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Boom

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RING,RING the alarm cli

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It was a lovely sunday morning.I am very excited to go to Tampines park.
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"Yahoo!" I was going to the shopping mall to buy hinese N

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"Yay!"exclaimed Rose. Rose and her famliy were going to sweet home to buy some chinese new year goods ( You might wish to include the word " department store."

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"Woohoo!"Ruby was exited as it was time to go to the mall.Ruby and her parents got into the car and drove to the mall.The sun shone brightly as it was a sunny day.Ruby and her parents got out of the car and went into the mall."Mom can we go to the toy shop?" ( Continue)

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The brilliant morning sun is rays shone brighty in the  clear blue sky. Jeanette's family went to the shopping mall .

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Vrom, Vrom Annie you are so late.Come on lets get going

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OMG! I am (T)  very bore. So my parents wanted to see the SALE in town. ( Go for the sale ) When we reach there were a lot of  pots there sale like lol !. So we started to rush insind the shopping centre to buy lol pots. ( Watch your Tense and Spelling)

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GROUP R.Jatin ,Rene Ang

'' RING,RING,RING.''The alarm clock rang.''YAY!" its finally Saturday'' shouted Jessica.She quickly bathed and

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"Hooray!" We are going to the shopping mall! (   ) I  looked out of my window to check the weather, it was shining gloriously. The air was crisp.''It was (is) the perfect time to go shopping!"I yelled.We took the train to get to the shopping mall.At the

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WOW! It is a sunnyday There is so many pots and pans in this shopping centre.

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"Horray!" We are going to Sweet Home to buy some stuff for Chinese New Year! "Sweet Home has sale." said dad cheerfully.All of us rushed to Sweet Home!There was a crowd at Sweet Home. Shanice went to Sweet Home to. ( Do note the relevance of the characters)

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Yahoo! It was time to go to the Ikea.I got ready to go. Vroom,vroom!The car engine started / roared to life.The Yin family packed into the car.Once we were there at Ikea ,

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Sight & Sound in a Mall
Crowded Mall / Lift packed like sardines
Smell aroma of food wafting in the air
Lots of shops having sale
Decorations - bringing out the festive mood
Hear the drums of the Lion Dancers in the distance...