đứng trước danh từ "friend"

Động từ "finished" đang ở thì quá khứ -> động từ đúng "finishes" -> class finishes at 9PM...

Good job ^^^

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I often wake up around 6 am. After that, I brush my teeth, take a shower and have breakfast. In the afternoon, after taking a nap, I work on my laptop from home from 2 to 5 pm. In the evening, after having dinner, I run in the park near my house. When I have free time, I often play Duolingo game and play chess on my Ipad. That's all.

Good job 😁😁😁

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I usually get up at 7 AM. After waking up, I brush my teeth, wash my face and have breakfest. I driving a motobike to company. Im woking start at 8 AM and fnishes at 5 PM. I playing football with friends at 5:30 PM. I get home at 6:30 PM, I take a shower and make dinner. After that, I learning English and watching Chinese video. I often confide with girlfriend few hours. I go to bed at about 11 PM.

Hi Lưu Tùng,

😁😁😁

Nhìn chung đây là một bài viết ổn, đủ ý, logic tốt. Tuy nhiên Tùng cần chú ý những ngữ pháp hơn nhé:

Câu "I driving a motorbike to company.. " , động từ "drive - lái (xe)" đang bị viết ở sai thể nhé. Câu đúng: "I drive a motorcycle to company"

Câu "Im woking start.." đang bị tối nghĩa và sai ngữ pháp hen. Nếu Tùng diễn tả một hoạt động lặp đi lặp lại thì sẽ sử dụng thì "hiện tại đơn", trong khi câu này đang được viết ở thì "hiện tại tiếp diễn". Câu đúng: "I start working at 8AM... "

Tương tự với câu "I learning English... " sai cùng lỗi như câu trên , Tùng xem lại nhé

Bên cạnh đó, Tùng cũng nhớ để ý chính tả khi viết nhé, vd: finish, motorbike, breakfast"

Ngoài ra thì có một số từ khá hay được sử dụng trong bài của T như "confide" ^^. Tuy nhiên "confide + in" mới đúng ha Tùng. Câu đúng:

"I confide in my girl friend.. " - Tôi tâm sự với bạn gái của tôi ...

Good job 😁😁

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I usually wake up at 5.30 AM. After getting up I brush my teeth then I prepare the breakfirst for my family. My husband often wakes the childen up. We normally have breakfirst together. I always take the childen to school before 6.40 AM and then I go to work.

Hi chị Mai,

Bài viết tốt, đầy đủ thông tin, đúng ngữ pháp 🥰

Tuy nhiên có một số chỗ sau chị cần chú ý để tăng hiệu quả cho bài viết nhé:

Đặt dấu "," sau cụm trạng từ - vd: "After getting up, I ..."

Chú ý chính tả các từ "breakfast", "children"

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I usually get up at 7:00 o’clock in the morning. After washing my face and brushing my teeth. I have breakfast and go to work by train at 8:00 AM. Next, I have lunch at the company. In the afternoon I often go to the supermarket whenever I have free time. I come back home at 7:00 p.m. Then I cook dinner and take a shower. I study and watch tv until 12:00p.m and next I go to bed.

Hi chị Thanh,

từ "next" sử dụng trong câu "I study and watch TV until 12 p.m and next I go to bed" chưa hợp lí nhé. Chị có thể xem xét thay "next" bằng những từ dưới đây để câu mượt và hay hơn:

"then/ afterward/ Later" - tất cả đều mang nghĩa "sau đó" nhé

vd: I study and watch TV until 12 p.m and later, I go to bed"

Nhưng bên cạnh đó thì bài viết khá tốt, đầy đủ thông tin, đúng ngữ pháp. Good job 🥰

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I usually wake up at 9:30 AM. After waking up, I do exercise and have breakfast in the morning. Afternoon, I usually play football. Evening, I often watch movies. I like to go to bed in my free time.

Good job 🥰🥰 🥰

Câu "Afternoon, I usually play..." và câu "Evening, I often watch..." chưa đầy đủ hen vì thiếu giới từ chỉ thời gian

=> Thêm "In", vd như: "In the afternoon,../ In the evening.." - nhé

=> Câu đúng: In the afternoon, I usually play football. In the evening, I often watch movies

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eg:

I usually wake up at 8 am.

After waking up, I brush my teeth, wash my face and have breakfast

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1 I seeing, There are 9 eggs, 4 cheeses, 3 apples, 3 onion, 2 fish, 4 bread and 3 bell pepper in the picture.

There is some oil, orange and asparagus in the picture.

There are a lot of noodles, macaroni, ham, pasta and celery in the picture.

There is milk bottle and garlic in the picture.

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1/ there are fish in the picture

2/ there are butter in the picture

3/ there are egg in the picture

4/ there are tomato in the picture

5/ there are white onions in the picture

6/ there are sandwich in the picture

7/ there are sausage in the picture

8/ there are milk in the picture

9/ there are cassava root in the picture

10/ there are citronella in the picture

11/ there are Orange in the picture

12/ there are apple in the picture

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Exercise 2:

I live in the countryside.

There are a few coffee shops in my countryside.

There is a restaurant in my countryside. Its name is Bibo restaurant.

There are many bus stations in my countryside.

There is no park in my countryside. Instead, there are meadows for children plays.

There are rivers in my countryside.

There are many schools in my countryside. There is one elementary school, there is one midle school, there are two highs school.

There is a shopping mall in my countryside, The shopping mall is very far from my house.

Exercise 3:

There are four rooms in my house. There is living room displays a set salon and the television, there are many flowers in the table. There are two bed rooms, this is my room, that is my parents room. There is a kitchen. Inside there is a dinner table, a fridge, an electric stovel and many kitchenwares. There are three people in my family.

Exercise 4

There are two fish in the picture.

There are nine eggs in the picture.

Therer are four sandwiches in the picture.

There is a lot of milk in the picture.

There is a lot of pasta in the picture.

There are many sausages in the picture.

There are many potatoes in the picture.

There are four onions in the picture.

There are three apples in the picture.

There is a lot of butter in the picture.

There are three pats of butter in the picture.

There is many ham in the picture. There are two bell peppers in the picture. There is hafl a lemon in the picture. There are four leeks in the picture.

Thankyou teacher!

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Exercise 4

There is a bottle of milk and a cup of milk in the picture.

There is a tray of eggs in the picture.

There are three pieces of bread in the picture.

There are four blocks of cheese.

There is a bottle of oil in the picture.

There is a little pasta in the picture.

There are two tomatoes in the picture.

There are a few potatoes in the picture.

There are three apples in the picture.

There are four onions in the picture.

There are a few pieces of sausage in the picture.

There are four blocks of ham in the picture.

There is some ground meat in the picture.

There is a little green onion in the picture.

There are three chilies in the picture.

There is an orange in the picture.

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Exercise 2

2.There are many restaurants in my city.

3.There are three bus stations near my company

4.There are many big parks far from my house.

5.There is not river behind my house.

6.There are many schools in my city.

7.There are a few shopping malls next to my house.

Exercise 3

There are five people in my family.

There are two air conditioners on the wall in my house.

There are two  televisions in the living room in my house.

There is a table in my bedroom.

There are three wardrobes in my house.

Exercise 4

There are nine eggs in the picture.

There is cooking oil in the picture.

There are four pieces of bread in the picture.

There is bread in the picture.

There are sausages in the picture.

There is cheese in the picture.

There are four onions in the picture.

There are potatoes in the picture.

There are two cups of milk in the picture.

There is milk in the picture.

There are three apples in the picture.

There are four pieces of butter in the picture.

There is butter in the picture.

There are oranges in the picture.

There are some chili peppers in the picture.

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There is one cup of milk in the picture

There is bread in the picture

There are two tomatoes in the picture

There are seven potatoes in picture

There is one bottle of oil in picture

There are two fishes in picture

There are three apples in the picture

There is cheese in picture

There are four pieces of cheese in picture

There is meat in picture

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1. There is a glass of milk and a milk bottle in the picture

2. There are nine eggs in the picture

3. There are two tomatoes in the picture

4. There are four bread in the picture

5. There are a lot of potatoes in the picture

6. There are three apples in the picture

7. There is a bottle of cooking oil in the picture

8. There are a lot of butter in the picture

9. There are two spaghetti in the picture

10. There are a lot of onions in the picture

11. There is a lot of meat in the picture

12. There are a lot of lemongrass in the picture

13. There is many spaghetti and pasta in the picture

14. There is half an orange in the picture

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There are eight potatoes in the picture.

There are many hams in the picture.

There are three apples in the picture.

There are nine eggs in the picture.

There is some butter in the picture.

There is a botle of oil in the picture.

There is milk in the picture.

There are onions in the picture.

There are two fish in the picture.

There are alot of noodles in the picture.

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1. There are six eggs in the picture.

2. There are a lot of butters in the picture.

3. There is a cooking oil bottle in the picture.

4. There are two tomatoes in the picture.

5. There is a milk bottle in the picture.

6. There is a plate of noodle in the picture.

7. There are a lot of pomatoes in the picture.

8. There are four breads in the picture.

9. There are two apples in the picture.

10. There are four lemongrases in the picture.

11. There are a lot of sausages in the picture.

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There are nine eggs in the picture.

There are four pieces of bread in my picture.

Thera are two tomatoes in my picture.

There is a glass milk in my picture.

There are lot of hams and potatoes in my picture.

There are two fishes in my picture.

There is a tray of beef in my picture.

There are four pieces of cheese in my picture.

There are three chilies in my picture.

There is a bottle cooking oil in my picture.

There is three apples in my picture.

There is no strawberry in my picture.

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there are four pieces of cheese

there are nine eggs

there are a lot of macaronis

there are four pieces of bread

there are four onions

there are a lot of meat , sausage and a dish ground beef

there are a lot of potatoes

there are three apples

there are five bell peppers

there is a half an orange

there are two tomatoes

there is a cup milk

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1. There is a glass of milk in the picture.

2. There is a milk bottle in the picture.

3. There are a lot of potatoes in the picture.

4. There are two fish in the picture.

5. There are a lot of hams in the picture.

6. There are a lot of butters in the picture.

7. There is a orange in the picture.

8. There are three apples in the picture.

9. There is a disc meat in the picture.

10. There are four onions in the picture.

11. There are four breads in the picture.

12. There are a lot of spaghettis in the picture.

13. There are a lot of tomatoes in the picture.

14. There is a coking oil in the picture.

15. There are nine eggs in the picture.

16. There are a lot of celeries in the picture.

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1. there are eggs in the image.

2. there are breads in the image.

3. there are apples in the image.

4. there are fishes in the image.

5. there is milk bottle in the image.

6. there is glass of milk in the image.

7. there are potatoes in the image.

8. there are hams and sausages in the image.

9. there are vegetables in the image.

10. there is cooking oil in the image.

11. there are cheeses in the image.

12. there are tomatoes in the image.

13. there are onions in the image.

14. there are ground meats in the image.

15. there are pastas in the image.

16. there are bell peppers in the image.

17. there oranges in the image.

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eg: There are a lot of eggs in the picture

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Exercise 1. Fill the blanks with the correct word this / that / these / those.

1. Don’t touch THOSE papers, right here.

2. THESE are pilots, and THOSE people over there are flight attendants.

3. THIS is my book. Over there on the table, THOSE are your books.

4. Can you read what THAT shirt says? It’s too far for me to see.

Hello anh Trí,

Nhìn chung anh Trí đã hiểu bài và làm đủ hen. Tuy nhiên, anh xem lại câu 1 giúp cô nhé:

1. Don't touch THOSE papers right here. ("right here" là ngay đây -> mình dùng với THESE nhé anh => Đáp án đúng: Don't touch THESE papers, right here

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Exercise 1

1. There are five (oranges) on the table.

2. There is some (juice) in the fridge.

3. There are a lot of (eggs) in my bag.

4. There (is) a lot of juice.

5. There is some (jam) on my plate.

6. There are many (bananas) on the desk.

7. I want to have some (bread). Please, give me some (blueberry) jam and a (cup) of coffee, too.

8. Eating too much (meat) is not good for your (health). You should eat more (fruit) and (vegetable).

Exercise 2

My family goes to the supermarket to buy a lot of things(food). I usually buy some strawberries(blueberries) and some bananas. My mother loves eggs and milk(meat). My father likes jam(salmon) and bread. My brother enjoys ham(jam) and cheese. My sister, of course, loves candies and strawberries(cereal).

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My name is thanh. I am twenty eight years old. I am from Ha Noi. I am living and working in Japan. I am single. There are five people in my family: my father, my mother, my brother, my sister and me.

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My name is Dũng. I am a baker . I am from Ho Chi Minh city . I have a girlfriend. My family has 4 peoples.

Hello Dũng,

1. Bài viết của em ổn (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. "My name is Dũng" => lưu ý viết tiếng Anh không dùng tiếng Việt nghen em => Câu đúng: "My name is Dung" ^^

3. Danh từ "People " (nghĩa: mọi người) là từ số nhiều rùi nên em không thêm "s" nhé (People: mọi người là từ số nhiều của "Person: một người) => câu đúng: My family has 4 people"

Em xem lại hen. Cô cảm ơn Dũng

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My name is Huy. I'm twenty-two year old. I'm studying at the university. I'm from Tra Vinh. My family has 5 people: my father, my mother, my brother, my younger sister and me.

Hello Huy,

1. Bài viết của em ổn (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Câu "I'm twenty - two year old" đang bị sai chính tả ha (Vì 23 tuổi là số nhiều -> dùng "years" => Câu đúng: I'm twenty -two years old.

Em xem lại hen. Cảm ơn Huy^^

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Exercise 3

1. Are you a student?

2. Are you twenty-one?

3. Is your teacher from Britain?

4. What is your email address?

5. Are you a scientist?

6. Are you from a big city?

7. Is your father a businessman?

Exercise 4

My name Duc Tri. I'm thirty-nine years old. I'm from Phu Yen province. I'm single and I'm a freelancer. My father is a mechanic. My mother is a seamstress. I have a younger brother and He live in Ho Chi Minh province with his small family.

Hello Trí,

1. Bài viết của em ổn (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Câu "My name Duc Tri" đang bị sai do thiếu to be "is" nhé => Câu đúng: My name is Duc Tri

3. Câu "He live in Ho Chi Minh ..." đang bị sai ngữ pháp. Chủ ngữ "He" là số ít nên phải dùng động từ "lives" (thêm "s" sau live) => Câu đúng: He lives in Ho Chi Minh...

4. Ho Chi Minh là một thành phố (City) chứ nhỉ. Từ em đang dùng là "province - tỉnh" thì nó lại khác ha (vd: Tuy Hoa City, Phu Yen Province)

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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My name is Duyen. I am a trainer manufacture of semiconductor company. I am from Ben Tre. I live in Dong Nai with husband. We were married in 2017. My family has 6 members: my dad, my mom, my sister, my younger brother, my husband and me.

Thank you for watching!

Hello Duyên,

1. Bài viết của em tốt (đủ thông tin + đủ câu + ngữ pháp đúng)

2. Công việc của em có phải là "Nhà đạo tạo sản xuất cho một công ty bán dẫn" phải không ha => Tham khảo: "Nhà đào tạo cho công ty bán dẫn = manufacturing trainer for a semiconductor company" -> câu tham khảo: I am a manufacturing trainer for a semiconductor company

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3 và chúc Duyên một ngày tốt lành nhé^^

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My name is Tung. I am an IT employee. I'm from Hai Phong city. I am single. My parent are tour guide.

Hello Luân,

1. Bài viết của em okay (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Câu "My parent are tour guide" bị sai hen. (1) bởi vì em đang dùng "are" -> chủ ngữ phải ở dạng số nhiều -> "parent" phải viết thành "parents". (2) "tour guide- hướng dẫn viên du lịch" phải viết lại thành "tour guides - những hướng dẫn viên du lịch" để phù hợp với chủ ngữ số nhiều "my parents - bố mẹ tôi". Câu đúng:

My parents are tour guides .

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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My name is Luan. I'm twenty-three year old. I'm from Binh Dinh. I'm sell furniture. I am single. My family has 4 peoples.

Hello Luân,

1. Bài viết của em okay (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. "I'm twenty - three year old" bị sai từ "year" nhé (số tuổi nhiều nên "years") -> Câu đúng: I'm twenty - three years old

3. "I'm sell furniture" bị sai ngữ pháp nhe. Cô đang hiểu em muốn nói "Tôi buôn bán đồ nội thấ t" (hành động lặp đi lặp lại/ thói quen/ công việc hiện tại -> thì hiện tại đơn: S + V => câu đúng: I sell furniture

4. Danh từ "People " (nghĩa: mọi người) là từ số nhiều rùi nên em không thêm "s" nhé (People: mọi người là từ số nhiều của "Person: một người) => câu đúng: My family has 4 people"

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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I am Mai. I was born in Hanoi and now I live in Gia Lai. I am married. I have two children: a boy and a girl. The boy is in class 5 and the girl is in class 1.

Hello Mai,

1. Bài viết của em tốt (đủ thông tin + đủ câu + đúng ngữ pháp) ^^

2. Tuy nhiên, em xem lại cách dùng từ "class - lớp" hen. Trong câu này nếu muốn nói về "khối lớp" thì dùng từ "grade - khối lớp" sẽ đúng hơn nhé => Tham khảo: The boy is in grade 5 and the girl is in grade 1"

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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my name is vinh. I am a mechanic. I am from Ninh binh city. I am married. my wife is office staff. my son 8 years old in class 3.

Hello Vinh,

1. Bài viết của em okay (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Câu "my wife is office staff." bị thiếu mạo từ "an" nhé => Câu đúng: "My wife is an office staff"

3. Câu "My son 8 years old" đang bị sai do thiếu to be "is" nha => Câu đúng: My son is 8 years old

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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My name is Khoa. I am a driver. I am single. I am from Ho Chi Minh city. My family has 2 members, my dad and my mom. My dad a driver and my mom a housewife.

Hello Khoa,

1. Bài viết của em tạm hen (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Tuy nhiên, em xem lại thông tin trong câu "My family has 2 members: my dad and my mom" hen (ở đây phải là "3 members: my dad, my mom and me" chứ nhỉ ^^

3. Câu "My dad a driver and my mom a housewife" bị sai ngữ pháp nhé em (thiếu to be "is") => Câu đúng phải là: "My dad is a driver and my mom is a housewife"

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em<3

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my name is phuong . I am a studen . I am from quang ninh . I have a boyfriend. my parents works freelance, my sister is a university student.

Hello Phương,

1. Bài viết của em ổn (đủ thông tin + đủ câu)

2. Tuy nhiên câu "My parents works freelance" bị sai ngữ pháp hen. "My parents" là chủ ngữ số nhiều => động từ "work" giữ nguyên => Câu đúng phải là: My parents work freelance.

Em xem lại nhé. Cô cảm ơn em <3

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My name is Linh. I am an English teacher. I am single. I am from Vung Tau city. My family has 4 members: my dad, my mom, my brother and me.