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Students to practise using words from the vocabulary lists (adverbs, verbs, adjectives) across different categories to enhance the story development of a narrative essay.

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1. Read the sample essay attached below.

2. For each segment of the essay, add in TWO words from the vocabulary lists given to you to enhance the content of the essay. Construct a new sentence or sentences that make use of the vocabulary words and post it in the respective segments.

3. You may change the sentence structures in the essay if necessary.

4. Be sure that the vocabulary you used in the essay enhance the development of the story and not distract the readers from the plot.

5. Your sentences should NOT change the content of the essay

6. Please put your FULL NAME at the top of your post

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1. <Type in sentence number 1 with vocabulary word 1>

2. <Type in sentence number 2 with vocabulary word 2>

Eg. The afternoon sun was blazing hot, beating down on the scorched basketball court like it had a personal grudge.

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The afternoon sun was up, beating down on the dirty basketball court like it had a personal grudge. My shirt clung to my back, soaked in sweat, and the air felt like it had paused moving. It was the last Friday before the June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home, turning on the fan, and doing absolutely nothing. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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The morning was a scorching hot weather as the blazing hot sun hits the outdoor football court like a it has a grudge against it.

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1There was a doctor who had a major patient

2The doctor needed to examine for a disease

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1While the doctor was checking his patient he found that there was a drastic tumour in his patients brain

2he felt empathatic for his patient as he had lost his mother to a brain tumouR

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1.The morning breeze was cooling and comfortable the beach beach was cool and welcoming ‘

2.The volcano finally erupted and released debris which crashed and destroyed some of the village houses that were below it

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The sun was just beginning to rise over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the landscape.

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1. That was when Jason came running up to me exhaustedly, panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

2. The afternoon sun was up, intensely heating down on the basketball court like it had a personal grudge.

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1. The afternoon scorching sun was hot and harsh. My shirt stuck to my back with sweat.

2. I was tired from basketball and just wanted to go home. That’s when Jason ran up, panting like crazy. Gasping for air.

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The wind howled through the trees, ripping at the branches like an angry beast, and the shivering leaves scattered across the sidewalk in a frantic dance.

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It was the last Friday before the June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home immediately, turning on the fan, and doing absolutely nothing. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting exhaustedly like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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1. The wind howled through the empty alleyway as shadows crept closer, each step echoing like a warning.

2. Her heartbeat quickened when she spotted the torn photograph on the floor—proof that someone had been in her room.

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The morning sun was up.The morning breeze was cooling and comfortable . I went to the futsal court to play football because of the weather. I went to court immediately after having my breakfast

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1The doctor was gradually running out of time

2 the patient was dwindling

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1. “Bro, I need your help—please,” he said, his skittish face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

2. “What happened?” I asked, half-expecting it to be another childish prank or one of his random dares.

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“Bro, I need your help—please,” he pleaded, his face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

“What happened?” I asked, half-expecting it to be another prank or one of his random dares.

“I forgot my Math file in class. Mr. Lim’s gonna kill me if I don’t hand it in before 3 p.m. He’s still in school but leaving soon. Can you help me go get it? I need to meet my mum at the clinic—urgent appointment.”

I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the hot blazing sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs felt like jelly. I looked at my watch—2:50 p.m.

“Sorry, man,” I said. “I really can’t. I’m super tired.”

Jason stared at me, blinking like he could not believe it.

“Just grab the file and pass it to Mr. Lim’s staffroom pigeonhole. It’s on my desk. Please?”

I shook my head, avoiding his eyes. “Next time, okay?”

He did not say anything. Just nodded, turned, and walked off

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1. It was the last Friday before the June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home quickly, turning on the fan, and doing absolutely nothing.

2.That was when Jason came rushing up to me, panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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1. It was a hot and humid afternoon as I was walking back from school.

2. It was so hot and I was so tired that I trudged all the way back home. When I came home, I quickly showered and jumped on my bed to sleep.

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The afternoon sun beat down mercilessly, turning the basketball court into a furnace. My shirt clung to my back, soaked with sweat, and the air felt thick and still, as if the world had hit pause. It was the last Friday before the June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home, cranking up the fan, and just zoning out. That’s when Jason showed up next to me, panting and red-faced, like he’d raced all the way from the canteen.

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1. My shirt clung to my back, soaked in sticky sweat, and the thick air felt like it had stopped moving.

2. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting heavily like he had ran quickly the whole way from the canteen.

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It was the last Friday before the LONG June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home, turning on the fan, and doing absolutely nothing. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting HEAVILY like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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1. Bro, I need your help,” Jason said, face red like a tomato
He told me he left his Math file in class and had to give it to Mr. Lim before 3 p.m.

2. “I have to meet my mum at the clinic,” he added.
I looked at my watch—2:50. I shook my head in sorrow. “Sorry, man.”

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1. “I need your help to set up the chairs and the umbrellas”I told my bother

He gladly came to help me

2. “Everyone Evacuate village now!” Yelled the village chief Everyone listened and evacuated the area

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1the doctor was conducting surgery while feeling careworn

2 the tumour was ballooned in size and was hard to remove

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The next blazing hotMonday afternoon, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was unearthly. He always joined us for chicken rice and Milo. I found out later from a classmate that Jason got into serious trouble with Mr. Lim. He missed the deadline for the Math project and was penalised twenty percent off his grade. Worse, his mum had gone to the doctor because she was feeling unwell—and it turned out to be something serious. That was why he was in such a rush that

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1. I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I just spent an hour in the sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs were weakly like jelly

2. I shook my head, avoiding his eyes intentionally. “Next time,okay?”

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the afternoon was SCORCHING hot.

While Tom and his friends was playing football in the court like it had a grudge against it

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1. Jason stared at me, blinking quickly like he could not believe it.

2. He did not say anything just nodded turn and walked off frantically.

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1. The next Monday, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was weird. He always joined us for a delicious chicken rice and Milo. I found out later from a classmate that Jason got into serious trouble with Mr. Lim.

2. He missed the deadline for the Math project and was penalised twenty percent off his grade. Worse, his mum had gone to the doctor because she was feeling unwell—and it turned out to be something major. That was why he was in such a rush that day.

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1. The ground erupted beneath them as fire and smoke swallowed the sky, and she finally understood—the prophecy was about her.

2. With a roar of defiance, he charged into the flames, knowing this was the only way to save them all.

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“I’m begging you—please help me,” he pleaded, his face flushed and his bag bouncing against his hip with each hurried step. “What’s going on this time?” I asked, bracing myself for yet another one of his dramatic antics or some ridiculous challenge.

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1. and all I could think about was getting home , turning on the fan exhaustedly , and doing absolutely nothing .

2. that was when jason came running up exhaustedly to me , panting recklessly like he had ran the whole way from the canteen .

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1. I paused abruptly. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the hot sun sweating it out during CCA.

2. My tired legs felt like jelly. I looked at my luxurious watch—2:50 p.m.

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1. The next Monday, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was abnormal.

2. Worse, his mum had gone to the doctor because she was feeling unwell—and it turned out to be something critical.

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I was worried sick when I heard. Not because of the heat or the canteen food, but because I realised I could have helped. It would have taken me ten minutes. I had the strength . I just did not want to be inconvenienced. I chose myself over a friend who trusted me.

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Our CRAMPED classroom was all the way up on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an exhausting hour in the BLAZING sun sweating it out during CCA. My tired legs felt like wobbly jelly.

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The wind HOWLED through the cold scary eerie looking Forrest

Jeremy had to take DRASTIC measures to save his friend from drowning

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1 after an eternity of trying to remove the brain tumour the doctor could finally remove it

2 the patient still had to stay put in the hospital for awhile until they could be realesd

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1. The scorching afternoon sun was up, beating down on to the basketball court like it is very mad.

2. It was the last Friday before the June Holidays, and all that I could just immediately go home and play video games.

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I met my friend over there.We went to ride our bikes. We were playing drills brutally.

After a few minutes i played seriously cuz I didn’t had water

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the tigers roar ERUPTED the stadium

Today Elijah was acting very ABNORMAL

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1. He missed the deadline for the Math project and was penalised twenty percent off his grade unfortunately .

2. The next Monday, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was weird. He always cheerfully joined us for chicken rice and milo.

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1 eventually the patient could go back home

2 beforehand the patient thanked the doctor for saving their life and the doctor felt that he had accomplished a great feeling in the end

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Jason did not hold a rancor. When I finally apologised—deeply apologised—he just shrugged and said, “It’s okay lah.” But I knew it was not

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1. The next Monday, everything felt so different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was very weird.

2. He always joined us for delicious chicken rice and flavourful Milo.

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As the crimson setting sun shone brightly across the horizon, i dragged my feet lethargically home. I was crestfallen with my performance with my math test today.

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Coen was WORRIED SICK about Thomas

Messi UNFORTUNTLY missed his match

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Jason MYSTERIOUSLY did not show up for recess, which was weird. He always EAGERLY joined us for chicken rice.

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during the test, i fell asleep due to the lack of sleep. I stayed up till 12 am because i was playing games

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when i woke up, it was too late . The exam had ended. I didn’t even answer a single question

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i learnt to not play video games till very late

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1. I felt sick when heard. Not because of the heat or the canteen food, but because I realised foolishly I could have helped.

2. I just did not want to be inconvenienced and was slothful .

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1. "Bro, I need your help—please," he said, his face flushed anxiously and his school bag bouncing against his side.

2. I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs felt like jelly. I looked at my watch drowsily —2:50 p.m.d

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“Bro, I need your help—please,” he said, his face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

“What happened?” I asked, half-expecting it to be another prank or one of his random dares.

“I forgot my Math homework that is due today in class. Mr. Lim’s gonna scold me if I don’t hand it in before 3 p.m. He’s still in school but leaving soon. Can you help me go get it? I need to meet my mum at the clinic—urgent appointment.”

I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the scorching sun sweating a lot during CCA. My legs were swollen. I looked at my watch—1.55pm.

“Sorry, man,” I said. “I’m super tired.”

Jason stared at me, blinking like he could want to strangle me as he think that I was lying.

“Just grab the homework and pass it to Mr. Lim’s staffroom pigeonhole. It’s on my desk. Please?”

I shook my head, avoiding his eyes.

He did not say anything. He just turned, and walked off.

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1. I felt frustrated when I heard.

2. I carelessly chose myself over a friend who trusted me.

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1. He did not say anything just nodded turn and walked off frantically.

2. He missed the deadline for the math project and was penalised twenty percent off his grade unfortunately.

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1. Jason stared at me, blinking quickly like he could not believe it.

2. He did not say anything just nodded turn and walked off frantically.

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Since then, I have learned something important: helping someone doesnot always come at the perfect time. Sometimes, it is when we least feel like it. And that is when it counts the most.

I still remember the heat that day, how the sweat drizzled down my back, how cumbrous my bag felt. But more than that, I remember Jason’s face—and the silence that followed my refusal.

And I have promised myself that next time, I will not walk away.

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1. he just shrugged and said, "It's okay lah." But I knew truthfully it was not.

2. Jason did not hold a grudge surprisingly.

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1. I still remember the heat that day, how the sweat ran down my back restlessly , how heavy my bag felt .

2. And I have promised myself that next time, I will not walk away selflessly.